| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Akurei13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 00:40 CDT
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Is that the end? Or is there more? I certainly hope so, this story is so good. |
Reviewed By: shaotome On: April 20, 2003 10:48 CDT
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i'm glad that they worked everything out. i wonder what will happen with schuldig & aya. can't wait til next chap, hurry. |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 04:16 CDT
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Geeez, i told ya, English's not my first language... what are those things called, then? maybe "mobile clock"? ;_; I think, I'll change it into "clock"... no idea, if that's better... so what's the difference between watch and clock ;_;?
Anyway, I'm sorry, ne... oh and I think, that was my first flame *_* YAY! |
Reviewed By: GoD~Goddess of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:16 CDT
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uhmm, about my earlier comment, the one about the watch never came in, ::mutters about stupid six year old computer:: but yeah, the watch is in episode... eighteen! but yeah, just thought i might want to redeem myself before making an even bigger fool of thy self. -.- |
Reviewed By: GoD~Goddess of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:11 CDT
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I must say, better, but you didnt mention anything about Youji having a watch in the eighteen hundreds but there's nothing i can do about your really hilarious, under rated, screwed up fic... uhh.. that didnt mean to be an insult, but you gotta admit it seems screwed up kinda. but oh well, continue! |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 18:55 CDT
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I'm sorry. I just wanted to be your 100th reviewer! *L* But wai! I've got a lot of catching up to do with this fic. Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: katzchen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 08:12 CDT
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Do finish the Aya Shuldig story, it's interesting. a pairing i've never thought of. Ooo, and the Yohji - Ran story is coming along quite nicely, though i would have expected Brad and Asuka to fight him over Ran when they were discovered. All in all tho, good update! |
Reviewed By: nari On: April 12, 2003 06:02 CDT
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a damn good fic i tell U. |
Reviewed By: GoD~Goddess of Death (too lazy to sign in) On: April 09, 2003 16:54 CDT
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You are you evil, you know that, right? leaving it there, I think that Youji should have over heard that, ^^; but yeah, Brad does know that Ran is a guy, right? |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 15:09 CDT
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Won't Crawford be in for a rude awakening if he attempts to rape Ran. ^__^ Well all good things must come to an end ... just tell yourself ... sequel ... sequel. :) |
Reviewed By: Laguna chan On: April 09, 2003 07:38 CDT
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is next chap gonna be brad/ran?
gonna ended soon? that soooooo sad ;-;
what heppen to aya and schu? |
Reviewed By: shaotome On: April 08, 2003 20:01 CDT
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awww, i hope everything is fine between them. and i think it sooo said that this story is going to end. but still, its one of the best fics i ever read. can't wait to find out whats going to happen, ja! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 19:20 CDT
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^_^ Wow! I've been away for a while and you've already updated ^o^ YAY!! Okay, chapter 17 was quite sad and for some reasons it makes sense if you pair Schuldig with Aya ^_^ I don't mind if you don't like Ken so much, at least you've married him off to Yuriko ^_^ and I hope the best for Schuldig and Aya's relationship. As for the next chapter Aya was really getting teary-eyed -_- Hmmm... so he'd confessed and Youji doesn't mind ^_^ I wonder what will happen to their relationship. Okay the new chapter was quite a little scary to read at first, because of Asuka's jealousy there and kidnapping poor Ran.
Even though I've noticed a few mistakes in your work, I like the story ^_^
Please continue this fic soon ^_^. |
Reviewed By: katzchen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 08:36 CDT
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Oh lord. poor Aya, he's so confused. And Asuka is a bitch. Grr.
You're using quotation marks the normal way now! yay! I didn't really mind when it was wierd, but it's easier to read this way. Thank you for the update, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 22:12 CDT
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*blinks* wow that was strange. crawford/asuka now that's scary...
i guess i've accepted that you just don't write long chapters *big sigh* it's such a tease when you onle write like 5 paragraphs worth... i'd rather you put off the post and give us a nice hefty sized chapter.
but anyway, now the big romantic moment comes! well... after ran gets away from crawford... will they find out aya is actually ran?? or will yohji stop them in time???
i challenge you:
Do all of the scene with yohji chasing after ran, and the entirety of the hotel room in one chapter.
Mara |
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