| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon On: September 27, 2003 11:10 EDT
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Heh, great chapter, love the skit at the end. I just cant picture Sess-chan saying shit... lol
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: September 27, 2003 10:07 EDT
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Oh, yes. Sess with two arms. *pouts* And there's only so many ways to restore them, too. But I love where you're going here (as usual). And don't worry about the angst thing. From what I've read, you've got enough heart-string-tugging going on here with the orphaned children to conduct an orchestra! *sniff* I about bawled at poor little Rin's separation from Sess. How could he leave her?! *grins* But I can't wait to see Sess at the animal hospital! Terrifying all the cranky little poodles!
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 10:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shhh! Don't tell Seshou about the *thermometer* if she takes him to the 'Doggie Dr.'. ~cringes~ Finally, Kagome has done the deed of running over our fav youkai. And, she thinks she's hearing voices. Very intriguing story indeed.Update Soon! TTFN
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Reviewed By: Kat (sinnamonkat) On: September 27, 2003 09:23 EDT
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Gah! Evile Cliffy! *kat kicks cliffy before kneeling* More please.... *huge puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 06:45 EDT
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Poor Sesshoumaru! *pets doggie* At least he's...somewhat...accepted his form. I guess he doesn't have much choice. It's just too early for me to form any more sentences ~_~
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Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: September 27, 2003 02:48 EDT
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Grrr... ff.net go down on me .. again!!! Damn it too! Consider MM.org doesn't show your review respond.. :: pouts :: So.. Kagome can understand what Sesshou said right? the next chapter will be most interesting! And poor Sess... he must be cute as a normal canine :: lol :: I really wonder how in the hell you gonna make Sesshou fall for Kagome in this fic. Jaa!!
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Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kikyo I 'almost' felt sorry for her...*sniffs* O well lets go see Kagome! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 05:44 EDT
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I read this last night but the site was down when I went to review *sighs* Anyway, I like this. Interesting. Poor Sesshoumaru *cries* I applaud Sesshoumaru for ridiculing someone so smug in front of everyone *laughs* One thing, though. Wasn't Battousai a nickname for Kenshin? Almost like a second name, specifically aimed for him? Agh, it's too early for me to be staring at this screen. |
Reviewed By: debbie the rex On: September 14, 2003 02:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it keep going |
Title: grat new fic !!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kistune princess On: September 14, 2003 02:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you've done it again i really
love the new fic
too i can' decide which is my fav
keep up the great job |
Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 00:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are most definitely one of my fav authors. Kikyou? *rolls eyes and makes gagging noise* Thank goodness you did not see fit to torture poor Sessy by making him *mate* with her. Might as well screwed a hole in the ground. Update soon, and look forward to Trial to start. TTFN! |
Reviewed By: Miko_Snow Godess_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 23:38 EDT
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Love it!!!! It's really well done,and I love Sesshoumaru but he kinda deserved the curse that was plain mean. Oh well hope to see update soon. Ja |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 19:08 EDT
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I like how you kept Sesshomaru's stuborness. *Fluffy growles in background* I also like how Kikyou is a slight bitch, but not murderous. I so hope you put a lemon in the near future. Oh, I like the story, but HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO FLUFFY? I love him, but he will turn back so I'm not to angry. Ja Ne |
Reviewed By: 1 On: September 13, 2003 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you mixed the two together and the part about the life span matching his. well please up date soon.
PLEASE |
Reviewed By: Crimson demon On: September 13, 2003 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, take that Sess-chan...*evil laugh* I like this so far, but the whole Kikyo thing.... eh. i dunno. she is a bitch in my book, so ya know... whatever. lol. but it seems to fit in this story, so who am i to critize the great and mighty author Striking Falcon?
*bows down*
see ya later! |
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