| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: gradualwisd0m [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 14:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excited to see Kagome's reaction to Sesshoumaru when she sees him again!! OOoo and to see what happens to Naraku. I'm on the edge of my seat!!!
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Reviewed By: nekokyttin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you paint it is probably the right way. Kids are abused constantly, and I am working for a pell grant to get into college and become a victim's advocate for abuse victims. Hopefully, you will bring some enlightenment to the people who read this. Thank you for standing up for the victim. That job has to be hard.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 11:58 EDT
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So Fluffy found Kag's dad's stuff? And put it in her apartment? Hmmm.... my super recall power is not currently working, so I'll just nod and smile... I remember the pouch of diamonds, and tapes... rings a bell... hmmm.... anywhoodle! love the kags/yash interaction! Can't wait to see the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Genie666_28 On: June 24, 2007 02:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing!!! It kind of reminded me of a fic where it was Inuyasha that got cursed into a dog but your story changed my mind (cuz i thought this was just a copy of an original). In this story there is so much going that you really can't be bored ( and I would know because I spent the whole night last night reading all those chapters until now). Even though there's limey chapters (which i love since I'm a lil perv), it's tastefully done and I like that. The writing was excellent and I really hope you continue this fiic because all the strings of the caracter' s lives and Sesshomaru's secet are tied up and I want to see how all of this will unfold. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 18:49 EDT
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HOORAY! An update! I've been checking back regularly hoping, and finally it's here. I can't wait to learn more.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 18:16 EDT
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That was sweet and COOL! Sess is so awesome! He is just one of the bestest persons ever! I'm so glad that he did that! I don't think that anyone really remembered about Kag's dad's things. How Bad ass is that! It was also funny with the Inu and Kag food scene. You are such a fabulous writer! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 17:25 EDT
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yea another chapter, wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 17:25 EDT
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yea another chapter, wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 14:32 EDT
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I LOVE YOU STRIKING FALCON!!!!! You're the only author I know who updates regularly. Thank you so much! I'm so happy you understand the torture of waiting for the next chapter of your favorite fanfic to come out
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 11:31 EDT
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Latest Chapter: Wow, this was absolutely brilliant, as always! I can't wait to read the rest - and I love how you ended it... Bit of a cliffie, but that's okay, cuz it sounded so cool!
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Blood_lust_Vampire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YAY you updated. I am so happy, I look forward to these chapters an insane amount. It's like getting to see someone you love after them being away for months. I sooooo can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Really?
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:28 EDT
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So there may be about 15 more chapters then? Woot! That's great...then again I don't want it to end cuz it's really good ^ ^ I can't wait for the next update and thumbs up on the great work you are doing on the fanfic ^ ~
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 16:11 EDT
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Sooo... when is Fluffy going to tell Kags he's Chance? Kinda a big thing... and you know there will be like three chapters devoted to their fight and reconciliation once he's honest w/her about it... and then Naraku will get out of jail and then big dramatic scene where Kags is taken prisoner... so get to it already! Not to question your almighty plan, but I hate being left hanging!
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Reviewed By: zenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like this story! I stumbled across the fanart Youkai Yume did for you and she linked to it so I had to check it out. Glad I did! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 14:03 EDT
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I'm glad that Sess got to see how much he means to Kagome. It was really funny how everyone wouldn't let Kagome talk. It would have annoyed the hell out of me. If that happens in the next chapter when she goes shopping, or anytime in the future... can you have her blow up on them, 'cause that's is how I, and I'm sure many others, would have reacted. This is another great chapter. I love your story so much. Please update again soon!
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