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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 06, 2004 13:50 EDT
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I'm so glad you updated! I loved the story, but i wish Sesshomaru had something to say about it, and ka- nevermind. you probably dont like flames and that was begining to sound like one! well i liked the dream, and the fact that Sesshomaru let that kid on his back. I'll be waiting soUPDATE ficfan
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: June 05, 2004 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
They were so close. So close. She couldn't wait like two minutes more to wake Sesshoumaru up. Oh well, I guess kissing dream Kagome is not like kissing reality Kagome. Did that even make sense? Oh, well, great chapter and looking forward to more. Much more.
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Title: Great Story!!!
Reviewed By: lil_angel (not login) On: June 05, 2004 19:35 EDT
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Thank You! Thank You! I was waiting for some time for the day you decide to update. Love the story. It's so cute and romantic-in a doggy way, lol. Hope Kagome and Sess. meet again in his human form. By the way, when will she find out his little-okay- Big secret. Sesshomaru rulez!! (He's so cuteeeee)
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Reviewed By: akuma_river (not signed in) On: June 05, 2004 15:33 EDT
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I don't have a clue how you do it. I write and all but my stuff ain't nearly as good as yours and talk about short and unfinished I got two stories out with one chap each from janurary. And now I am working on another cause I forgot what I had planned for the others or how to finish it out. Anyways great stories. Love your work. Keep up the excellent work... *still doesn't understand how you get these longassed chapters out weekly when I can't even get past two pages for one chapter in a month...*
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Reviewed By: lil_rei_chan*notloggedin On: June 05, 2004 14:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~squeals~ you really need to update that!!!! i can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... you get the point. hurry up!
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Reviewed By: ficfan On: June 04, 2004 13:30 EDT
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Hi there im kind of new to your writing but i think this story is great! any story with something with sesshomaru and kagome is great! one thing i saw was all the people things at the end. its a forth of the story page! but whatever floats your boat i always say! well i plan on reading the reest of you inuyasha stories and i hope they're sesshomaru kagome stories too. I enjoeyed your writing and i hope you update soon! the last time you did was may 22 i think and now its june 4! so UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: Chryblosom04 On: May 30, 2004 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update real soon! that was kool making Naraku look like a total retard by getting kagome that watch.I can't wait till Sesshy turns human. Plz Please Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2004 14:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JD: forgive me i read this awhile ago and forgot to review! Sessho: dumb ass. JD: ::twitch:: anyway, I LOVE IT!!! keep it up!! woo-ya!!
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Reviewed By: Luscious On: May 23, 2004 21:24 EDT
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wow. great chapter. naraku is such a slime ball and i cant wait 2 c wut sesshou has up his sleeve. i cant wait til the next update.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 13:38 EDT
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Jeez Naraku is giving me the creeps. A military Stop Watch... for a girl? Please. GREAT STORY! I can't wait to see Sesshou-kun as a human again! YAY!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 05:05 EDT
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Love this story. Keep up the great work.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 02:44 EDT
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yay *claps* another great chapter to your story. yeah i guess it does sorta suck to have side effects to curse but then i guess it wouldn't be a curse. i agree i do love that you made shippou a youkai, he does look very cute that way. Will shippou end up living with kagome? That would be so cool. I wonder what sessy plan is *makes evil creepy noise* one can only guess. lol i need a nap. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: May 23, 2004 00:19 EDT
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Yay, you updated. I know I haven't reviewed in a chapter or two, but things in my corner of the world have been busy. Anywho, Loved It! Shippou is so cute and I love his tail. I love Sesshoumaru's tail also but that is besides the point. Can't wait to see what Christmas is like at Kagome's house and throwing in Sesshoumaru will be interesting. Update!
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: May 22, 2004 20:50 EDT
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well different movie but pretty close to the same death scene. liked the update. very nicely done. i like the youkai shippou too:) hmmm i wonder what sesshy will get her? he likes her he just doesn't know it yet hehe.
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess (not signed in) On: May 22, 2004 20:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: *looks at Naraku's gift* What a piece of crap. *throws it* I hope your plan is a good one Sesshou-sensei or Kagome might actually go out with *shudder* Naraku. Sesshou: *looks up from the open fridge* Hm. All my plans are good and wonderful. Just like the person who thinks them up. Isis: *rolls her eyes* So modest isn't he? Anyways loved it SF! Waaah! Lucky Kanna! I want a giant Sesshou plushie too! And I totally agree, Shippo is much better as a youkai. I'd miss his fluffy tail!! Yay fluffy things! Sesshou: *hides his tail* Isis: -.-; Anyways, till next time SF, ja ne!
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