| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] |
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Reviewed By: Merigold On: April 07, 2003 21:21 CDT
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“Hmmm…. Want me to rape her for you?”
Asuka cheered. “Really?!? Oh, thank you sooooooo much!!!!”
LOL that's kinda creepy! Keep writin' ^^ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 19:55 CDT
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Awww, poor Ran! Yohji's teasing was so cute! I guess he's gonna have no choice very soon but to let Ran know that he knows...if it doesn't come out before then with the whole Crawford/Asuka thing.
Of course, there are the loose ends with Aya and Schu, too. |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 14:06 CST
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Waaaaaaaa! I'm SO sorry!!! But there won't be a new chapter, this weekend... Well, I've got the thing finished, but my comp is messing up everything!!! I'm very sorry, as soon, as I fixed it, I'll update, ok?? *runs away, sobbing and hides in a corner* |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 17:51 CST
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Man, poor Aya! What a slap in the face to find Ken married to someone else! I wasn't expecting that!
And Aya's revelation to Yohji was sweet, even if he thinks Yohji didn't hear him. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 14:04 CST
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yay! a new chapter! but again... longer! *whines* your chapters are too short and your fic is so good! it's horrible to tease us like this! please write longer chapters! |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2003 03:22 CST
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Well that's one way to take out the Ken factor. Although I must confess I was surprised it was just an Aya-Ken-Schu chapter, especially given the bombshell in chapter 16.
Very nice. Aya was obviously a dumbbell for not letting Ken know her plans ahead of time. Ken is a dumbbell for not checking out the facts (he could have turned up for the wedding and found out the truth).
Schu wasn't too dastardly in this part. But get back to Yoji and Ran soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: saiyaski On: March 27, 2003 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how kawaii is that have you ever considred making your own novel? you should really think about it, ne? well keep up the good work, ja!!! |
Reviewed By: OpusAnna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2003 17:11 CST
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I love how you set things up in this story. Crossdressing Aya, hehe. Now get that next part out already, things were just starting to get good! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: jahan On: March 24, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
simply wounderful |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 15:20 CST
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Just what is it about Aya-chan that fascinates Schuldig? Okay you don't like Ken and he's not going to get her ultimately, but he should still turn up somewhere in this. Even if you want to write him as an idiot and have Aya-chan 'see the light'. ^__^
Poor Ran, Yoji should tell him that he knows Ran is a guy and put the guy out of his misery.
I'm still enjoying this fic. Hope you post more soon. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 11:32 CST
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good chapter, but wai! so short... and you have to end it right there... i want to see yohji's reaction *pouts fiercely* i am _so_ not amused. you better start coming out with more chapters or else... i'll sick all the rabid weiss fangirls on you! >. |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 21:06 CST
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^_^ Hey! You've updated!!! Sorry, I couldn't read it directly when you'd posted those two last chapters. Man, the chapter were Ran was bathing XP Youji knows?!!! That part was kinda little steamy and stuff, but I like it ^_^ He's taking revenge? A sweet one or a very very painful one?? The last chapter was HER?!! Gee... she is kinda scary. I've guessed the wrong person -_-' ::cries in a corner:: I've guessed wrong!!
The last chapter was kinda short too -_-' darn! But anyways, I'm glad you've updated ^_^ I love the fic, even if it really gets a little steamy... AND Schuldig is scaring me for some reasons. Poor Aya ;_;. Someone save her!!! Anyways, keep it up!! Nice work!! |
Reviewed By: Sara-chan On: March 17, 2003 08:28 CST
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you update!I'm so glad to see a new chapter.
(Cheers madly) |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 18:21 CST
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AARGH! Shoulda KNOWN it would be Neu/Asuka. Got that as soon as her hair color was mentioned in this chapter, don't know why I didn't pick up on it before.
Schuldig is CRACKING ME UP here. |
Reviewed By: Pegah On: March 12, 2003 08:47 CST
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I love this fic and and I love you for writing it.
can't wait to see what's coming next!
oh and by the way chapter 14 was damn good!
didn't expect that!!!! |
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