| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 18:16 CDT
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Eventhough I am not a fan of Elvis, this chapter had me doubled over with laughter! I read this chapter through my parted fingers. That is when I didn't have to completely stop from laughing to hard! Leave it to the hanyou who knows everthing to think that he could plan cremony that he knows nothing about. And don't get me started on the room the he so "proudly" redecorated. They should give that room to Kaeda, she is an artist. ( Maybe she'd like it, maybe ) Oh, or would he give it to Miroku and his "Boomarag Butterfly" as pay back for what they did in his car? Hmmmm. I say this because I assume the extra bedrooms will be or were suppose to be for them. ( I am also assuming that 2 bedrooms and 5 bathrooms is a typo ) If I am wrong let me know. I wonder how Yash is going to deal with the Toukijin. And how can you hunt something if your it's prey? And why did he take both fangs if he can only whield one? Why is she just now learning about his "period"? ( *hestarical laughter* )
Thanks for the update. Beautifully written as always. Be looking for the next one.
Peace
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Reviewed By: Yash is FUNNY!! On: August 01, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved it, I couldn't help but laugh! I haven't been much of an Elvis fan, but after I read that, I went onto Limewire and downloaded some of those songs 'cause some of them I haven't heard for a LONG time! And I loved how you put those song titles in with Yash's words. I only have 1 request: make it more lemony! Not to be rude or put you out or anyything, but your latest lemons haven't been all that... inspiring:) |
Reviewed By: Lady Abhorsen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Giggles* I loved the Elvis thing! It was hilarious. Poor Kagome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter Fuji-san |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd... That was.. the worst.. Yash dressing up as Elvis and Kagome in go-go boots... Oh geez... I couldn't stop laughing the entire time I was reading it! I'm still cackling as I type this! I can't stand Elvis, but you made me laugh, so you deserve a... well a much higher number than a ten! Update soon, but no more Elvis, please! Lol!! |
Reviewed By: Zorro On: July 28, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! the lemons are extra sweet!
*don't forget about Sango and Miroku!!!!! Two lemons=x2 sweetness!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word to describe the two latest chapters....damn! Update again SOON |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 26, 2003 04:49 CDT
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I loved this chapter! So cute! ^_^ I can't wait to find out where they're going, and the lemon scenes were as always, superb. Keep up the fantastic work!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 21:26 CDT
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Aaaahh!! That was so good!! Inu-kun stealing the soaps... HE STOLE MY HOBBY!! T.T; ^.^;; Ah, well.. I can forgive him if he comes back in another chapter soon... I absolutely love the story! You HAVE to update A.S.A.P., ok?? Thanks. Oh, wait.... What's the deal with Inu-kun saying "pups?" Are there really more than one? WILL THEY HAVE HIS EARS?!? I must know!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: July 25, 2003 18:48 CDT
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Inu goodies...
BWAhahahahhaaa! Inuyasha is stealing the shampoo! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 14:58 CDT
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Ha ha! Nice of you to remember that she would want to wash her hair.
Off to Montana, then? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 14:07 CDT
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Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I have been checking everyday since the last update. ( Yes I have a life! ) Well good chapter as always, a little short for you. But thats okay. I wonder where the hanyou is taking his "mate". Since he has made it obvious they are not going home yet....
Be looking for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:22 CDT
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Hm... Kagome is less out-of-character than I thought. She's so innocent about wanting to meet Sesshoumaru. Catches on quick, but her reactions were dead-on what I'd expect of Kagome ten years later. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:37 CDT
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I can't belive I forgot to put this in my review. I really liked your version of "Marking" it made a lot of sense. Unlike the others I've read this was less painful and the mixing of the scent and auras seems to make more senes than a bite mark. Also, the Marking in this way states the forever bonding that will be detected by any and all demons. Some how I know that this is going to play a big part in the rest of the story. I am also intrieged by the after math of this joining. What will the side effects be....?
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Reviewed By: Babsie On: July 13, 2003 19:23 CDT
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I´ve readed the fic I´ll have lemonade, please...and I love it.
Now...I´m reading Lemonade,too and I have no words to say how much I´m enjoing it.
It´s interesting the way you are rescuing the old problems between Inuyasha and Kagome and put all of this ina a today´s world.
Very good.
Keep doing a great job.
Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:25 CDT
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Wow! Dog demons bring a whole new meaning to the words 'horny' and 'desire'. These last two chapters have left me hot and senseless. Words are no good at describing them and it would be a crime to due so. You did a good job, be looking for your next update. Now I am going to go call my boyfriend your writing has given me some fun ideas!
Peace
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