| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: TheREALMe On: November 23, 2003 00:57 CST
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oh i remember why i was pissed that night i had spacers put in and bit on something hard and was in pain as well as PMSing so im sorry i was being an ass
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Reviewed By: TheREALMe On: November 23, 2003 00:55 CST
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P.S. i really wouldnt mind going to hell that much cause im going through that i hate all and am suicidal phase.
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Reviewed By: TheREALMe On: November 23, 2003 00:52 CST
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sorry i didnt know you were dislestic and i was PMSing that day lol but i like the concept of your story i just think you should get a beta reader oh and the last lemon was not bad
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 22, 2003 15:20 CST
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Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:45 CST
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And Niastyle can go to hell with TheREALMe. And Kikyo. And Naraku. And Koga. And Kagura. And Kanna. And I must shut up.
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:45 CST
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And Niastyle can go to hell with TheREALMe. And Kikyo. And Naraku. And Koga. And Kagura. And Kanna. And I must shut up.
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Title: PS
Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:43 CST
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P.S. The reviewer by the name of 'TheREALMe' should go to hell! With Kikyo and Naraku and Koga and all those other bastards! Go virgin hentai writers with bad spelling and grammer!!!! Damn ignorant mean peoples that pick on people cuz they got problems (in my case, everyone thinks I'm mentally insane, and it is true, I have something messed up in my brain (i forget what cuz I'm forgewtful like that))!!!!!!
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Title: Coincidence?
Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:39 CST
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It's ironic that you knew about sex and stuff from fanfics at a young age and are a virgin hentai writer, cause it's the same with me! I'm only 13 though..^_^; Anyways, great story! Write more!
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 20, 2003 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas update soon this is a good fanfic :)
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Reviewed By: Harder Inu-Yasha On: November 18, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for next chap
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Reviewed By: DragonFireMeltedMyBones On: November 18, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whats the tune of your sex song?
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Reviewed By: TheREALMe On: November 18, 2003 18:14 CST
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this story is why virgins with bad spelling and grammar should NOT write lemons
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Reviewed By: BabayBunny -N- MissNikki On: November 18, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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We want the whole SONG!!!! PLEASE!! and update too!!! Please!
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Reviewed By: WinterWolf7 On: November 17, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleas write more
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Title: operation sex
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice.^_^ You should*if at all posible* up-date more! I love the story! I think I'm going to tell my friends about you! Love the fic, and please up-date soooooooon! Please!?>!?!?
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