| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: ho hum On: November 15, 2003 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
very funny but please get a beta reader your spelling and grammar are awful
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read your latest chappies and they were great. oh and that Dislexia thing, i completly understand because i have it to. i know it can get hard when you have it and people are telling you that you can't spell, i wouldn't worry about it. you know, the easiest phone # to remember are the ones written the same way forward and backwards, anyway. Update soon, k!! W.T.P. -^__^-
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Reviewed By: wildmonkeygirl On: November 13, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hurry with the next chappie and like my friend lemonqueen said lemonnnn!
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Reviewed By: lemonqueen On: November 13, 2003 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it but i want more lemonnnnnn i nedd more lemonnnnn!
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Reviewed By: Ericyamaha89 On: November 13, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write next cahappie soon
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Reviewed By: niastyle On: November 13, 2003 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the worst story I ever read. To be honest, I didn't even finish it. I got up to about chapter 4 before I was so fed up and disgusted I had to stop reading. You have the worst spelling and grammer. If you use spell check, check to see what word your replacing before you replace it. Half of the words didn't even make sense. And when you write a story please leave your comments out of the middle of the story. It's hard to get into a story when it keeps being interrupted with stupid unnecessary comments. If you want to make comments, make them at the end of the chapter in a summary. And next time try writing in complete sentences.
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Title: powerrrrr!
Reviewed By: bankutsoluv On: November 12, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the bomd diggity bomb keep going.
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Reviewed By: fluffysexy On: November 12, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best yet!!!!! i luv fluffly
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Reviewed By: sweetiepie^_^! On: November 12, 2003 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so funny! inu has power!
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Title: thight
Reviewed By: kogalover On: November 12, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it so you ca keep going!!!
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Title: Make MORE
Reviewed By: iluvurstories On: November 12, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The best best best fanfiction series the world ever saw, make more or I'll seriously hurt you!
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Reviewed By: sweetiepie^_^! On: November 11, 2003 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing the fic its the best!
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Title: the shit
Reviewed By: ANGELBABYface On: November 11, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fic kicks ass. it is the funnist shit. I LUV IT A CAN'T WAIT 4 THE NEXT CHAPTER!
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Title: i'm loving it parapapa!
Reviewed By: fluffysexy On: November 11, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur fic is da shit i'm loving it just like the JT song, ur writing is da bomb totally rad.u had me laughing all the fucking time this fic diserves a 100. i completley suck at spelling. SESSHY IS SO DAMN SEXY!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kogalover On: November 11, 2003 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfiction it's so funny. i was cracking up in like every chapter. ur spelling is a little bad but don't worry cause mine is too i suck at spelling. ur writing style is very different from others that i've read. SO PLEASE KEEP WRITING BECAUSE I LOVE UR FIC !!!!
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