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| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] | | Pages (18): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 › » ] | Title: Simply a Lady
Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 02:09 CST
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Does a little happy dance. I love it I love it.....I just wanted to say I love it and she became Celeste. That is so totally cool. I am glad more than one person agreed with me. Because mine was kind of small compared to some others. Anyway Update again please Thank you!
| Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 12, 2004 18:39 CST
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Ok, let me appologise repeatedly for not reviewing the last chapter. I'm so sorry! Two of my projects at work are up for review and my boss has me running my behind off for him to get evertything in order! I promise it won't happen again! Also to make up for it I'll have to review both, together! Ok, back to chapter 34... I loved it, at first you have the warm intorduction as we find the extended family all sleeping together in one hut, all in various states of undress... Kaede's short monologue about the 'family' staying her house being very funny, especially as it leaps into the introduction of the the person who will become the latest addition to their group! Then we have the segment where she introduces herself and Inu screws up, again! He just can't catch a break can he? Then finally Sessi is preented with his challenge as Inu (somehow to some extent forgiven?) and Kagome take their pups and go to visit her mother, certainly something that will cause them all even more trouble... Ok, now on to 35! ^_^; This one is even better! First you start with Inu getting ambushed and having his ears rubbed to save kis kids, then the embarrasing moment regarding his...excitement...not only that but Nikki asking questions I am sure he would rather not have answered! Special note goes out to the comments about Miroku and most notably the one regardin not listening to what he says and if you do not to repeat it! The bit about Kagom's granfather though...OMG! That really is freaky! Fun though... That follows into the marvellous lemon scene and the associated group of villagers commenting about it as if were some kind of sporting or social event! Do they have organised 'listen to the hanyous mate' gatherings? Then Kagome and Inu returning and some poor fool asking such a question at a time like that...x_x Ironically before she can kill them all the babies kick and the whole village is saved from being wiped out by an angry Kagome! Thank you again for giving me the honour of having my name used in the story, it means alot to me, seriously... Then finally a nice awkward situation as GG tries to explain the facts of life of a couple of demon kids and Sessi and his new mate go at it! Really enjoying it and once again sorry about the delay in the review. Ok, better go now. Sleep calls and come morning back to the daily slog...oh well... Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
| Reviewed By: Goddess of the Night On: January 09, 2004 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read quite a few fanfics off this site and this one must be my absalute faveorite,i cant think of any that i have enjoyed this much, your doing a great job, cant wait to find out how it ends.
| Reviewed By: MissNikki On: January 06, 2004 19:41 CST
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I read the chapter where you put me in it when you posted it...i was just in a rush and couldn't review...i haven't gotten a chance to read the new chapter....as a matter of fact my computer exploded well not really just the tower...dell sucks...well anyway thanks and i enjoyed it....bye have to go
| Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fanfic i ever read. many times it was hard for me to understand what you spelled, you never spelled grab once right. but it's all good because the whole story was good, even though i haven't read it all, i'll review again.
| Reviewed By: inuyhakmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wher to begin this fic is great ia m one of those people who love lemony goodness in a fic and boy did this one live up to it's name. This is a great written fic and very little spelling errors fort being dislexic. maybe before you put it out you could have abeta reader read it first and then people would cut down on nagging you. anyways wow Inuyuasha is one horny bitch I like it. oh an you are my number two favorite author of all time for now. this fic is just so good. oh and for that beta reader just post it and someone will do it. I am not the best poerson since i had a beta reader myself. I am a horrible speller not to metion terrible run on's lol. I must say you trult redifined the lines and laws of fanfiction storytelling and for the better I might add. Please keep going and don't get discouraged from the flames. Be proud of your accomplishments and keep your kami's high Ja Ne !!!!!!!!!!!!!! email me if you have any question i'm a mediameiner member and loudmouthscrstr@aol you can also reach me there
| Reviewed By: vegetta11111 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 09:30 CST
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your story is by far one of the best ones ive read in a LONG time....its really long too,ive been reading for like 1hour and 30 minutes and only on chapter 19.Its freakin halarious too
| Title: Shappies a Cool Word...
