| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 550 ] |
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Reviewed By: kikitravel(I am a member of MM.org) On: May 22, 2004 17:07 EDT
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I was just wondering... what country are they in? It doesn't seem like Japan at all! Is it the USA? How did Sessho get there if it is the States?
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Reviewed By: hissori tenshi no benishi On: May 22, 2004 15:49 EDT
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hahaha sota threw naraku's gift into the wall ! ! ! gee i wonder wat sess is thinkin about duin to it, maybe chewing it into a bloody plastic pulp and burry it in the back yard? heeheehee n e ways, update sooner ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Reviewed By: hissori tenshi no benishi On: May 22, 2004 15:49 EDT
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hahaha sota threw naraku's gift into the wall ! ! ! gee i wonder wat sess is thinkin about duin to it, maybe chewing it into a bloody plastic pulp and burry it in the back yard? heeheehee n e ways, update sooner ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru. On: May 22, 2004 15:48 EDT
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Yay, an update! I just love dog!Sesshoumaru *grins* And now Shippou's demon side has been discovered... *awaits more*
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Reviewed By: ScarWind_999 On: May 09, 2004 23:33 EDT
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oups it was more like chapter 4 sorry...
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Reviewed By: ScarWind_999 On: May 09, 2004 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! and about that 3rd chapter? Far from me is the idea that it wasn't good! It really pulled some string inside me... Seeing the society we're living in being so... it's disgusting to see how somepeople behave... and 100$ for an apartment that big!!!???? Where the heck do you live? Here it's about 400$ for a 4 1/2 lol. Anyway this story is among my favorite ones!
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Reviewed By: SilverFangedTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 02:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JD: hola!!! Sessho: forgive her she just got back from Puerto Rico. JD: Si Si Si!!! hehe. and i'm TAN! yes! woo-yaa!! hah. please update i miss this story! i read it ALL ova again! feh.
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Title: a little confused >
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am a bit confused on in the last chaper, when you did the memory of sesshomaru and mai..... when you did the thoughts of sesshomaru telling the memory. i couldn't really tell.... when it was part of the memory of he just talking to kikyou.... (( or it is just the fact that it is 1 am so i am not paying attention to the symbols that separate them...>< )) p.s i love the way the story is coming out... i have read all your stories and i find them so well written, that it is just amazing.... i wish i could write like you _ _; well i have to get some sleep before i pass out... ^^;.... ~sess * i swoon then fall out of chair; landing apon the floor with a thud, a snore coming from me*
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Reviewed By: Luscious On: May 05, 2004 22:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u r by far my fav fanfic writer and loved this chapter its so cute...queer eye is such a kickass show.lol anyways keep updating its so good and i cant wait 2 c wut happens nxt
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Reviewed By: lady3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 17:28 EDT
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Nice fic!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I really do like it!!!! CAn't wait until next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 15:09 EDT
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There really are times when Sessho is a bit dense! You'd think with his and Kagome's coonnection while in his Chance form that he'd have figured her out better than he has. Or is that maybe what the memory of Mai was leading up to? Ah well ^_^ we'll see right?
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Title: hissori yume
Reviewed By: sess's demonic tenshii On: May 01, 2004 23:20 EDT
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u no the only thing i dislike bout this story is that it takes u oh i dunno about ALMOST 4 FREAKIN WEEKS TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i truly love ur stories iv read all of from FF.NET but that site wont let me review for shit so im stuck here but i love u r writing so much AU: how to train a youkai part1, was the best an i would love it dearly if u were to update Second Chance sooner cuz i love wat u do with sess in ur stories an i cant wait for u to update an i dont really like handin out death threats *gives innocent face* (cof cof yea right cof cof) but i really really really cant wait for ur update so please please hurry an update !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: (fireash) On: May 01, 2004 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe good as always! hmmm how would i like her to die? have you tried decapitation yet? it is a rather interesting way to go. or maybe this...have you seen the movie x? the girl on the cross with strings wrapped around her. rather gruesome when they tightened and she fell into several pieces maybe sess can do something like that with his whip. anyway thanks for updating and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: yasmin On: May 01, 2004 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story !! i cant wait till kagome finds out !! cant wait till their first kiss!!! lord!!! mad props !!good story!!!! cant wait till the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: paige89^_^ On: May 01, 2004 14:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWE! this is by far the sweatest chapter yet!
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