| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: mikoyami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have been through alot im only 17 and ive been to 2 different children shelthers in the last year im back at my moms but i want to be at my dads when i was at the shelter they said my case didnt call for a gaurdian ad litum so i wasnt granted one with all of the court dates im still stuck at my moms and i have to stay here til im 18.i am glad atleast you work and try to help minors with the problems they face i wish there was more people like you
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: inulover_14 On: August 09, 2006 02:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you gonna keep writing? It is sooooo Awesome! I loved this chapter! Soo who is Kagome gonna take to Sango's Wedding?? Please keep writing? Update Soon.
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, you really have got this story rolling, cant wait for the next chapter this is my favorite of favorites thought you might like to know!
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Title: AMAZING!
Reviewed By: laa_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, you really have got this story rolling, cant wait for the next chapter this is my favorite of favorites thought you might like to know!
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Reviewed By: chibirin8 not logged in On: July 31, 2006 13:35 EDT
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part of me thinks that sesshomaru will not like to et his hair cut but then again taht is just me. hope you update again soon.
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 00:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy to know that you updated this story and I cannot wait for the next chapter >
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 29, 2006 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you are continuing with this story. It's one of my favorites. But I do love all of your stories. They are all very well written. You take time developing the plot and characterizations and it shows. I do, however, think I caught an error in the latest chapter. At one point you said Souta's girlfriend was Kirara. Then a couple of paragraphs later you said her name was Ana. Please update as soon as you can. I really want to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this chapter; it was a good filler. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of Sesshomaru's past. Although, at the rate things are going, it would seem that his curse will never be lifted. There's nothing going on in the way of the development of Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship, other than when he is in human form. I think he should start being slightly more affectionate while in dog form. I'm not talking about anything along the lines of bestiality, but he's so distant.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:33 EDT
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Thanks for updating....Great chapter...Can't wait to read about Sess's past. UPdate soon...
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 12:23 EDT
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nice chapter, thanks for updating!
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Title: Confused
Reviewed By: tf On: July 29, 2006 01:28 EDT
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Has Sesshomaru ever been married? What was the "wi-" when Kagome got cut off by Sesshomaru? But your story is great. You have a great imagination.
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Reviewed By: Danny Girl On: July 21, 2006 20:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man you need to update!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: chapter 19
Reviewed By: ptbear@cableone.net On: July 15, 2006 19:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chapter. Update soon. Can't wait to red when Sesshomaru gets to stay as a human and not the dog.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 23:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao i love this story, and i cant wait for the next chapter! sesshomaru is great oh my oh my. keep up the fantastic writing! CHEERS
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Title: THANX!!!!
Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 14:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoy your fanfic please keep updating!!! you are totally awesome!!!!!!!!! I love your story i've read it over and over until you update each time!!!!(so that i don't forget) *Sits there rocking back and forth holding big white dog!* Update update update update!!! I love your story!!!!! Please update soooooon! thanx so very much!
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