| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: NewYorkCityUtopia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 04:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I hope newchapters will keep coming...very fast! (still, I wish some missing words and typos were taken care of; sorry for suggesting this when I'm not even a native speaker of English, but spelling matters in any language)
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Reviewed By: beccansnc [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 13:45 EDT
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Oh this story is wonderful. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:05 EDT
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Such a good chapter. Poor Shippo losing his grandma like that. Its just so sad! Oh well atleast he gets to stay with Kagome! Yea! Anyway really good chapter!!! Keep up the good work! Also please update soon! I am desperate to read the rest!!!!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 15:53 EDT
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This was a great chapter! Kagome went to Sesshoumaru's apartment which was funny when he finally arrived, cause I kept wondering why Chance didn't go with her. It was sad that the guardian died. She was really nice. I want Kagome to say something really offensive to The old coot who keeps being meen to her, enough that he won't be able to speak. I wonder what Kagome's case kids will think? And how will Shippo and Sesshoumaru react to each other? Will shippo try to blame some of his mischeviousness on him? That would be hilarious! this was a fantastic chapter like always! Please update again soon!
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Title: *snickers*
Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I love how she handles that snot nosed cretin of a Tai. I can't wait to see hwo that particular Tai "Tries" to handle her, especially when they meet and Sesshoumaru/Chance is around. *evil grin* you have the perfect set up for InuYasha doing the "I told you so" dance and for Sesshoumaru to get reeeeealy pissed off. LOL. Keep up the wonderful work. DD
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 04:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good chapter. I like how Sesshoumaru have changed. I don't know what else to say, but I can't wait for another update!
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Reviewed By: bluefire101 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty good story so far :)
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Title: Tell me what you are thinking :P
Reviewed By: uni_youkai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 19:24 EDT
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I am quite curious to find out about the bite that sesshy did to her neck *wink* And how is he going to explain the fact to kagome that him and chance are one in the same. She damn near gave up her life to find chance in a burning building. Plus she ain't a virgin no more. Great story and I can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer99 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:47 EDT
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Oooo great chapter....I love Kagome's family...they are so funny! When does Sessy come back? I mean as his human form?
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 13:24 EDT
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This is all coming along so well! I wonder if Chance will be given a medal for what he did? I think that he deserves one! Chance seems to be in the habit of saving people. This is a really fantastic chapter and story! I love it soo much! Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 23:01 EDT
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the begining month of june as in next year? well this is an amazing stroy i like it alot and as much as i wish that you would update sooner then that i know that everyone on this earth has somesort of a life! lol. this really is an amazing story keep up the great work! you are an amazing writer.
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2007 23:57 EDT
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oh my god i love this story!!!! please update soon i cant wait to find out what happens next. you are an amazing writer keep up the great work.
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Title: Very Well Done
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must applaud you on your story. I started reading it at 6pm and it is now 11pm. There aren't many stories that hold my attention to the point where I read this many chapters. Once I started I couldn't stop. I am glad you haven't rushed this story. Too many times people rush into the sexual content of it. I love the way you have written all the characters into the story, and how you have Kikyo pestering Sesshoumaru all the time. I am glad those two finally done it. It took them long enough Another thing I love about this story is how you have been able to write a relationship between Sesshoumaru and InuYasha without it being too sappy. I have added this to my favorites and hope to get an undate soon. As I said, this story is the best one I have read so far for Kagome/Sesshoumaru. You have a great talent for writing many relationships into the story. Perfect score.
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Reviewed By: lil rin On: August 12, 2007 07:46 EDT
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Too Short too short too short! (I'm not complaining so much about the length of the chapter, I just want more of the story. :P)
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 12:45 EDT
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AW! Poor Shippo! He is figuring out that his Grandma is dying. Will she pick Kagome as the one to take care of Shippo? She already knows that he's a demon! This was a good chapter and I can't wait for the next one! Please update again soon!
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