| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: too-lazy-to-sign-in mmorg member [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
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^^
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Title: uuuhhhhhhhh
Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 15:10 CDT
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AWesome story, kinda weird though . . . were you tryiing to make inu yasha brittish???? "Bloody Hell" I thought it was funny!!!! GO YOU!!!! keep writng!!!
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Reviewed By: alexus [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 12:16 CDT
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Will you ever finish this story. Please let us know.
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Reviewed By: Inuyeasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i really like how you write so i rated a 9 in the writing style. Due to the fact that you cant help how you see things because of dislexia, but i have noticed that your spelling is getting a whole lot better kago-chan. so i gave you a 9 for spelling and grammer. I love your creativity so i gave you a 10. Aver all this is one of the best fan fics i have ever read and i enjoy reading so i gave you a ten for enjoyment. And over all i gave you a 10 because you do such a wonderful job at keeping me entertained and i really like this story. Plus even thought you dont have time to write a chapter you still are kind enough to tell us why and we know its not just some dumb excuse. And for that i thank you for writing such a wonderful story. OHHH and if you have time could you please send me a picture for your cute baby. Inuyeasha@hotmail.com. Thank you your loyal fan, Hatsuharu Nira Just Haru for short.
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Reviewed By: sessy_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 14:49 CDT
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i love your fanfic !!! it is very believable but at the same time your own fanfic well enough about that congrats on having your baby !!!i love your baby's name it's so long ;p Hayden Alexander Wolfgang Yarbrough how's that chapter with your baby lol but please i love your fanfic i just started reading your fanficc and i could not put it down and now i'm at the last chapter and i won't more so git that baby out and start writing (baby power ;p) sessy_lover
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Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CONGRADS ON THE HOLE BABY THING ^^ N E WAYS LET ME GET TO THE POINT... YOU MUST KEEP GOING YOU JUST STOPED FOR LIKE 2 YEARS... I WOULDNT CARE IF IT WASNT SUCH A CLIFFIE!!! UUUUGGGHHHH!! N E WAYS I LOVE NO THAT WOULD ME AN UNDERSTATMENT I ADORE IT ITS FANTASTIC PLEASE KEEP GOING ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2005 20:03 CST
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I love the story so far I hope you finishh it I also cant wate till sesshomaru's baby is born I wan to know what you will have him or her look like. also i dont know if it will help but kagomes friends names are Ayumi, Eri, and Yuka
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just wanted to say that this was a very good fanfiction. awesome job. i hope you update soon, if it isn't a bother. i hope you keep writing great inuyasha fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: ??? On: July 26, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wowsers i love the story and congrats on the baby may you live in joy and bad puns ^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 19:16 CST
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OMG, youre from texas!? I was born there! i was born in Sherman Texas. Any where close to that? Now i live in crappy Wisconsin. Long way from texas.
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Title: flamers
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 14:09 CST
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Hey, this is Yoko again. I read over all the reviews for this story, and I noticed some really nasty flames. Look, people! We are supposed to encourage our fellow writers! There is a fine line between contructive critism and being Hell bound! And another thing, I don't appriciate when people read a story and then flat out insults it! Not only are you insulting the writer, but you are also insulting the intelligence of the people who read and enjoy the story. The culprits behind these meaningless flames should be cast into Hell, where you can iceskate with Naraku, Koga, Kikyo, Hojo, and Jaken (because according to this writer, Hell froze over several times...)
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: January 26, 2005 17:27 CST
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Glad to see you're back, that was a really excellent chapter. I have to admit it's been a long time since I read chapter one so it almost feels like I'm reading it for the first time again. I really love how the both of them kept blaming the other one, neither one willing to back down. It's ironic that they both decided to see the other at the same time although I am sure Inuyasha being drunk is going to cause no end of problems... Well, I've watched a whole lot more Inuyasha since last time and even travelled around the world (well Canada and Japan anyways), I look forwards to seeing what you have in store this time. Sorry if the reviews are going to medium length for the time being, big project on so time is limited. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 14:52 CST
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Hey, palm_tree! this author emailed me and said she was fixing the grammar, so don't get your knickers in a knot!!! And the fact that the plot was overdone is what makes the story so damn great!
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Title: uhhh. . . .
Reviewed By: palm_tree On: January 26, 2005 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea, that's my rating - and I think I'm being kind. Um, I don't mean to be harsh but I just don't understand why all these reviwers LOVE this story. Yea it might have an enjoyable, if a little overdone, plotline (Kagome gets with Inu, they have lil' kiddies *yeay*) but it's just painful to read with all the bad characterization and spelling/grammatical errors - near impossible. You can't get around to enjoying the story. I read half a chapter of the first chapter and then a later chapter because I read in the reviews they got better (btw...they didn't)and couldn't take it anymore. What kinda stories are people reading that they think this is the best it can get!? Let me recommend one that's one of my personal faves - "The Lucky Ones" by Terri Botta -> now that's a fanfic worthy of being called 'the best'. I suggest y'all read it and then maybe get an idea of what a good story should be.
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Title: crazyyyy
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Possibly the greatest fan ficcie of all time. This is possibly because you have a really smart friend to help you with the grammar! heh, heh, heh. Just kidding. You are either very talented or very crazy. Then again, all geniuses are crazy...crap. I'm not crazy. @_@
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