| "operation sex" Reviews/Comments [ 264 ] |
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Reviewed By: no one On: May 02, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur writting is gettin betta keep at it
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay you up-dated and can't wait till you do it again and really really really really really really really really really great chappy^_^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 20:14 CDT
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this is great a fanfic please update soon
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 28, 2004 17:54 CDT
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Another truely beautiful chapter! Sorry to hear that you are unable to use the computer a lot at the moment, but in a way it's a good thing as you most likely need the rest. Don't worry about updates for now, we'll all be here when you come back, or at least I will even if no-one else is ^_^ Sorry that this isn't the longest review I've done but life is a little hectic at the moment and I'm a bit muddled with my words...sorry again, too much information. Thank you for writing this, it truely has been a joy to read. Please once more accept my words of good luck and best wishes, I look forwards to your return. Till then take care and the best of luck, Hououza
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Title: Love the story
Reviewed By: HeeroYuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. It's wonderfully written with a lot of love, humor, and fun (can't forget the lemons either ^_^). I've been reading your story for the past month or so (mainly looking for the updates), and this is the first time I've reviewed it. I want to hear more of this story, so I'm hoping that my review (as well as many others) will motivate you to continue the story. I'm looking forward to further updates. I don't mind the spelling errors either. No one is expected to speak in perfect English and having errors makes it seem more "believable" (don't know if it's the right word to use, but it seemed fitting). btw, I hope your marriage and child-bearing go very well and without incident.
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Reviewed By: Kikisuteru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:52 CDT
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I love your disfunctional family!!! Can I be part of it? If not, I'll settle for Miroku. I also like how you made Sessy...umm...soft? I would say whimpy but that doesn't quiet fit. It's also cute how you made the child of all time (Inuyasha) so mature. You always make me laugh. And next time your union peoples attack, send them my way, too. >^.^< Anyways... Have a nice day!!!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww this is soo cute
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all i can say is awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwww
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Title: email me and I'll be your beta reader... Sweet_T_Cocoa_86@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: April 22, 2004 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm the 211th review so as I see it you already owe us a big surprise. I'll be waiting. And congrats on your marriage. I feel like I know you personally already and we've only been talking through the reviews and story. We'll I'm glad your back and I hope your honey-moon was a thing to be enjoyed greatly. Hey! what did you bring me back? *sniff* it better be good. I'm so glad your back to updating I've been waiting since you left.... I feel Like I'm forgetting something. You know ever since I've submitted that long review my review haven't been the same since. I just don't feel the need to write long ass reviews anymore and you deserve them. Maybe you should give me some motivation, you know an incentive,...hint hint...if you don't get the hint I'm talking about a bribe!!! Since I'm already in the story what else can you give me to write you another long chapter...and I see Phoenix's reviews haven't been the same either. We need a big incentive. I think I could manage to write you a page long review if I got to witness some of my powers as a fox hanyou *wink wink* Hey I'm not saying I'll stop reviewing I just you know....oh who am I kidding? I don't know what I want I just wanna babble...and babble and then babble some more. Well I can't think of anything more to say. I didn't read the chapter I have other stuff to do so I'm printing out all 14 sheets so I can read it at home in bed. I'll get back to you with the corrections and mistakes over view. You know the creative critism. I love you and I'll see you on Monday...That's when I'll be printing the next page of your story out. Love MissNikki....
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Title: YAY FOR INU!
Reviewed By: Jillian On: April 16, 2004 14:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY im the 210th VOTE! ok well ive been waiting and waiting for an update! where is it! lol jk jk i understand you got stuff to do...ive read all ur fanfics and this one is truely the best but all of them are enjoyable in their own waysof course! ur a great writer and i love the fact that you put ur own comments and feelings into the story it makes it awesome! awesomelike inuyasha! i cant wait to see where thestory is gunna go next! oh and what happened to unison?! there was one in a chapter a lil wh ile ago...but i miss the constant unison :( neways update soon and imso happy about ur marrage! you found a real life inuyasha im sure! i hope ur baby(s) will be healthy and beautiful! keep goin with the story and i will forever be a fan! ~Love~ Jillian!
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Reviewed By: Inubunny [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it took me forever but i finally read all of this story from the begining and now i can not wait until the next chappy! i hope u update soon! much love kagome!
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Reviewed By: InuLover88 On: April 13, 2004 16:10 CDT
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Yo, this story is da bomb. Please please please finish it. I can't wait until the next chappy. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: InuLover88 On: April 13, 2004 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, this story is da bomb. Please please please finish it. I can't wait until the next chappy. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE NAMELESS FRIENDS ARE ATTACKING RUN and while i'm running i'd like to tell u that as usaul this is a really really really really really really really really really funny and great chappy and hope you do it again soon^_^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: shippokitsune
Reviewed By: ki On: March 28, 2004 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Best damn story ever and I can not wait for more I love Houzou's power. Keep on torturing gg with his great grand kids but please stop with the cameras. I am in love with this story. Good luck with your life.
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