Reviewed By: Bre aka Chaosti On: January 03, 2004 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am dead, so dead, can't move, brain cells have been seared too ash so I lay hear and converse with my demon side who's actually being nice and I'm huddled in a featel possision and I wan't too die but I shall revive because I am now Chaosti aka Bre aka Sakura. Ohhh no it's coming... and my demon side has deserted me... help me NOOOOOO, it has come for me the math homework from HELLLLLLLLL!!! *runs away and accidently spills coke on math book* Ooops oh well guess I can't do it now... wait I didn't have math homework... I have japanese.. *screaming bloody murder* Wait I don't have my japanese notebook hahahaha take that evil Aoki sensei mwahahahaha! Alright I'm good now time too find that profile thingie *rumaging through a giant ocean of junk* Hey what's that... ohh I guess that's where Grandma went... I always thought she went too Hawaii, I wondered where that smell was coming from. *looks out too the magical audience in Bre's mind* Does anyone know a good embalmer? ~5 hours later~ Hahahaha I found it! Wait I forgot I just did some doodles of Inuyasha and I killing my Japanese teacher. Well I guess I better get back too my computer.... uhoh *looks out too an endless sea of junk that's been culminated (another big word, I'm good) over the past 9 years* Well I guess I should start going back... hey what's that... it's yellow... OMFG it's a PIKACHU DOLL AHHHHHHHH, SAVE ME!!! FUZZY SAVE ME!!! The Fuzzy Green One/*uses mystical fuzzy pillow powers too bring Bre back* Bre/ OHHHH, THE HORRER, THE HORRER!!! ~1 minute later~ Bre/ *Devouring teriyaki chicken* ~2 minutes later~ Bre/ Okay here's me idea for Sakura. Hair- As long as Inuyasha's hair but midnight black except for the tips which will be silver like Inuyasha's. Eyes- The same as Inuyasha's except they're girl eyes. Ears- Black except for the tips which are silver. Skin/ A light tan, a little lighter then Inuyasha's. Other- Fangs and claws, of course. Features are a half and half of Kagome and Inuyasha's, though she's very beautiful. Personality/ Wickedly smart clever, and alot like her dad, loves too run and is faster then her brothers, her brothers love her alot and her dad loves her beyond reason. Loves too sit on her father's shoulder slightly covered by his hair, and loves too sit in trees. Has a bad temper like her parents and is really stubborn. Loves beef jerky as much as Inuyasha loves Ramen. Likes training with her dad and uses a sword, though her attacks have Kagome's miko powers in them so she's constantly destroying hay bales at practice. Really good at stealth, and sneaks up on Uncle Fluffy alot. So what do you think? Is it good? I really really hope so. I can't wait for the pups too come. Must see them. Would you mind if I e-mailed you. That would be cool. I love you fic and I'm so happy you let me design Sakura *does shappy dance*. I must go though because Naraku has escaped his torture pit and is trying too get with my boyfriend and Sean's gonna kill him any minute and if he does that then I won't be able too torture him anymore. Bre/ runs over too a big arena that suddenly popped up* Get away from my boyfriend you gay bastard! Naraku/ kukukukuku Bre/ Why do you say that all the time. Naraku/ kukuku, I'm president of the kuku birds fan club. Bre/Ohhh, that makes sense. Sean/ *demonie and growling* I will render your flesh Naraku. Bre/ *sighs and snaps fingers, Naraku disappears* Sean/ I'm thirsty. *accidently grabs sake instead of coke* Bre/ NOOOOOOO, we're hanyous we can't drink... hey I'm a hanyou, THAT ROCKS!!! Now having a demon side makes sense, maybe I'm not insane. The Fuzzy Green One/ Nope your nuts, after all you talk too pillows. Bre/ True, true.... ~3 hours later~ Bre/ Okay I have a drunk hanyou boyfriend too exploit what should I have him do?..... I know clean my ocean of JUNK!!! ~5 minutes later~ Sean/ All done mate of mine. Bre/ *eyes go sparkley* It's beautiful!!! OMG I am so going too marry you!!! Sean/ WOOHOO!!!
| Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really great chappy and such a twist letting ppl pick names of characters but that sound like an insteresting way 2 do it^_^
| Title: I Wonder Why We Have to Come Up with Titles....
