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Reviewed By: JessicaShade On: February 14, 2005 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're spelling and grammar are kind of off from time to time, but not much.The creativity you had was awesome! I don't think i would've been able to come up with this type of story based off of Inuyasha, so congrats! I laughed a lot through out the chapters, and i think you made Sesshou really cute in both dog and human form. I can't wait till the next chapter comes up, i'll definetley read it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 21:21 EST
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are you having trouble with this story? just wondering though
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't remember if I reviewed this chapter, but I really enjoyed it. I wonder if Sesshomaru was getting territorial b/c of smelling Shippo on Kagome. I can't wait til you update again.
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Reviewed By: battousai rk8520 On: February 08, 2005 00:56 EST
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDAT EITS BEEN LIKE...2-3 MONTHS!? I CANT WANT ANY LONGER PLEASE UPDATE
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl *not Logged in* On: February 02, 2005 01:29 EST
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This is sooo good!! Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: draegon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 23:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading this fic, and feel that it's time I left a review. I'm really enjoying this fic. Sesshomaru is trying hard not to fall for Kagome, but he seems to be in love with her while he's in human form. I love the arguments that he has with Kikyo, I'm guessing those are meant for comic relief. I'm also happy with how you keep the Youkai as they are. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I also have the feeling that Naraku is going to be planning something. Not sure what yet.
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Reviewed By: Foxyroxy15c [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 22:11 EST
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I love this story plzzzzzz update soon!!!
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Title: Second Chance
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 18:30 EST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Vicsy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 14:10 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh! That was a total cliffhanger! SO unfair. But I think I know sho the kid is, it's Shippo isn't it?! Oh well, guess I'll find out later. Just wanted to tell you how much I love this fic, so don't make me wait so long for an update next time, k? Keep up the good work, your doing great!
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Title: WoooHoooo!!
Reviewed By: sango16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 00:22 EST
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I've been waiting for this update forever. I loved this chapter it was awesome. I have a feeling the dog kanna got is going to have a more important role in the story. Aww they're getting married i understand snago about the wedding i want everything to be perfect for my wedding. What is chance up to and why is shippou so depressed? Is kagome gonna adopt shippou or antother one of her kids? which one of Kagomes kids is missing? I can only remember kanna and shippou is there more? It can't be one of them. please say its not one of them. Man i ask too many questions. Please update soon. Buh-Bye ^__^
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 16:52 EST
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oh my goodness you updated! i can honestly say it was worth the wait i love your stories! well, until next time!
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Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 05:53 EST
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*does a little dance* I so love this story! Sesshy as a pet dog who's secretly a gorgeous demon lord. Ahh, a girl can dream, can't she? Anyway, this is a lovely story, and I like how you include real life, like the hardships of child abuse. It lends the story a more realistic side. I really enjoy Kikyou, too. It's so amusing when she sneaks into his brain and annoys the hell out of him. I was wondering, though. Is she really there as like, a part of the curse, or is it secretly his subconscious feeling a bit of regret? The latter seems a bit unlikely, though. *laughs* Anyway, awesome story and I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! If you get really bored, I have a Sess/Kag fanfiction called 'Shot Through the Heart'. Until next time, Happy Fluffy Dreams!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 03:53 EST
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Wow great chapter. coolsa.
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 03:42 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great job loved the chap! :P
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Reviewed By: Mystic Hanyou - not logged in On: December 13, 2004 19:46 EST
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Great chapter. I like that Sesshoumaru is feeling jealous. Bet he smells Shippo's scent on her cloths, and it's driving him mad. Hope you can update real soon. Later.
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