| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Title: ch. 58
Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am loving this story. Please update soon! ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 23, 2004 23:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo,Great chapter and wonderful story...This story is the best and I just want more..More,more..So please update again soon and if you keep writing I'll keep reading...TTFN
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 23, 2004 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter. Keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: Saizen On: August 23, 2004 15:33 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good chap..I loved at the end with the candy bars part.That was funny.Update soon and keep up the good work.*_*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 19, 2004 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hert my wrist so I can't type all that well ..So all I'm going to do is begg you to update and say I loved this chapter...
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Reviewed By: priscel ---(@_@)---- [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 19:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
*sighs in relief* but there still could be a bit of a complication, maybe he still needs to be on thoses iron pills? Oi thank you for such a quick update *hugs shenlong* you are so kind to not lengthen our suffering by making us wait.
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! How can you end it there!? Please hurry and update soon! I can't stand the suspence! This is an awesome fic! ^-^ Weissangel24
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: August 09, 2004 15:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well How can you do that,(indigent look)A cliff hanger and there might be something wrong with Duo and The baby...How can you that to us? to them?I can't believe you..@_@ Please don't let Duo's baby die......
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Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: August 08, 2004 20:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
you left it as a cliffie... why?!?! You must update... I must know what has happened to poor Duo... *sighs* this story is really really good, the plot line for it is more original thans others. So now i must say... update soon! You just had to leave it when things got good... v.v poor Duo... Poor Hee-chan... what r they goona do!!! Dun Dun Dun ddduuuunnnnn.... okay im done now. JA Ne! Fujinakaheero
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Reviewed By: priscel *gasps* On: August 08, 2004 17:20 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ile!!! *gasps* man please update soon! oh man oh man! Duo!
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Reviewed By: Ni-san On: August 08, 2004 13:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
HOW COULD STOP THERE? AAAHHHHHHHHHH!!! Thanks for updating and I can't wait to find out what happens to Duo and what could be the problem with him...ja ne
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Reviewed By: priscel *blinks* On: July 29, 2004 05:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
*slowly a smile dawns on her face until she beams with happiness* Man I need to stop with the cheesin' huh? well i had no really comments just sharing the smile you update and chapter brought. (^_^)
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
btw...Down with Bush!! Suport Same Sex Marages!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 02:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
*sighs and looks at hubby poo and calls out* Lover...i wana have a baby *hubby poo roles his eyes and drags Kix by the hair to bed* eeeekk..night night all it's 3am...know where your condoms are??
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 27, 2004 21:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
All in all that was a cute chapter. Keep up the good job and update soon.
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