Reviewed By: Chaosti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*A maniacly insane person runs around in circles* PUPS!!! Must see pups!!! Pups good!!! Whoooosh I'm a bird!!! Must... have... more coffee... ~2 hours later~ Hello, I am Chaosti aka Bre and you have now entered the eye of the storm that is Bre hyped up on coffee at 5:12 in the morning. Okay I'm happy now... okay I'm not *sobs* There's no more of your fic too read, WAAAAAH! Dude, your fic rocks! I love it! It's like a world of hanyous that pop up everywhere. They should so make a theme park for that they could call it HANYOU WORLD, population hanyous... and some demons... and humans, but what the fuck there'd still be alotta hanyous. Okay I'm gonna ask you something.... are you ready.... sure.... really really sure? Okay can I please please PLEASE be Sakura the daughter of Kagome and Inuyasha ohpleaseohpleaseohplease. I know what your thinking why in the name of the seven hells should I give this crazy bitch the part when this is her first review? Well too be honest I only found this site a little while ago, and I've just started readin the fics, and I promise you that if you put me as Sakura I will review everytime you do a new chapter, I will swear on the almighty beef jerky... I wish I had some jerky..... jerky good... ~4 hours later~ Huh, where am I what was I saying, and how come there are empty beef jerky bags and cow carcasses in my room? How come theres a sticky note on my forehead? Sticky Note/ Finish writting a review for the fic with thingies and stuff. Bre again/ Okie dokie so fuzzy green chaniel pillow shall we procrastinate (hehehe big word) The Fuzzy Green One/ *british accent* Most deffinatly, we should invite your cool yet violent demon side too a tea party. Demon Side/ What the hell do you want? That better not be tea I smell. Bre/ Well duuuuh, of course not it's ice tea. ~1 hour later~ Bre/ Bye Demon Side, I'll be over too torture Kikyo with you as soon as I finish my review. Demon Side/ Okay, thanks for the ice tea. Bre/ So where was I oh yes I would really love too be Sakura if by some miracle you let me be her just write it in an author's note next chapter and I'll send you an idea for her personality and looks, but unfortunatly now I must stop since I'm entering the crash mode of my caffine high at 5:40 in the morning. Bwahahaha I bet your wondering how I did 7 hours of stuff in 28 minutes, well I'll tell you..... I AM THE MASTER OF TIME!!!! Mwahahahaha fear my awsome power that almost never works especially in the morning when I have too go too school, school is the spawn of satan and some day I shall defeat it along with it's brothers homework and the smell of sulfer dioxide. YOU'LL NEVER DEFEAT ME, okay you actually will, *sigh* Damn internal sleep clock.... must... stay awake.. must... stay... awa*snore* The Fuzzy Green One/ *british accent slightly muffled cause Bre's sleeping on him* Bre's review is now over. She will currently sleep till 3 in the afternoon and then cry hysterically if there's no new chapter. I apologize for her lengthy and off the point review and have been told too tell you that she hopes you e-mail her because you seem too be alot like Bre, except better at writting fics and that she's not a stalker and that she can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: Simply a Lady...not really wanting to log in On: December 27, 2003 01:47 CST
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I really like this story. It has made me laugh and cry and helped me out to finish writing mine for which I do commend you. I admit I am the world's worst procrastinator but reading stories like yours is an inspiration. Anyway I think Celeste for some reason. Celeste reminds me of the moon and stars whenever I see that name and the way you have her portrayed in the end. I think that might be perfect so I pick Celeste.
| Title: PLEASE write more!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2003 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAN you got somethen here! I'll tell you right now you can write! I mean you got talent here! So if you wouldn't mind, I don't mean to sounld rude or anything, WRITE MORE DANG IT!!!!!!!!!! Please?!? * this said in a sweet voice* Thank you for in the near, I hope, fuiture.
| Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was funny and good I liked it I can't wait to read more.....
| Reviewed By: Sammy -.-zzz On: December 24, 2003 11:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You sure fixed Sesshomaru's problem. That was quick!
| Reviewed By: shirahime On: December 24, 2003 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading your fanfic a few weeks ago...and then i moved and had no internet connection for a little bit until it was set up here! i think the best praise i can give you is to let you know that the first thing i did when i had my connection back up was to immediately start reading from where i left off on your story! *runs away hoping you don't berate me like rin does for not reviewing sooner* so this is an overall review of the whole story. i have thoroughly enjoyed it thus far...i love your plot twists!! they are very unique and add a lot of fun. curious about all the different children entering the story - are they all going to gang up together and do something funny to the adults perhaps?? and did i miss a chapter w/how sango and miroku got together? cos i think that would have been a pretty funny scene. i had a bit of a hard time seeing sesshy being pretty nice from the get-go, cos of its OOCness, but since he is still attempting to put up a front of cool calm and collected i think it works..besides rin is an oddity still to me too from the original (it's prolly just me). A comment to Hououza in case they read up on other reviews - when imagining this world where women had their pregnancies as long as their orgasms..it would be so messed up...think of the poor guy that has his woman w/a 30 second orgasm...*women in UNISON (hehehe) stare daggers at him for his poor performance!* and they WOULD all know about it! AND the catch 22 of the century for women...do they want a short pregnancy or the time of their lives..ah life would get so weird.. anyway. i tend to be verbose but not as verbose as some of your other reviewers..that's something i won't even try LOL. cos i would fail. to wrap up...many thanks for this great story you having been working on and the speed of your updates..and to all others out there POST A REVIEW I NEED MY FIX BEFORE INUYASHA LOVES ME GOES ON BREAK PUHLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!! ok i have to go now and make some jello shots for tonite's party...again THANK YOU FOR THE STORY!!
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