| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
| Pages (37): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 23:17 EDT
Comment/Review:
Oh hello.....You are sooooooooooooo awsome ya know that I don't think I've ever had the pleasure of reading such a long story all at once...and its not even finished....I mean It took me (on an off mind ya) about a week to catch up to you updates...though I hope you update this fic soon considering I read sooooo much into it I can't wait until you update it again.....and OMG...I laugh sooooooo much with this fic.....and I love where its going...ya know when I started reading this I was so sure that Sesshoumarus spell would be lifted by this point boy was I wrong I feel like their is still so much more to go......but we already reached the half way point if your going to stay true to what you said to Rin about her showing up in the middle and at the end........she already showed up again so that had to be the middle.....any who What is Naraku going to do to Kagome?....it can't be good and what of Sesshoumaru what will he do will he be able to protect her...I hope so....I kept thinking what would happen if someone (namely Naraku) came after Kagome....but I was always so sure she would be safe because of how if uninvited how impossible it would be to get to her appartment.....and all the people protecting her.........but now....with what Charals said I'm not so sure and I'm getting a little worried......I want also when Sesshoumaru final does break the spell...will Kogome miss 'Chance'?...will she be mad that she was lied to so much? will she fill used?....that would be trully terrible......well any ways I'm a new reader I love this fic and I hope you update it soon.....Okeydoky....XD.............Nyuka
|
Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 15:15 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just finished reading every chapter and let me tell you, I am impressed. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the Inu crew!
|
Reviewed By: karee On: April 21, 2008 21:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ENJOY THIS CHAPTER VERY MUCH I JUST HOPE SESSHOUMARU IS IN THE NEXT ONE. SO PLEASE DONT TAKE TOO LONG AND UPDATE SOON. PRETTY PLEASE?? THANKS YOUR A AWSOME WRITER! SEE YOU SOON, I HOPE.
|
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sessh er.. 'chance' is sneaky. i like that ~sessh-smirk* ~shippo- yay! i always get wat i want! *jumps up and down* ~sessh-.... stop... jumping... or... ill... cut off ur legs! ~tba-hits sesshys arm* stop being mean. he's just a kid. i bet u were like that. *smile* ~sessh-... no... i was a smaller image of myself. ~tba-... in other words. he was born cold,idiotic,and mean. ~sessh-glare* ~tba-glares right back* ~sessh-so are we doing the job? `tba- yea. let me get my stuff. *grabs grappling hook,a set of keys,rope,duct tape, some kind of container ,and gas masks. ~sessh-.... update soon.*Walks out the door with tba* ~tba-see ya! ~TBA~
|
Reviewed By: kashuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 21:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hooray! You updated! And I have absolutely no idea where you're going with this. Do you know how infrequently that happens? More, please.
|
Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 13:35 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was really good! I liked it! Was Charles in any of the previous chapters? I can't remember... The Kuma got what was coming to him! Haha!!! This was a fun chapter! Please update again soon!
|
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 12:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
I almost forgot about our villain. Hmm... Fluffy's human night has got to be coming up soon... there's so many subplots, I don't know which one I want to see the next step to first!
|
Title: Is been fun
Reviewed By: Gome'Fan On: April 16, 2008 06:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wonder,in earlier chapter the Youkai Sesshomaru has awoken but Sesshomaru didnt notice that (Because is hide in well and only Kkyo know that) So what the purpose of the youkai awoken?Attack somebody?Ravishing Kagome without Sesshomaru knowing?
|
Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2008 20:46 EDT
Comment/Review:
gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh ican't wait for u to upate! and YEAH RIGHT SESSHOMARU IS HUMAN!!! hahaha lol i can't wait to see what sessy does! update soon!
|
Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
oh boy I am so ahppy i have finally caught up...i am not usually into sesshoumaru and kagome pairings but you naile it perfectly...they all have their personalities and the story just works...amazing job...i look forward to your next chapter and I will look into your other works as well since I love what you have done so far...keep it up and update soon please XD
|
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 23:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
BUT THATS JUST 4 THE FIRST 2 CHAPTERS.
|
Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COULD U PUT THEM INTO PARAGRAPHS? its hard to read when everthings together. and wat font r u using? its hard to see. not a flame. but i just cant read without my glasses on. and that doesnt happen unless its really small. update soon. ~TBA~
|
Reviewed By: Yushi On: March 21, 2008 06:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Just how dumb is Kagome? Who in their right mind would name their cat son 'Inuyasha? Ah, well... ^___^ Oh, it was so funny. I finished the chapter and immediately said "That sneaky, little bug!" Sessh is going to have an interesting reaction to that one!
|
Reviewed By: child_of_the_moon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 16:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
One word: MORE. I can't wait for the next chapter. I was laughing when Sesshy was in dog obedience school. Please update soon!! =]
|
Title: yay! ^_^
Reviewed By: PitaBread [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 04:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
It's been quite a while! This was a great chapter, I'm glad you haven't abandoned it. Shippou is quite the handful! And Inuyasha was finally revealed - I was wondering when you would do that. But... why did Inuyasha tell Kagome that Sesshoumaru was human? I mean, I guess he kinda is, when he turns human. But... he's gotta see that something is happening to the spell. Man, I'm so excited, and I hope you're able to get the next chapter out a little quicker this time. XD But I know how it is... Til next time!
ÄÁQ
|
| Pages (37): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] |
