| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and I'm so glad that you updated!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and I'm so glad that you updated!
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 17:29 EST
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Sorry I meant Now lol
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 17:29 EST
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I love it...but I cannot find the chunk that is missing ^^;;....I'm not put in suspense for the next character omgosh cannot wait!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:18 EST
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loves it...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 17:36 EST
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~Cries~ Meanie!....lol...This was really good please update soon!!! And what did you promise to Sesshomaru o.O;;...hope you outrun him!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 12:50 EST
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I love this story!!!! It's so great, and this latest chapter has been the best so far! you write so wonderfully, and i truly can't wait for the next installment!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 10:25 EST
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I wnated them to do it, but you were right in how you wrote it. He is honorable and you shouldn't take advantage of a girl when she is drunk. Please update again soon! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: brainshake [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 11:32 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaargh! How can you be so cruel? TT_TT You must update soon! *threatens with rotten tomatoes*
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 04:07 EST
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The second chapter is all one big run together mass with no paragraphs. Also when a new sentence starts the first word is gone. I don't know if it is like that with all the chapters since I have only read up to chapter 2 but I just thought you should know. The story is very interesting and I would love to read it. Can you please fix it?
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Reviewed By: Nydanna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 03:15 EST
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Wow, great story! I'm not usually into Kagome/Sess storied, but this one is great! Hope to read more soon!
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Title: *Throws fruit at you*
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 00:08 EST
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I know Fluffy could never take advantage of Kags in such a way, he's too much of a gentleman... or something like that. Anywhoodle! His senses are getting sharper because he's falling in love! Woo hoo!
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Reviewed By: eskibaby [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 20:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So happy you updated. This is one of the few multi chaptered stories that I've followed and that I continue to read and pine for. Your chapter updates are always quality and it's obvious that the wait is only to ensure that you produce top notch stuff! Keep 'em coming! At your leisure of course. So thrilled that you don't rush and in turn lose anything.
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Reviewed By: daydreamer999 On: January 29, 2007 20:04 EST
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Ooooo greata chapter! I love the Sess Kag moment...such a gentleman! LoL...update soon!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so overjoyed to read another of your chapters!
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