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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 12:34 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope you can upsate soon......pretty please with a cherry on top.
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Reviewed By: angelypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 13:43 EST
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I love this fic! I can't believe there are people that actually do that to children that have done nothing wrong! I like that your fic seems so real, yet it's not. I think that it's wonderful that you do what you do! There aren't enough people in the world like that to prevent children from being hurt. I like how it's kinda a cross of other tv shows like Law and Order: SVU and Judging Amy. Those are wonderful shows! Keep up the wonderful writing, and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 28, 2003 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Does Kagome finds out that she is a strong Miko and turns Sesshomaru back to normal. anyhoo this is really good keep it up K
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (aka Defafaeth_Mechqua) On: October 25, 2003 17:19 EDT
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*bursts into tears* You spelt my name with an extra A!!! Nobody ever gets my name right on the first try!!!
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Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 16:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already have it on MM and Killing Perfection. I think I sent links to you but I don't know. I can't remember. But loved this chapter. It's really sad waht you did to poor Kanna though. ::sniffs:: I'll be okay. ::smiles:: Cannot wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru . On: October 24, 2003 22:20 EDT
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We recently had a trial in our town for a man who raped and abused several young girls...the only thing they lacked was proof with dna...and he was found not guilty because of that. The laws surrounding such things are unfair.
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Title: chapter4
Reviewed By: Aira^o^ On: October 24, 2003 21:51 EDT
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Ok.. I was wondering what happen last week? . . . . . anyhow.. sorry to say this but this will be the only fic that I can review until the end of November.. Yep.. Exams.. Finals too.. **sigh** . . . . . . . . . . . Oh well, nice chap.. this is good . . . well . . Keep writing.. Ja ne!! . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . PS: good to know that Sesshou is not going to be neutered ** wink, wink **
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Reviewed By: Paige50 On: October 24, 2003 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter! (only 7 to 8 years? my god, i had no idea it was short!)
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Reviewed By: Paige22 On: October 24, 2003 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! and i totally agree w/ u in that 7 to 8 years for rape of a child is way too short! life may even be too short! --Paige
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Reviewed By: 8Artemis8 On: October 24, 2003 21:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic! I love it so much! And, this is going to be a Sess/Kagome fic right? I can't wait to see how the future for Kagome and Sesshomaru will work out, and what will happen on the new moon. Maybe she will fall for his other form, eh? Well, keep up the FANTASTIC work! Ja ne!
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Title: So Touching!
Reviewed By: YY (Youkai Yume) Too lazy to sign in On: October 24, 2003 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, how I love this story! Yes, I know what you meant, and I have wondered why crimes such as those against a child aren't taken as seriously as it is against an adult. People are sick. Anyways, this was a great chapter, and I hope that guy who raped Kanna gets...Well, I can't say cuz it's really too gruesome. Update soon! ~Yume-chan
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Reviewed By: iram (wackoramaco87) On: October 24, 2003 17:57 EDT
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wow! this story keeps getting better and better! except for the kanna part... i hate that even in america ppl do stuff like that... ::sigh:: we recently had a speaker come in to our school and talk about stuff like that... and he said the same kind of stuff that kag said... that the people feel helpless and stuff...almost made me cry...with all the horror stories ... anyways! keep up the awesome work and thanks for making the chappies long! lol! p.s. where did u get ur idea for this story for??? p.p.s. is kag a miko in this story by any chance?
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bram Stoker's Dracula, I'm very fond of the version with Anthony Hopkins, Wynona Ryder. Very dark and romantic. Anyway, no, I can see where this chapter is not meant to be liked in the sense that it has a very important message. I have two children, and just the thought of something like that makes me sick. Update soon, hope to see a lighter chapter next time, TTFN!
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Reviewed By: sundragon special On: October 24, 2003 16:11 EDT
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I agree with you on the rape topic. I like the story. Oh, I have a question. When is Kagome going to find out that Chance is Sessy? Ja Ne
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Title: Yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good , can't wait for the next chapter ! make it soon. cuz on the real when authors take long on writting chapter readers tend to lose interest and move on to another story and dont make it have liek 50 chapter it gets boring after a whole , just wanted to give you that advise. im not flamin you! i liek so far . i cant wait till she meets him in person, is gonna be soo romantic!! later!!
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