| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kage No Neko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 18:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so awesome! Update as soon as you can!
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Title: .....HI!
Reviewed By: emmi_bubbles On: March 21, 2007 21:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated this chapter/whole entire story a 10 basically because...it kicks ass. This is one of my TOP favorite Sessh/Kag fanfics. I absolutely CANNOT wait for the next chapter. And the way you wrote about Shippo's Grandma...so sad. I am not ashamed to admit that it made me cry. That..and I was already emotional to begin with..so..it just shows that your one helluva writer! Keep it up! Emmi
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Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 21:55 EDT
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I didn't like this chapter. I loved it. It made me bawl like a baby. Oh, one thing: one of your earlier chapters is messed up. Words are missing and the paragraphs are all run together. I almost stopped reading the story because of it. I am REALLY glad I kept on reading. This story is painful and lovely. Like life.
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Reviewed By: Lelbet [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is update soon!!!!!!! Another marvelous chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:07 EDT
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great chapter but I can't wait for next's month; literally I can't.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 09:51 EDT
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This was really good. I almost started crying when Shiori started talking. Please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 00:50 EDT
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Mah, you should definately continue, I can't wait to see more of Sesshoumaru's demon. I really, CAN'T wait, and what's best for the both of them? Sounds delightful, do continue.
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Title: MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 18:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADD MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 02:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MAH!!!! Why are you not having another chapter up and ready?! OH!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 02:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome series i can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 23:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR STORY. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: Daydreamer999 On: February 26, 2007 20:33 EST
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Great chapter...sorry I'm not signed in at the moment.
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Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 15:08 EST
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So why did Fluffy not turn back into a dog? And will he be? Or will he stay a person for awhile? Grr... need more updates!
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Reviewed By: busoshwe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 14:27 EST
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*bounce giggle* Wonderful fluffy chapter! But this decision that he's made sounds very ominous, I hope he's not planning on leaving her! Will Kikyo explain why he got an extra day in humanoid form? I'm glad you've started updating this story regularly again (Though I love all your stories anyway so it doesn't really matter which one gets updated) Will Naraku/Onigumo ever reappear to give Kags trouble? Not complaining, but knowing you you'll probably throw him back in to give us trouble! ;-) Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 13:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's kind of sad, that she forgot all about Chance. Doesn't know when he went missing. But I'm sure she'll start to feel all guilty. What was the decusion that Sesshoumaru made? Sounded like it was something that he didn't want but thought it had to be done. I like this story so much! Please update again soon!
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