| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 29, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Angel: T-T HE BROKE THE SKIN! Stupid cat.....
Shadow: Hey! I heard that!
Angel: Good! :P
Shadow: *shows teeth*
Angel: *pulls out matches* Some nice reviewer on ff.net gave me a years supply of matches!
Shadow: 0_0 *scoots away*
Angel: *lights match* Could you please write more while i go set Shadow's tail on fire for biting me?
Shadow: 0_0' *runs*
Angel: Thank you! ^_^ Keep the story going and don't you dare hurt my Ryou!
Yami: I thought you liked me!
Shadow: Yeah!
Angel: Shadow go away, and i do love you i love all of you! *Hugs Yami*
Yami: Can't.........breath.
Angel: *loosens* *chibifies* Wuld u pwease not urt Ryou?
Shadow: Brat......
Angel: *unchibifies* WHAT DID YOU SAY?!
Shadow: Beatiful, nice, sweet, angel.
Angel: That's better!
Shadow: *mumbles* devil's child
Angel: I'm not the black cat!
Shadow: Oh yeah............ |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 29, 2003 12:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*huggles Ryou back and bakurasgirl too for good measure* Yes! We found you and bookmarked the story. ^_^ But I'm a little too old to get punished for bookmarking something like this. ^_~ I'd die of mortification if my Mom knew I like to read this sort of stuff though. I'm not sure how'd she take that bit of info.
Tigerlily: Ooooohhhhh, do I detect a bitterness in Marik's tone. Trouble in paradise already? Sounds like Marik ain't so keen on sharing if it leaves him no one to snuggle. They will all make up before the end of the fic right? Right??
I can't wait until tomorrow! Yeah! Anzu Bashing! ^___^
Tigerlily: Yeah Torture! ^___^
Anzu: Yeah Friendship! ^_^ *boulder falls on her head*
Chris & Tigerlily: *look up and sees Malik & Marik grinning like idiots with poles and more boulders ready* Thanks Guys! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 29, 2003 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why is Yami always on the bottom?
Bakura:What?
I mean Yaugi's always on top and Yami's always on the bottom.Why is that?
Bakura:O_o
Maybe Yugi likes being over him.*shrugs*I don't know.
Bakura:O_o
Yami should try the top for once and Yugi should be on the bottom.
Bakura:O.OWhat the hell are you talking about?!
My fish.*points at fish*See?Yami's always on the bottom!
Bakura:Oh.I thought.....
You thought that I was talking about that right?
Bakura:Uh yeah.
Baka.UoUAnywah YAY!RYOU'S GOIN'HOME!And yeah I named the algea eater Yami.And when I did it reminded me of you and the story.I told my hikari and we laughed hard.Then we got lost in the store.
Wal-Mart's just too big.
Karona:Write more,live well,and plat games!^_________^ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 08:45 CST
Comment/Review:
LD: looks like another tear jerker for Karen
Karen: yeah, but happy tears! Ryou is ok
LD: for now
Karen: don't be such a wench
LD: Evil is unfolding! The suspense is killing me!
Karen: And you know what next chapter is?
LD: ANZU BASHING! YAY!
Karen: Hehe. Big surprise, this story is as awesome as the others! You are really gifted!
LD: brown noser. She is gonna update tomorrow, you don't have to be a flatterer.
Karen: tomorrow won't come soon enough! |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2003 08:34 CST
Comment/Review:
That was soooo sweet!! And Marik...too funny...that boy needs to loosen up some. Do I sense a little, ummm..."frusteration" on his part? Poor baby, sleeping all alone...*snicker* |
Reviewed By: A.M.T On: March 28, 2003 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!RYOU'S OTAY!^___________^
Karona:But who sent that check?
I bet it was Cinetti's wife.She always liked Ryou.
Bakura:Hehe
Karona:What?
Bakura:Tory's new pets.
Oh yeah.I got a hamster and some fish today!We got an algea eater too!Guess it's name!Guess!
Kara:Write more,live well,and play games!^____________^ |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did Seto give them the money?
me likes!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
:)GRALNAK |
Reviewed By: suzaku priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 19:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello! Yay! Ryou will live! I still liked the idea of Bakura and Ryou adopting Anzu, but this is very, very good^^. We need some rod jokes and some YEAH FRIENDSHIP!!! and it'll be perfect in no time!
Kekaku:This is really good^^ I wonder who sent him the check... Was it Kaiba? Or maybe it was Yugi...or maybe it was...Pegasus!
Yami suzaku priestess: Kekaku, you're an idiot
Kekaku: or maybe it was...Rebecca
SP:*hits retarded catgirl*
Kekaku: Maybe it was Cecelia!
SP&Yami SP:YOU IDIOT, CECELIA IS DEAD!!!
All: Keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Quad Prower(EvilAkiraSSJ) On: March 28, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, How much I can't even stand myself either for Ryou heart as well. Esp of his f***ing fath- No. I REFUSE to call him that name. Steven, I hate him for his selflish way just to be with his wife. Which I am glad his wife just went like.. *put the hand in the air* Talk to my hand. lmao Go girlfriend! ^-^ I love that women. *Giggle* Anyway, I feel so story for poor Bakura. I wish I could do something, but I am afried if happen to my husband/wife, I would do EXPACTLY same thing. X( Well, everyone. Let hope Ryou be alive. :) I have faith in both of them, just like I have faith in the heart of the card. Hey writer, good luck! As for other reviewer and reader, I STRONGER that you should read her story call "The Fall of Icarus" It really get to me. It make me so cry and so joyful cause Ryou and Bakura are just BEAUTIFUL people to be together... to be unite as one. *cry again* Forgave me. I just love that story. Good luck reader and You too, Bakuraasgirl. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 16:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Woo-hoo! *claps* Sequals are always fun. Well, so far this one has been sorta sad, but soooo good at the same time. Keep up the goodness, and don't forget to add a little citrus! *wink wink* |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesomness!!!! I'm beting it was Seto who paided ^_^ Unless it was Anubis so he could carry out his plan? *Shrugs* |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 15:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very sweet...and sad. Poor Ryou, poor Bakura. |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: March 28, 2003 11:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Angel: Yay! According to the title of the next chappie RYOU LIVES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!OUCH! Stupid cat bit me!
Shadow: Hehehehe, Smokey bit you.
Angel: So, i noticed she's bitten you before too!
Shadow: She.......caught me off guard.
Angel: SURE! Smokey is not my cat it's actually my cousin's but we're keeping her until they get a house that allows pets. Smokey is a hostile little bit-no wait that's an insult to dogs and girls. oh well she's an insult to cats too. ok she's just hostile, mean and probably is a cannibal considering how much she's bites and scratches |
Reviewed By: hotaruchan27 On: March 28, 2003 11:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! I found you! ^___^
Tigerlily: Yay! Ryou gets his operation! ^___^
*sarcastic* Gee I wonder where the check came from?
Tigerlily: As if any of his pals would leave him high and dry to let him die... Oooohhhhh, that almost rhymes! He's so kawaii... that rhymes too!
*throws a shoe at her head* Well, I'm thrilled we found you and this great story! This is gonna be a great as the others! ^_^ *bounces around happily* |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2003 09:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Karen: Bakurasgirl, you are so welcome for the support. We love you!
LD: We love your stories too! This one is looking good alreay!
Karen: Yeah, that is pretty much par for the course. I don't think she can write a bad fic!
LD: I think Malik was so cute excited.
Karen: He is always so cute. I almost started to cry when Ryou was crying about not wanting to die. I am so emotional *sniffs* *sobs*
LD: That is ok, I'll finish. This is great so far. Can't wait for tomorrow! |
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