| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 11:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...you manage to capture Koga's persona in this so well. Paranoid...lol. I thought it was kinda cute with the whole conversation Kikyo had with Sesshomaru. As always, you never cease to amaze me! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 05:22 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love your story
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Reviewed By: Psycho Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 01:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT FIC!! Another great fic by the one and only SF!! Please update soon because I don't think I could wait any longer...with me being psycho and a demoness...nooo patience...nope. Heh. Well, keep up the great work, and I love how Sesshy acts in this fic. Very funny. Ja!!
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Title: hi
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:51 EST
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I absolutely loved this chapter it was really great. can't wait till your next update. buh-bye
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Title: Rain Of Stars
Reviewed By: Rain Of Stars [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 19:20 EST
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GAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH--*pant, wheeze, then is unconscious from being out of breath* @_@ Kago: *gasps* Oh no! Rain-chan!! *checks over for injuries* Inu: *raises a brow then walks over to the scene* Hmm? What happened to the Drop? *looks closer at a swirly eyed Rain* Sesshou: *sighs, shaking his head as he picks her up bridal style* Nothing of importance. She just forgot to breathe. Kago: *looks concerned* Will she be ok? Sesshou: Hai. She just needs the remedy. Inu: *curious* And what is that?? She sleeps like a rock! Sesshou: *sighs for the second time that day* You'll see...*Inu and Kago lean in curiously as Sesshou clears his throat* *sweatdrops* Where have i placed my silky boxers? I am absolutelly NAKED without them! Inu and Kago: *sweatdrop, face faulting when Rain bolts awake looking worried* Rain: *practically drooling* Sesshou NAKED!?! *looks around frantically* WHERE?!? *hits self in head* Oh, i mean, i didn't take them!! *looks nervous* Inu and Kago: *fall on the floor at the scene as Sesshou shakes his head knowingly down at Rain who smiles up at him* Sesshou: Take the time to breathe next time Rain... Rain: *huggles his torso* You know you love me, Fluffy-kun! ^^ *turns to SF* Oh--the reason why i screamed! ^^ *glomps SF with all her might* Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!! *jumps around holding SF's hands, flinging her around the room* You made Fluffers human!! ^^ *drops to knees bowing repeatedly* I worship you oh grand creator of human Sesshou! ^^ This chappy was ultra sweet and totally glompable! ^^ Stupenderifous of you! I love this ficcy sooo much! ^^ And this chappy just topped the cake (Mmm...cake! ^^)! I see that Inu-chan was finally added! *the still unconscious Inu flinches at his name* I have a feeling we'll be seeing a lot more of him! ^_~ Hmmm...but Sesshou's transformations are only during the full moon so how is human Sesshou gonna explain his absences? ^^ Yup, i can tell already that i'm gonna love his excuses! ^^ Lol--just pictured doggy Sesshou trying to drive a car! ^_~ Anywho, can't wait for the next update! Meanwhile i'll slowly rot away in a corner...Yup, waiting is fun! ^_~ K, Ja ne! *huggles*
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Reviewed By: holyDark On: January 25, 2004 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ficcy. Please update *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 08:42 EST
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wow, lol i just loved this chappy!
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Reviewed By: ladihouki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 01:49 EST
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This is a wonderful story. Very well written. Only one blinding error, its manilla envelope not vanilla... Sorry I just had to point that out, of course I may be wrong, perhaps you are referring to something else... I like how you are referencing the current society norm of the law. It is very depressing to deal w/this & your depiction of how someone would react dealing w/this situation is superb. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 11:07 EST
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The long awaited update! *laughs* Poor Sesshoumaru. At least he had a nice, warm place to stay while he was a weak human. I'm glad Inuyasha was in this chapter, complete with his typical behaviour!
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Reviewed By: Jazzy Jazz On: January 19, 2004 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE. I love this story. I also think having Sesshoumaru as a dog would be the best thing that would ever happen in my life. (Man, saying that makes me sound, whats the word for it..... single, lonly,etc.)Bye for now T_T. Email me when you update. Ja ne.
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Title: Nightscream
Reviewed By: NIGHTSCREAM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 16:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! I have to admit though i was kinda waiting for Naraku to be peeping though the windows at them or something like that. I wish you would update this fic a little more offten, but i know you have a lot of others that you are working on to (sigh). Please keep up the good work! I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: holyDark On: January 18, 2004 15:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story. Update soon
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: YAY!! Updates! *laughs* I love this story imagine, owning Sesshoumaru as a dog. That would be so cool! Sesshoumaru: Great, she just got another idea. Now not only will she try to find fluffy substitute for my tail, but now she's going to try to find a dog that looks like me. Isis: By the way, fluffy things are so great! *eyes Sesshoumaru's tail but then he moves it out of her line of vision* Oh well... by the way Happy Birthday to you Kagome and SF! *hands them cake* Bye the way, don't think I'm not sending you presents cuz I am. *whistles and a huge dump truck full of presents drives up* There you go! I'm looking forward to your update. And fluffy things rule! *manages to grab Sesshou's tail and huggle it* Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Youkai Yume(not signed in) On: January 18, 2004 01:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yume: This story just keeps getting better and better! CF: CF wishes Yume would give into CF's demands.... Yume: Don't be getting any ideas! Oh! I regret it more than ever now that I don't have a scanner...CF: Yume drew a pic of Sesshomaru in human form {holds up a piece of paper} So pretty! Er...handsome! hehe. Yume: Yes, and if I ever get to a scanner, I'll send it to you! Kay? For now, I'll just settle with wallowing in my own misery, along with all my other Sess/Kag drawings that are colletcting dust in my little art corner. {mumbles} CF: Happy Birthday! CF sends a feather plucking kit! CF knows how bothersome those feathers can be once they molt. {shudders} Save a piece of cake for CF? {hopeful look} Yume: Oh, I give you a hammer! To get out those kinks when you have writer's block. {p.s. using hammer might actually make writer's block worse} lol.
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Reviewed By: DragonRae [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 01:02 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....*glares at Author*...it took you long enough...what ever, I like it!!!!!! Heck I LOVE IT!
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