| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: Soleil Chev [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 11:48 EDT
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so cruel...write more! you cant leave it at that. and when is kagome going to figure out about Sesshomaru? not just that he is her dog, but that he and inuyasha are demons?
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Title: malitiadixie
Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I can't remember if I've reviewed before but I would like to say that this fic is wonderful. Although, I do miss the cute little convos at the end of the chappies. I love the play like feeling to it. It was sooooo much fun. Ah well, we can't always get what we want. Anywho, great chappie and can't wait until the next one. I will try my damnest though.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: laa_girl ( nsi) On: June 01, 2007 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cease to amaze me! great twist! KEEP GOING!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 22:05 EDT
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loves the new chap..update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 20:53 EDT
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Chapter 30: That's very nice of Sesshomarou! Is Inuyasha falling in love with Kagome too?
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 18:19 EDT
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"Please, sir, I want some more." Seriously. I did a little happy dance when I saw you'd posted another chapter. Not that I got up or anything. Just wiggled around in my chair happily. The writing is very well done. The plotline is original. You're keeping the characters true to form in this original universe. And best of all, it's not completely predictable. I'm eagerly awaiting what will happen next because I honestly have no idea. Plus, of course, I really want to see what kind of punishment is doled out to your creepy Naraku. And how the hell is it all going to be resolved? Who knows? Only you. So... please... more?
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 14:38 EDT
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OMG....great chapter...Sess is a softie when it comes to her. But why would Inuyasha think it's a bad idea?
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Reviewed By: Kagome360 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 01:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I loved it! Great Chapter! I thought it strange that a person in your story has the same name as a person in my story. Small world, or maybe not? Haha, just kidding; but really though....how did you come up with Shiori? I'd love to know, cause I read it somewhere on some site. But I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Thanks so much!!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 17:51 EDT
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I am absolutely addicted to reading this fanfic >< I can't get enough of the story and I am overjoyed that you updated again. Thanks a bunch and I can't wait for the next chapter so update soon please ^ ~ thanks a bunch!
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Title: Chapter 20-29
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 22:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapters. Update again soon. Can't wait to read who it was that Naraku was talking to,if Sesshomaru admits his love for Kagome, and if Kagome ever realizes that Sesshomaru and Chance are one and the same.
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: May 22, 2007 17:14 EDT
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You know that you have a vested interest in a character when you spend 1/2 of the chapter wondering where he went and if he was ok. The fire was terrible. 1) Where was Chance when Naraku came into the house? 2) How did he get out? 3)Why did he turn human tonight, just when Kagome needed him? 4) Will Naraku get charged with the fire, too? 5)Who was Naraku on the phone with? Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for writing for us.
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Reviewed By: luvluvalicia On: May 10, 2007 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was great! I don't think I can wait for your next update, I'm going crazy!!
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Reviewed By: Kage No Neko(not loged in) On: May 09, 2007 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome as usual.
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:23 EDT
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Well of COURSE we want a better summary! But we also want higher wages, lower rent and peace on earth but you don't hear us complaining about tha--- Oh. Right. But now we know the truth behind sneaky Naraku and the fact that he's working for someone else! Dun dun dun! And what's up with Sesshoumaru turning human a lot more often and during the full moon eh? Some spells starting to weaken even more? Oh! I completely forgot about the guy who can imitate him. Who are we really seeing. Hm. Lovely chapter as always! Can't wait for the nice cute little bow that you will wrap this all up with...eventually. *sits in the corner & tries to wait patiently..gives up and paces*
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:08 EDT
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Another chapter fabulously done. Sess knows now how much Kagome truly loves chance. Which is good. Naraku is finally out of the Picture, also nice. You have no idea how much I love your story! Please update again soon!
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