| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sess and Inu are the only ones left? No wonder Rin was so sad.
"Right. Like you know how to work the microwave."
Hee!
Very nice touch that Inuyasha feels glad to have Tetsusaiga back.
I think Sesshoumaru might have his own ideas about where Toukijin ought be kept.
How often do primarily-lemon 'fics like "Lemonade" turn into epics like this? |
Reviewed By: Nanda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 10:08 CDT
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Glad to see a new chapter, disappointed that we missed the revolving bed in Chapter 10... *laughs* Although, with all that was going on at the time, perhaps it really was for the best. *sighs* Pups in danger... I must confess that the thought had already occurred to me, but still... *sigh* Great work! |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: August 10, 2003 11:21 CDT
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This update sure made my otherwise disastrous weekend into one I could enjoy!!!! THANK YOU!!!! To think I missed the other chapters tsk,tsk,tsk. Again it was a great read, you continue to uphold the quality I have come to expect and admire from your fics. The plot just continues to thicken and I look forward to reading more of it! Take care! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 01:15 CDT
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Hmmmm. Well isn't this an interesting development! I wonder if Kagome used the Jewel during the marking as an instinct or if she just didn't want it to interupt the "festivites". Well either way it has made a juciy plot twist. If InuYasha can wield can't Kagome? If that is the case then he might want to reconsider how she will fit in this "plan" of his. I wonder if Sesshou-maru and Rin are in danger, too. I'm guessing that he can also use the Tensaiga, but won't vice versa be true with Sesshou-maru and the Tetsusaiga?
I just know that something disaterious is going to happen at Miroku and Sango's wedding. I bet the Toukijin shows up without RSVPing!
Thanks for the update and the great writing that I have come to expect. Update soon! And sorry about the errors. ( I wrote this kinda fast )
Bye
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 On: August 09, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Fan-freaking-tastic. Great story. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhmmm...an interesting chapter. I was wondering when we were going to get back to the actual plot. Very creative. I'm liking this story more and more every chapter. I can't wait to read what happends next so don't be away too long! |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 08, 2003 22:38 CDT
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You know.
I love so much your work.
You know. I read "I`ll have lemonade, please" and now "Lemonade, too" is priceless.
You make me laugh so hard that I wake my parents in the next room.
I love it.
Please update soon |
Reviewed By: starr-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best written stories I've seen on mm.org or on ff.net. I absolutly love it and I always enjoy reading it! Please continue, I'd love to see how this all works out. |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 17:44 CDT
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keep updateing |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: August 02, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you gotta love this fic.
every chapter is just too cool.
sex and comic relief...makes you wonder what
else there is in life.
...that made no sence at all.
keep updating and keep on trucking. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I wanted to throw up just reading that! Inuyasha doing an Elvis immitaion will now haunt me in my sleep! Don't take this as a flame because it's not. It was actually a very funny and definately original chapter. Your sense of humor just creeps me out sometimes.;)
Can't wait for the next update!(No more Elvis please! Let the poor guy rest in peace!) See you next time. |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 02:33 CDT
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i can't believe you did the wedding from hell. ::highly disturbed from the idea of even human Inuyasha in the Elvis outfit:: |
Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 00:30 CDT
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OMG!!! That was horrible!! Poor Kagome!! The image of the wedding will give me nightmares for weeks!! You can't tell me that he thought that was a proper wedding!! And the bedroom? He's got to have more taste than that!! That said, I almost died laughing on the floor. Keep it up, bad taste or not, you know we all need our hanyou!! Ja ne. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: August 01, 2003 23:04 CDT
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Hey, an Elvis chapter! That's definately original ^_^ Had a great time reading it, and I loved how Inuyasha gave Kagome a Las Vegas wedding. Every woman's nightmare! hahaha! Hope your lemons can be a little more descriptive, *wink wink nudge nudge* anyhow, I'll be leaving now, and great job on this chapter!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Cat On: August 01, 2003 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job!
And about chapt 10...I nearly died laughing! Yash and his...well...boneheadness.
More! |
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