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Title: Gah!
Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness *not logged in* On: May 03, 2005 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!!! ARE YOU KIDDING?! Wow...whatta cliffy. *sigh* Well, I'm just REALLY happy you updated. When I saw that SC was updated, I nearly fell out of my chair from excitement...-_- Yes, I am a loser. Anyhoos, I really enjoy your story. The plot's developing quite nicely, if I say so meself. ^-^ Wonder if the crystals are real...that'd be so pretty though, blue diamonds, I mean...I thinkee they are, with Sesshy and Inu-chan rich and all...I can't wait for fluff scenes between Sesshy and Kagome. Whoot, whoot! Ok, welp, please update reaaally so on for the sake of your oh, so loyal fans!! ^0^ Thank ya!
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Reviewed By: alatero [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 23:42 EDT
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YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I absolutely love this story....it's a nice twist to the characters and the original 'outline', if you can call it that, of the manga/anime. I love that Inu isn't trying to get with Kag or Kik, and the whole Sess/Kik thing at the beginning and the continuance of it. Great story, please keep writing. You are very talented.
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 23:02 EDT
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Aaaw! So cute! I can't wait to see what the rest of the present is! Yay for updates!
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Title: YAH!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was another really great chapter. I love all the interactions and sub plots in this story. You certainly aren't predictable. I love how you wrote Inuyasha, he's just so yummy and sweet. Great job and I look forward to more! *hugs* Quirkyslayer
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Title: good job!!!!!!!!!!:)
Reviewed By: celina On: May 02, 2005 06:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are so great to write such a good fanfiction! well......hope u update soon!!!!! :):):):):):):):)
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Reviewed By: ultamitblueyes [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2005 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read this fanfic so many times that I lost count... So it's pretty obvious that I love it!!!!! Please add more!!! VERY SOON I HOPE!!! I don't want to wait long!! I love this so much!! Then again I don't want it to end soon -_- update soon! Can't wait for more! :D
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 23:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so romantic. I'm actually kinda worried that Naraku isn't around. Means he's plotting something. Sango is right though, Kagome is falling in love with Sesshomaru. I can't wait until she discovers his gift to her in the closet. I also have the feeling that Kagome will be adopting Shippou in the future.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 22:07 EDT
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Those were two totally awesome chapters. wow that sure is a lot of money for his paitings. They sounded gorgeous it would be cool if you could get someone to draw it for you. Whats the deall with the box sessomaru brough over was there like anotheer box inside there the one for kag to keep her stuff say. oh and I know Naraku is just bound to rear his ugly little head sooner or later and hes gonna do something bad really bad. I always love when Inu shows up cause hes always doing something to help sessy and its always something flashy and I like that cause i always wish that it was me lol yeah im a little jealous so sue me. I hope san and mirs wedding goes okay cause they so deserve it. anyway i guess thats enough talking for now. Please Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^ ^__^
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Reviewed By: StormAz (not signed in) On: May 01, 2005 17:51 EDT
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I love this story and I'm very glad to see updates on it ^_~ I do however get annoyed with eeeeeeevil cliffies! You're getting entirely tooo good at the things!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2005 05:05 EDT
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ooooh your a bad writer, making us all wait to see if the gems are real ar not....I'm lying, of course your not a bad writer, a magnificent wonderful great and awsome writer are closer but still not good enough to discribe you. Ilove your story and i can't wait 'till you update. Please update soon, at least asap, i beg of you...I must know what happens next *gives you puppy eyes* please. 'Till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 05:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is this? NO MORE!?!?? Updates welcome *wink, wink...nudge nudge* cool story looking forward to it continuing!! lovs ya! Cheers
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Reviewed By: ra On: April 15, 2005 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i reverve the right to laugh!hahahaha! that ending was funny!keep going!
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Title: thanks to youkai yume...
Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i first decided to check out this fic when i reviewed youkai yume's fan art for your story. i really love the whole idea, and i think you're a great author! *adds you to fav authors list* lol, keep up with the story, and in the meantime i shall check out some of your other fics! thanks, and CHEERS
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Title: whoo hoo
Reviewed By: ur no. one fan On: April 14, 2005 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!! they finally kissed! it took a long time, but it worked out perfectly, cuz it wasn't one of those stories where they fall in love way too quickly.(doesn't that just really get on your nerves?) i really love this storyline cuz its interesting. the whole suicidal kid thing was sad, but really dramatic. (awesome) cool idea with the box too. (sessy to the rescue)keep it up! and pleeeaase update soon. ( i check every day.) -meg
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2005 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're feeling better!!! I absolutely loved this story. It would appear that Sesshomaru is starting to fall for Kagome, but he's not yet ready to admit it to himself. I wonder what his box was. I'm sure it was for all her belongings she's saved. I thought that was very very sweet of him. I can't wait to see what he has planned for Kagome for Valentine's Day. I'm also thinking that Sesshomaru will be Kagome's date for Sango's wedding.
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