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Title: chapters3-4
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, chapter 3 was so cute and funny. You've done a wonderful job at keeping sessy personality in order. And Naraku is just one creepy guy, ::shivers::. Chapter 4, This chapter was so heart breaking. The whole rape thing just pisses me off, how can people send a phedophile to jail for only 7-8 years!!!?? I hope sessy catches him and rips off his balls!! The scene with Kouga and Kargura was just rich! I loved it. And I did find it funny about Kanna's parents. A reverend huh? Once again a wonderful set of chapters, I can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm on the edge of my seat to see how your going to describe sessy as a human!! Love your story!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that you didn't make up facts. I suppose if I say this is a realistic fic that wouldn't make sense. But, I like how it has such real world elements thrown in there amongst the supernatural. I can't wait for Sesshy's 'time of the month.' Great job!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 14:55 EDT
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"Death by jugular extraction". *giggles madly* I'll have to remember that one for future reference! Although my kids are too young to understand the threat, my husband will know perfectly well just how pissed his wife is...^^ Thanks for the new ammunition in the war against male stupidity, and for the continued fluffiness. Most of all, thanks for the uncomfortable insertion of ugly reality. We need to be shaken up sometimes to remember that society tends to put blinders on to issues like these. I didn't know about the law, either. Consider writing to your governor about that. There are always groups lobbying for judicial revision, and this is an issue worthy of our time!
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Reviewed By: Star moon On: October 18, 2003 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon this so gooooood please please update ok
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Reviewed By: Bloody moon On: October 17, 2003 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon this so gooooood please please update ok
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: 5 On: October 16, 2003 14:52 EDT
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: October 16, 2003 13:33 EDT
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Oaky, so where can I get a dog like this? Maybe I can borrow "Chance" to run off the annoying strays that insist on chasing my right front tire every damn morning. Do you think he would be up for it if I threw in a Scooby Snack as incentive? LOL As always, love it, and love the angst-free chapter. *laughs* And Naraku's reaction was priceless. *blissful sigh* I love good waff. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Katrina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 20:51 EDT
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Reviewed By: Dark Silver On: October 15, 2003 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTE SOOOOON OK
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon On: October 12, 2003 09:32 EDT
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Great chappie, eeeevvvvillll Naraku! *shoots the bastard...* Gee, can you tell who i dont like?? Just a quick question, is Kikyou going to come in to play? And haha~ i updated my story!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2003 01:37 EDT
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This is a most fabulous work as all your pieces are! I'm just a little confused about Sessh's markings showing up. Were they noticable before? Or did they show up because he's starting to respect Kag? Good luck! (I love your trilogy and bearing witness tales too!)
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 12:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVEEEE THIS FANFIC! Now update!
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Reviewed By: REDWOLF On: October 11, 2003 12:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope Sess bites Naruku in the a$$! I can't wait until Sess changes!! I hope he starts to understand Kag better!!!
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'allo! this story keeps getting better and better! it's kind of pooy that you're going to update every 2 weeks but oh vell! ^_^ i have 2 questions... isn't naraku a demon in this fic? and when will inuyasha come??? =D
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2003 11:08 EDT
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I'm only able to review this because Inu and Sesshou kept you from killing me! Or at least, trying to kill me...I would have called on Alucard had you been a threat ;p I really like this story...you've definately made Naraku a creepy guy. I like Sesshoumaru's personality showing, even though he's a dog. And wow, what a huge dog...I need a dog like that! He sounds bigger than the Great Pyranese dogs that my neighbor has.
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