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| "Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] | Reviewed By: Ale On: July 31, 2003 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is WONDERFUL!! I can't wait for it to finish... you do everyone's charachter wonderfully and it's very refreshing because everything's so well written.
Can't Wait for more! Good Luck! | Reviewed By: soxykitty On: July 31, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really one of the most creative and well written fics I've read. I'm enjoying it emensely and please update soon. You did everyones character very well and I can't wait till the next chapter. | Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 18:59 CDT
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*sniffs* *lip trembles* this is getting so sad!!! i don't want any of them to die!!!!! please, PLEASE!!!! don't dissappoint me and kill any of them--i'll be in tears and depressed for a week! i knew you were going to make the whole staff of the Koneko want to go, damn good thing you only made two of 'em go! but still!! *worried glance* i hope everyone makes it out of this ok!!
i almost want to say that, with the way you write you'd never kill your characters, but then i might jinx myself and you will end up killing them! please don't. please???? *begs you with the biggest, wateriest (is that a word?) most innocent (couldn't think of an 'est' word for that one) puppy-dog eyes imagionable* | Reviewed By: Mahtab On: July 25, 2003 03:14 CDT
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Woo. the last few chapters were breath taking! | Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 20:17 CDT
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ok, since i didn't actually finish reading this last chapter before i posted my last review (i just wanted to be the 100th reviewer *grins*) i'll review properly now. =^_^=
heh... of course that is if i can find anything suitable to say... *thinks* *frowns*
ok, not really, but i did want to voice how well you write your 'secondary characters' such as Lady Meara--i like her a lot--and Botan, Cass, and everyone else--god you do such an amazing job at developing yours and the other characters! wonderful--just wonderful! =^_~= | Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2003 19:36 CDT
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AHHH--YOU UPDATED!!!!!! *glomps you and huggles you to death* uh-er--sorry....
*does happy dance* i'm so excited you update--hey that rhymed... anyway, i'm shaking i'm so nervous about the upcoming 'battle' i hope everyone makes it out unscathed--except for all the asses who hurt poor Aya-kun! *sighs* i love you--you're such an outstanding artist!!! more soon, please! | Reviewed By: Kurai On: July 17, 2003 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..WOW..I've just read the first 2 chapters, but its very very good! I'll be back to read the rest ... though I don't know when I'll ever finish it... *so very long, I love long running stories* My friend loved it so much so I decided to read it too (I haven't really watched or read Weiss Kreuz so I don't really read those fics, but I intend to, they are just way to HOT to not watch) This story is really very good, I dont want to stop reading now, but I have to sleep cause I have to get up early tomorrow ... or today. *its 3am* Well, good night! -__-Zzzz
*oh and don't think I gave the rating as All 10 all the time, I think this is the first time I've giving 10 on all 5 of them, so really, I really like this, and its really written very well* | Reviewed By: ~kyou On: July 16, 2003 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, well, I was to send you a nicely long letter about the whole Violet Eyes arc incident, and then maybe another about this great fic, but hey, I'm lazy. So for now, I just wanted to say I LOVE this fic. I can't find flaws in it, and I love the way you've portrayed all the charas here. I love this fic's Jei! Also the story. Hope you keep posting!! | Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:01 CDT
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*claps* *bows and stands up next to Omni-sama* i'm right there with you my friend--if you hadn't already claimed this wonderful artist--i'd have taken her already! er--well that, and i'm not all that straight and i'm a guy... =^_^=
i don't know what to say--this fic has been the most outstanding, emotional and action-filled peice of ART i have ever seen in my life!!!! it's absolutely marvelous, but, then again, i always say that.... there aren't words to describe the magnificence of this wonderful fiction--you shall be remembered for all time!
*bows to 'Jita-chan, then blows kiss and winks* | Reviewed By: red On: July 11, 2003 18:06 CDT
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Me like. Me like very much!! | Reviewed By: Lachesis [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, after my ridiculously long previous review, I leave town for a couple weeks and come back to find THIS. Oooh! So great! Virtually everything that I hoped to see after finishing _bargains_ was here. I'm still quite delirious with happiness right now. ^_^
I'm glad to see SchuSchu returning to his utterly charming, look-at-how-much-of-an-asshole-i-am personality. ^_^ Aya's incessant biting gave me a fit of the giggles. Nasty little kage isn't he? So so cute, and so pretty!
I usually don't read PWPs unless they have some other redeeming quality, so you can tell that I'm not a rabid lemon fan. I prefer to take citrus when it's woven into an engaging plot.
But...wow. This is just...well...hot.
From Aya and Yohji's alternately cute and beautifully written sexcapades throughout to Masato and Schuldig's utterly screwy (no pun intended) strangely hilarious and very very sexy battle between bedsheets (look at me! i know alliteration!), just...i love you!
This review is blatantly not very constructive, but I'm on a high from this chapter, and the fic in general. I'm blaming my overdose of energy, giggles, warm and fuzzy feelings, and tendency to insert frenetic, nonsensical statements in the middle sentences on you. I'll try to get something more coherent and constructive in come next chapter.
There's only one thing running through my empty little head right now:
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! | Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 21:57 CDT
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Guess Cassandra was right, Schu DID meet his match!
As for the joining between Aya and Yohji this time around - WOW. That was incredibly...well, for lack of better words, HOT. Holy cow.
I am eager to see how the switching of the sphere plan pans out, as the time for its implementation is fast approaching.
Aya's and Nagi's casual observation that Masato and Schu might be mates was both apt and humorous. I'm glad Yohji is finding it in his heart to forgive Schu.
And finally Omi and Nagi get "a little" - heh. The two of them are simply adorable, even though they have so much responsibility on their shoulders.
I bow down to your muse for continuing to imbue the story with so many facets, and on a dang regular basis, too! | Reviewed By: Chanchan On: June 29, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that I am enjoying reading your reviews as much as reading your stories. I have been telling anyone who asks about the superb quality of your writing and the addictiveness. If I don't do anything else, I check for updates everyday.
I was glad to see Sch and Masato finally mated. They were beginning to piss me off to no end. It was well worth the wait. I had to turn up the fan after reading that chapter.
To anyone who has not read any of your other fics, one question...WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?
Keep up the outstanding work. I look forward to your next installment. Just try not to make it too long. Shadows is the only thing that will take me away from my Gackt obsession.^_^ | Reviewed By: Scarlet Longbottom On: June 29, 2003 16:37 CDT
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The ending was a bit wierd, if not a bit off topic (whatever that happened to be). The whole secret-admirer thing has me a bit intrigued. All evidence pionts to Kikyo and that handsom head of his, but you can always hope fore a twist, ne? | Reviewed By: Omni-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 02:51 CDT
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*clears throat* Neko-chan... I...have something very important to ask you... *blushing, gets down on one knee and pulls out a black velvet ring box* Will you....marry me? *opens box to reveal white gold ring with a sparkly diamond that has a pattern of rubies and emeralds to each side*
I'm sorry... I just had to ask... And, since I really won't be able to provide the services of a husband/wife (since I'm a very straight woman...sigh), I will give you, my esteemed bride, full access to my bishounen harem. Yes, I love you THAT much. *usually very possessive of her bishounen* | | Pages (10): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 > » ] |
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