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Title: So Touching!
Reviewed By: YY (Youkai Yume) Too lazy to sign in On: October 24, 2003 20:10 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh, how I love this story! Yes, I know what you meant, and I have wondered why crimes such as those against a child aren't taken as seriously as it is against an adult. People are sick. Anyways, this was a great chapter, and I hope that guy who raped Kanna gets...Well, I can't say cuz it's really too gruesome. Update soon! ~Yume-chan
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Reviewed By: iram (wackoramaco87) On: October 24, 2003 17:57 EDT
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wow! this story keeps getting better and better! except for the kanna part... i hate that even in america ppl do stuff like that... ::sigh:: we recently had a speaker come in to our school and talk about stuff like that... and he said the same kind of stuff that kag said... that the people feel helpless and stuff...almost made me cry...with all the horror stories ... anyways! keep up the awesome work and thanks for making the chappies long! lol! p.s. where did u get ur idea for this story for??? p.p.s. is kag a miko in this story by any chance?
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Reviewed By: Blue Saiyan Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 17:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bram Stoker's Dracula, I'm very fond of the version with Anthony Hopkins, Wynona Ryder. Very dark and romantic. Anyway, no, I can see where this chapter is not meant to be liked in the sense that it has a very important message. I have two children, and just the thought of something like that makes me sick. Update soon, hope to see a lighter chapter next time, TTFN!
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Reviewed By: sundragon special On: October 24, 2003 16:11 EDT
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I agree with you on the rape topic. I like the story. Oh, I have a question. When is Kagome going to find out that Chance is Sessy? Ja Ne
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Title: Yasmin
Reviewed By: Secrets [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far so good , can't wait for the next chapter ! make it soon. cuz on the real when authors take long on writting chapter readers tend to lose interest and move on to another story and dont make it have liek 50 chapter it gets boring after a whole , just wanted to give you that advise. im not flamin you! i liek so far . i cant wait till she meets him in person, is gonna be soo romantic!! later!!
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Title: chapters3-4
Reviewed By: lillithan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, chapter 3 was so cute and funny. You've done a wonderful job at keeping sessy personality in order. And Naraku is just one creepy guy, ::shivers::. Chapter 4, This chapter was so heart breaking. The whole rape thing just pisses me off, how can people send a phedophile to jail for only 7-8 years!!!?? I hope sessy catches him and rips off his balls!! The scene with Kouga and Kargura was just rich! I loved it. And I did find it funny about Kanna's parents. A reverend huh? Once again a wonderful set of chapters, I can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm on the edge of my seat to see how your going to describe sessy as a human!! Love your story!
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Reviewed By: BelleDayNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like that you didn't make up facts. I suppose if I say this is a realistic fic that wouldn't make sense. But, I like how it has such real world elements thrown in there amongst the supernatural. I can't wait for Sesshy's 'time of the month.' Great job!
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 14:55 EDT
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"Death by jugular extraction". *giggles madly* I'll have to remember that one for future reference! Although my kids are too young to understand the threat, my husband will know perfectly well just how pissed his wife is...^^ Thanks for the new ammunition in the war against male stupidity, and for the continued fluffiness. Most of all, thanks for the uncomfortable insertion of ugly reality. We need to be shaken up sometimes to remember that society tends to put blinders on to issues like these. I didn't know about the law, either. Consider writing to your governor about that. There are always groups lobbying for judicial revision, and this is an issue worthy of our time!
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Reviewed By: Star moon On: October 18, 2003 14:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon this so gooooood please please update ok
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Reviewed By: Bloody moon On: October 17, 2003 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG Please update soon this so gooooood please please update ok
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Title: 5
Reviewed By: 5 On: October 16, 2003 14:52 EDT
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: October 16, 2003 13:33 EDT
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Oaky, so where can I get a dog like this? Maybe I can borrow "Chance" to run off the annoying strays that insist on chasing my right front tire every damn morning. Do you think he would be up for it if I threw in a Scooby Snack as incentive? LOL As always, love it, and love the angst-free chapter. *laughs* And Naraku's reaction was priceless. *blissful sigh* I love good waff. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Katrina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 20:51 EDT
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Reviewed By: Dark Silver On: October 15, 2003 20:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTE SOOOOON OK
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Reviewed By: Crimson Demon On: October 12, 2003 09:32 EDT
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Great chappie, eeeevvvvillll Naraku! *shoots the bastard...* Gee, can you tell who i dont like?? Just a quick question, is Kikyou going to come in to play? And haha~ i updated my story!
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