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| "What a mess" Reviews/Comments [ 115 ] | | Pages (8): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 > » ] | Reviewed By: Shinigami On: February 08, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*winces* Ack! I almost pity Crawfish! I hope it's not Nagi! Hm, prehaps Asuka/Neu? Or Maki?... | Reviewed By: Ganymede10 On: February 09, 2003 12:32 CST
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Well, my guess is Sakura. Is it her?
Don't stop here! Continue! | Reviewed By: Randi On: February 09, 2003 15:35 CST
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oh, I need more this is good *^_^* It's my fav fic, so maybe if I bribe you with chocolates you will write more? Cookies perhaps? I wanna hear the mystery person tell Aya about "Youji's old escapades" ::sniffles:: I will just have to wait. | Reviewed By: pink bunny On: February 03, 2003 00:38 CST
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Yes! You actually have Schu's eye color right! They are blue, but most people say they are green. They look green sometimes, but they're BLUE! Hehe...anyway, another good chapter! Schu is such a know-it-all. Good for Aya for smacking him. I hope Schu doesn't hurt her for it. ;_; Is Ran going to start feeling anxious and worried because his secret will be found out? He can't keep it forever...I think Yohji already knows, but I still wonder what his reaction will be, and what Ran's reaction will be to his reaction! ..does Ran know two boys can be together in that way? Does he even suspect that might happen? *squeals* I need to read more! @_@ | Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 04:34 CST
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*sigh* ok, here comes the "Schuldig-has-green-eyes-fraction" *damn, why didn't I just ignore it and wrote green *sigh* I was convinced, they were green, till I got here: http://www.thenoodlebowl.com/schuldig/fandom.html#fannon
so.....they ARE blue... or maybe it's just something with my eyes...-_-° oh and I could swear, I wrote "seven eyes" and not "seven pairs of eyes" -_- youji has 2, omi has 2, ran has 2 and farfie has one. now go and count again... and, yes, the night after the wedding WILL be interesting XD. And I haven't forgotten, that Aya is engaged, don't worry.. XD. | Reviewed By: Shinigami On: February 01, 2003 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hold on a sec! I haven't seen the anime, and I cannot find any mention of the manga translated, and cannot find them in the local comic shops. Believe me, I have tried, but no luck... Kuso! *curses out loud into Japanese* Gomen nasai. Anyway, I thought they were green, Forsaken's site says they are jade green in the anime and dark green in the manga. So either Forsaken made a mistake or the anime artists screwed up...*grins at the scene with Aya and Schuldich* Way to go, Aya! *whoops and cheers* Schu, Aya might be a crossdresser, but she happens to be engaged to someone else... So Jei/Farfie's in this, along with Omi and Schu... Who else? *muses* Hold on, seven pairs of eyes looked at Aya when she walked in the room after leaving Schu with a brusied cheek... *smirks* I know, I know I'm evil, but Schu deserves it after acting like a know-it-all and hitting on her...Anyway, 7 pairs of eyes, there's Omiitchi, Yotan, Ran and Jei. So that leaves 3 people unccounted for. Hm, prehaps Ken, Nagi and Brad? Pls bring in Schreient. Cuz I so want to see Neu/Asuka in this! So there's a possiblity that Yotan knows about Ran's being a guy, eh? *winces* The wedding night should be interesting! Have someone ever explained to Ran about the birds and the bees?*snickering* Damn! Schuldich's a telepath? I thought this was an althernate universe fanfic, I know this is the 1800s and all, but yet... | Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Hey! I love it! Very cute! And sweet!
A ten for your style, juist love the flow of the story ^_^
A ten for grammar, I didn't notice any mistakes, if there is -_- I'm too captured in your story.
A ten for creativity, ^_^ Like I said, it's cute, I like that one when they're acting so playfully...
I wonder who's the taller guy... or man. Ken ? or Brad ?
Please update soon! Keep it up!! | Reviewed By: olive On: January 27, 2003 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey we still read this and its a trip, don't stop or the curiosity will kill me, and I've already used too many lives to count. | Reviewed By: olive On: January 27, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey we still read this and its a trip, don't stop or the curiosity will kill me, and I've already used too many lives to count. | Reviewed By: Sylph On: January 27, 2003 01:37 CST
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Schu in here! I love his entrance. Though I prefer him with green eyes (like in the manga). I wanna see how Ran will talk himself out of this one. He's GOT to realize that Youji isn't a baka by now...right? Well...go make more mess. This is great! | Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 22:09 CST
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Yep still reading. Now the last bit had me pondering but I think I know who it may be. Hee. I wish Aya would just let Yohji know about his little secret soon. I mean of course Yohji knows (or does he not?), he cant be that much of a baka. Anyway thanks for the update. | Reviewed By: tmelange On: January 26, 2003 15:04 CST
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I'm still reading! The story is very interesting. I'm enjoying it much. The only thing I'm unclear on is how *Aya* thinks he can continue deceiving Kudoh. Shouldn't Aya be very worried about the upcoming wedding? I mean, sooner or later (probably sooner) Kudoh WILL find out... | Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 26, 2003 13:05 CST
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Just saw your response saying it wasn't Omi....could it be Schuldig?? | Reviewed By: pink bunny On: January 26, 2003 13:03 CST
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Ah, who was that at the end? Takatori? Wonder where Yohji and Aya were... Hmm, could Yohji's friends be Omi and/or Ken? *ponders* I can't wait 'till Ran finds out Yohji knows he's a man! *grin* | Reviewed By: Shinigami On: January 26, 2003 10:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes widen* Sounds like Yotan's mystery friend knows Ran's a X-dresser! I'm confused, I cannot find any hints that Yotan knows about 'Aya' being Ran! If there are any, pls point them out to me! And I dunno on the man with blue eyes. Only ones I know with blue eyes are Omi and Nagi, and the last time I checked Ran was taller than them! | | Pages (8): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 > » ] |
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