| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaah i love it but needs another lemon
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Reviewed By: oops! On: February 22, 2004 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry i sent the last message twice ^-^' o and im ganna end this on with some faces you can always ues:-D -_-' ^-^ !_! ^_~ *-* and i have alot more but im not goin to send them so to bad P
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Title: go you! go you! go you!
Reviewed By: kira/sarah On: February 22, 2004 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! i mean...i think about it at school at dinner with my friends and i even dream about what i think is goin to happen next! os i have to say that this story is the all time greatest story in the world! o and i hope that you dont have the flu and that you live a long happy life with your fionce (just so you know i cant spell either). if you ever drop this story i will hunt you down and stab you...with.....*thinks long and hard*.... hmmmmmmm....how about i stab you with a pencil *getts evil grin* im such a hentai! so hes the deal, ill give you aleast one review for every chappie and not stap you with a pencal *gets perverted grin* ok i got to stop bein a hentai but um.....ya back to the agreement...*cough cough* if you keep updateing. and i could give you some japanese songs online to anyone who reads this reviwe but you have to IM me. my AIM name is kira the neko. o and i got the name kira from a fanfiction i read. its second best know that iv read this one!but kiras a aruyo neko demoness and for all the people that dont know what that means then it means aruyo cat demoness.aruyo is a type of neko that can talk to people using her mind so they dont have to talk if their in danger or as in the fanfiction i read being controlled. ok. i think thats long enough dont you? lol ok im dont. ~Ja, Ne~ ps. you can call me kira
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Title: go you! go you! go you!
Reviewed By: sarah/kira On: February 22, 2004 17:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! O MY GOD! THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ! i mean...i think about it at school at dinner with my friends and i even dream about what i think is goin to happen next! os i have to say that this story is the all time greatest story in the world! o and i hope that you dont have the flu and that you live a long happy life with your fionce (just so you know i cant spell either). if you ever drop this story i will hunt you down and stab you...with.....*thinks long and hard*.... hmmmmmmm....how about i stab you with a pencil *getts evil grin* im such a hentai! so hes the deal, ill give you aleast one review for every chappie and not stap you with a pencal *gets perverted grin* ok i got to stop bein a hentai but um.....ya back to the agreement...*cough cough* if you keep updateing. and i could give you some japanese songs online to anyone who reads this reviwe but you have to IM me. my AIM name is kira the neko. o and i got the name kira from a fanfiction i read. its second best know that iv read this one!but kiras a aruyo neko demoness and for all the people that dont know what that means then it means aruyo cat demoness.aruyo is a type of neko that can talk to people using her mind so they dont have to talk if their in danger or as in the fanfiction i read being controlled. ok. i think thats long enough dont you? lol ok im dont. ~Ja, Ne~ ps. you can call me kira
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2004 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the ending to that chappy it's so funny and glad u up-dated can't wait till u do it again^_^
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor GG! LOL ^_^ please update soon! I love your story!!
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: February 16, 2004 17:06 CST
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Sorry, it's going to be another short one. Seems I'm a little lost for words of late...too many things going on. That was beautiful, another excellent chapter. Really enjoyed the moment with the starring contest...strangly reminds me of me...I always used to try and out stare people...damn good at it too! The bit with GG was hillarious! I can't wait to see what the oldest two will be asking him next! Until next time good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: opps
Reviewed By: scuzzle butt On: February 14, 2004 03:38 CST
Comment/Review:
ok i realized in my review i cracked on your spelling when mine was terrible. please dont hurt me!
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Title: UNISON!!!!!!
Reviewed By: scuzzlebutt On: February 14, 2004 03:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked chapter 17 wene Kikyo was coughing because shes allergic o herself. And "unison" is a cool freakin world and you dont spell does "dose" you did that alote during the story but besides that it was kick ass. ^_^
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Reviewed By: firelord On: February 13, 2004 03:29 CST
Comment/Review:
i am glad to hear that it is not over and that you are writing again i was beginning to think you where just going to leave it like that
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 12, 2004 11:00 CST
Comment/Review:
i like your story and i've been printing it out to read that's why i haven't been updating...btw how old will my character be at the end of the story....??? I don't care as long as you don't kill me all or deprive me of all my attention from mommy and daddy!!! Okay love you!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu-Fan On: February 07, 2004 08:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it, but like the rating shows I think you need a beta reader because I don't mean to be mean but your spelling is terrible.
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:26 CST
Comment/Review:
yaaaa its not over yet
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Reviewed By: Jillian On: February 05, 2004 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY KEEP GOIN PLZ I NEED MORE OR ILL DIE :( PLZ MORE MORE MORE I BEG OF YOU I LOVE ALL YOUR WORKS AND YOUR NAME IS AWSOME...I ALSO WANT INU BUT LUCKILY MY BFS PET NAME IS INU SORRY FOR ALL THE CAPS BUT MY BUTTON IS STUCK...YOUR STORIES ARE VERY CREATIVE BUT PLZ NO MORE ADOPTIVE CHILDREN THATS KINDA DUMB...NEWAYS YA I LOVE THE CASTLE WHAT A SHOCKER! HEHE THIS IS MY 1st POST FOR YOU AND YOU ROCK KAGOME BECKY PERSON! I HOPE U AND UR BF HAVE A WONDERFUL HANYOU WEDDING IT WOULD BE REAL CUTE IF YOU HAD CUTE DOGGY EARS IN YOUR VEIL! HEHE NEWAYS THATS ALL JUST PlZ WRITE A NeW CHAPTER :(
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Reviewed By: Um........ On: February 05, 2004 08:18 CST
Comment/Review:
*pauses* I think the author's notes from your fiance were funny due to the fact that he seemed to be uncomfortable with it. Please keep writing no matter who does it. I like the story or I never would have read this far..... You could definately use a beta.
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