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| "Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] | Title: Shadow Play
Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 15:11 CDT
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I've said it before, and I'll say it again... I love you so much. *tackle glomps her Neko-koi* | Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 11:17 CDT
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*______* I really loved this story...and I know quite a few people loved it, as well! You're such a fanastic writer, and whenever I read your stories, they immediately become one of my favorites!!! Thank you for such a great story, as always, and I'm looking forward to more updates from you on this arc and the others!!! | Reviewed By: Peeshee On: September 04, 2003 14:43 CDT
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The best weiss fic I've read.I know I'll re read it again and again, and yet th end of it is some how unsufficient, cause kakyo, ken, Omi and Nagi's end remains in the dark. | Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2003 00:54 CDT
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*growls at Nickythetokyoboy* you're really starting to ge ton my nerves pal. *unsheeths Lionheart and stands ready to protect Omni-sama's fiancee* *growls one more time, just for affects*
*sighs* business out of the way, *tries to hold back tears* i haven't even gotten close to being half-way through with the second chapter of 'Beginnings' and it's already heart breaking. aren't they ever going to get any peace and happiness?
and i have another question--IF you don't explain it all in this series... *grins* are you going to make a sequel--about the war and what will happen to all of them then? it would so horrible of you to just leave us hanging like that, i personally have grown quite attached to these characters and this fic, i want to see this monster of a novel all the way through... can you? *hopeful gaze* | Reviewed By: Suman devy On: August 31, 2003 12:33 CDT
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Maaa! that was great although the last chapter was a little sad. Poor Nagi(snif) | Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read a lot of fic in my day, but truly, this is one of the best. There really aren't enough words of praise for this masterpiece you've created, but I'll do my best. You should be very, very proud of yourself for writing more than 1,000 pages of coherent, multifaceted, proofread, entertaining work.
This last chapter seemed a little disjointed, especially the lack of transition between Kikyou's machinations and the visit to the Fujimiya home. I kept expecting there to be some sort of link, but there was no mention of the Captain's gift. I also was hoping to see the conversation between Shuuichi and Aya. I assume that these will be saved for the next fic set in this AU. Tying up loose ends is difficult and although it was a little rough getting jostled in-between some of the scenes, all the unresolved plot threads are tied well enough for you to move on to your next weaving... even the one about the bet between Yohji and Schuldig that I had forgotten completely about ^^;;.
Going back a chapter or two... I felt you handled the battle scenes well, with a minimum of confusion and a pleasing amount of tension. I'm always worried about the 'big climactic scene' living up to the great writing that's led me there. You didn't disappoint.
Overall, you've played with canon ideas and made them your own, revisiting stale conventions and making them interesting again with admirable skill. Ken's transformation and Omi's hidden talent were good surprises, fitting with their characters and melding them with the Bound-mythology you've created. It seems Botan's daughter has taken the place of Aya-chan in the anime, at least for the upcoming fic; and that key difference should make the continuing story all the more unique and unpredictable. I could go on, and to pay you back for all the loving work you've put into this fic, I should... but I'll stop here and say: You've got talent.
Doumo arigatou gozaimashita for an excellent read. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. | Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy On: August 19, 2003 01:27 CDT
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What the hell is that!! * growls shaking the computer screen* YOU!!! Me and you are gonna fight, oh yes * glare* Yneed to write MORE! MORE!!!! * shakes her* Or I'll send the cross dressing farfs and They'll be equiped with hot tea!!! AHAHAHAAHA!!! TAKE THAT!!! * pokes her with a tea kettle* AH!! So you have to update, yup, or i'll hunt you down...thats right..your writting is my addiction....and I need * twitch* more..*twicth* ok...I think I'm done now......... -.-,,, | Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 13:26 CDT
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Awwwwwwww it's ending! I've been following this since the beginning and now that it's almost over, I think I'm gonna cry! Oh... are Ken and Farfie gonna end up a thing? It'd be so cute! | Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 00:57 CDT
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*nuzzles fiancee Neko-chan* You write such lovely fight scenes filled with such lovely gore and blood. You really ARE the one for me... *nuzzle nuzzle*
*stops short and glares at Nickythetokyoboy* You will NOT hurt my Neko-koi!! No boiling water! No evil cross-dressing Farfies! No pain to my beloved. Even think about harming her and I'll sic heavily armed bishounen on you! I have quite a harem, after all. Your army of Farfies will be nothing compaired to my mighty forces. *laughs evily and pulls Neko-chan closer out of possessive protective-ness...oddly, like bound!Youji...o_O* | Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy On: August 09, 2003 10:39 CDT
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YAY!! * hugggles* I'm so happy!! * gives another huge* i had worries about how you would end thats scene, and none were close to what i had read. But I'm so happy! Athough now i have to pace around my house waiting for the next, but i promise to keep the crossdressing farfs away from you. ^-^ So I trust you to update soon, or i might have to do somthing about it.... | Reviewed By: miaka_4 On: August 06, 2003 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best weiss kreuz fic ever...and yohji and aya too!!!...ohmigod...u are sooo good and i luv how you build up suspense and everything...you are a great writer ... all ur stories are great!!...ur the best!!...i kinda hoping that this story wont end but its not possible at all eh....hehehe...eniwei...keep up the good work and hope to see more of your talent! | Reviewed By: Sandy On: August 06, 2003 06:46 CDT
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I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how wonderful I think Shadows is. It is so great! You are an amazing author. Everyday I come home from work and check to see if there is any new updates from “ nekojita chan”, be it Shadows, your Violet Eyes series, or any of your other shorts. I am both happy and sad to know Shadows is almost done. I am hoping that after a break, you decide to continue with the hints you have given throughout and continue it as a series or sequel. Thank you for hours of enjoyment. You really have great story lines. | Reviewed By: sandy On: August 06, 2003 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how wonderful I think Shadows is. It is so great! You are an amazing author. Everyday I come home from work and check to see if there is any new updates from “ nekojita chan”, be it Shadows, your Violet Eyes series, or any of your other shorts. I am both happy and sad to know Shadows is almost done. I am hoping that after a break, you decide to continue with the hints you have given throughout and continue it as a series or sequel. Thank you for hours of enjoyment. You really have great story lines. | Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 01:01 CDT
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So, when are you and I going to tye the knot, Neko-chan? My resolve to marry you has increased after that lovely bit of writing. Oh, how I cheered at Yohji's punishment for Masafumi! Mmmm... And Ken becoming a bound! Brilliant! And crazy psycho Jei! And- Oh, just everything! It all makes me squeal with joy and do happy dances!! Dear GOD I love you!!! *glomps and huggles tightly* X3 | Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 23:39 CDT
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AAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! YOU!!! I'M GONNA KILL YOU!!!!! * punches her and kicks her and sends a horde of rabid cross dressing Farfs after her* Oh, oh we're gonna fight, and ya know what? YA KNOW WHAT! ......your gonna win....* sobs* I just can't get myself to hurt you * sniffle* because then * sniff* I wouldn't have you wonderful stories to fawn over and obsess over... So instead, I'll force feed you boiling water, yup you heard me. Boiling water, and laugh, maniacally * starts to laugh* I'll laugh and taunt you and your "cat's tongue* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! .......So you better update this, or I'll track you down...oh yes, and not only will I bring my flock of rabid cross dressing Farfs, they be carrying kettles of boiling water * glare* | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] |
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