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| "Lies, Deception, and a Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] | Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 19:51 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Tina. You really are evil! I love it though. Can't wait for more! | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i loved chap. 13&14! i cracked up at the 'shuddered involuntary' 'feelings' hehehe
but the wedding...i thought that they had decided to call it off? no? or am confusing this with one of your other fics? well n e who..LOVE IT! more! me want more! | Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 13:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the weirdest thing has been happening, for some reason, when i log on to see what authors have updated, and whatnot, i ALWAYS seem to miss your's. and since i know you're SOOOO good with updates, i finally did a search for you. imagine my shock *gasp* when i realized you updated THREE chapters, and i had no clue...urgh, frustration definitely settled in. Well...i'm bak, and that's all i have to say on that subject. THAT was a pretty funny two last chapters, with the dream and all. I thought it was pretty cool to throw in Robert Frost's poem. In fact, when you first announced that part about the paths, it was the first thing that popped into my brain. I love that poem so much...'and it made all the difference' LOL. anyways, job well-done, and btw: Yin and Yang is like *this close* to being updated...if you update before i do, you MUST advertise it, and then ppl will review, and then i'll feel compelled to post sooner. LOL, JP, you don't really HAVE to, although i'd love you forever if you did!!!! =P. great chapter, and i'm looking forward to an even greater update. | Reviewed By: hana17 On: November 16, 2002 10:58 EST
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wedding? what wedding? ah!!!! | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 01:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Well no matter! like i've been saying! I LUV YOUR STORY!! sooo good...gimme more...and get better soon! | Reviewed By: Prince Trunks On: November 15, 2002 23:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Eh with so many V/B fics I don't know what to put for the orginality. Can't wait for the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um let's see what rating do I give you this time ... (seeing as how MM NEVER told me about the new chapters because you're one of my favorite authors [actually, you're my favorite lemon writer!] and I unfortunately can't give you 20's!) ... are all 10's good enough?? *lol*
Oh and I have some important things to say ... he's bi!?!?!? *laughingmyassoffsohardandloudthattheneighborsthinkI'minsaneandarethreateningtocallthelooneybinonmesothatImightneverread/writefanfictioneveragainthebastards!* HehHeh. I felt SO sorry for Vegeta!! *sniff* Damn dog!!
*blinks* That dream was AWEsome!!! (Yes, it was weird but not as weird as mine which are weird stupid and yours are weird cool!) I just KNEW that something to be treasured was down the scary looking path--kind of like what I used to think of Vegeta before he says the famous, "Who's that cute girl?" line. *heh* That statue was *drools (and is reminded of Ariel's statue of HER prince who PALES in comparison to Bulma's Prince Vegeta!!)* ... beautiful! *sniff* And that room with the pillows and veils and everything that happened ... WOW!!! The color of love *sniff sniff*
Hm...Jasmine,silk,veils,colors, and ... a sitar playing in the background?? I wonder ...
**For all those that DON'T want to be spoiled incase(by some twist of fate) my predictions are correct... do NOT read the next paragraph!!**
...is Vegeta in India and dreaming right along with her? Is this a "bonding" type of psychic connection thing? I mean ... even in her dream he flies. But then you mention "appearances can be deceiving." Well, I've decided that Vegeta better have had (or WILL have, hinthint) a dream as well. I mean, Bulma shouldn't be the ONLY one to suffer--yes, she lied but HE ran!! Ahhh!! (the pain, oh, the pain!) How DARE you toy with my mind like this! *lol* It's fun, isn't it??
Well, thanks again for a wonderful read!! Don't ever stop!! *lol* ^_~
PS Thanks for the sweet sweet sweet reviews!! You're SO nice!! ^_^
PPS *to all the "flamers"* You all should meet a friend of mine. *a woman with long, wild green hair and wearing a long green dress with waist-high slits on each side floats down from above* This is YokazeJade.(my alter-go from my DBZ RPGing days) Jade, meet the flamers! *the woman smirks, a green aura burns around her, pulls her arms to her side, and a green Ki ball forms in her palms*
Have fun!! >;) | Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who would flam this anyway?? sry but i forgot to put the ratings..... GREAT WORK!!!!!!
10-stle of wrting~I liked ya style! lots O flash backs and reams!!
10-spelling/grammer~ur spelling and grammar RULZ!! great work!
9-originality~well I've read a bazillion B/V stories and so I gave it a 9 but I still thuoght it was AWSOME!!
10-enjoyment!~ IT WS AN AWSOME READ! very interesting, cant wait for more!
OVERALL ~~~~10 !!!! yeah great work!~Dawn Dusk ^-^ | Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 21:37 EST
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wow! great work I really love this story! I can't wait to see the rest of it. When I read the chappie where she dreamed she had it with Yamcha *shudders* keep it up! B/V (!!)~Dawn Dusk ^____^ | Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 21:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwww. poor bulma. She just wanted to help the baby!! :(
CONTINUE!!
GREAT CHAPTER!! | Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 11:01 EST
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flamers? who in their right mind would flame this? it's an awesome story...grrr...***grabs big stick and waves it threateningly*** all flamers, get a life, it's just a story and, I hate to break it to you, but whatever it is in the story that you're flaming, it isn't real.
**coughs**
But I STILLL LIKE THE STORY!!!!! it's so much fun to read...of course, I lose myself in every story I read | Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 20:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! YAMCHS'S GONE!! AND SHE HAS HIS STUPID RING!! :D
CONTINUE!!
What's gonna happen??
What is Vegeta thinking??
I WANNA KNOW!!
Oh and to those flamers who flame you, TELL THEM TO SUCK MY NONE EXISTING DICK!! IF YOU ARE GOING TO FLAME, FLAME THE STORY CONTRUSTIVELY AND NOT THE PERSON!!! SHITHEAD!!! *blows rasberry* | Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 02:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi nice fic and nice lusty, sex scenes. *shudders and whimpers at the scene of Yam-baka humping Veggie's leg* *sniffles* Poor Bulma.....hmmm maybe you can Yamucha have an 'accident'. *evil smirk* This fic vivid, descriptive and best of all my fave couple B/V!! Great Job, more please ^_~. Bura-chan
**Official glomper of Bardock** | Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 14:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
chapter 11: I NEVER IN MY WILDEST IMAGININGS SAW THE GAY THING COMING! I WAS ROLLING!!! STILL AM! Well i really like chapter 12, sooo sad...poor bulma! well good riddence to bad rubbis (that's for yamcha)hehe more! | Reviewed By: Legana On: November 13, 2002 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.....you're such a great writer....
men that was sad....though Bulma deserved it, well kindof...hope veggie comes home..
very curious about the naxt chapter!
hehe yamcha biseksual, LOL. just like me, only I am a girl =)
well...yamcha is almost a girl..seeing the wuss that he is. hehe.
love your writing. | | Pages (9): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 › » ] |
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