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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 27, 2004 14:19 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was cool really,really cool..I really enjoyed reading that!!!!Your stories and chaptres just keep geting better and better..I really like this story...
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: July 25, 2004 19:00 EDT
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another chapter i like purple... very light... i just love it... so its just and opinion.. yellow really dont... and i heard that you must put yellow clothes to a newborn baby... for good luck... see ya... my favorite MPREG fic...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 23:03 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Title: Chapter 54
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:29 EDT
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Careful now - you're making these two sound better than any expecting couple I've ever met! It's fun watching them deal with Duo's mood swings, and I must admit that I love "Expectant Father Heero." He's learned how to deal with Duo's quick-change personality, I love how he helped Duo out of his slump after Hilde left. I hate that I get choked up right along with Duo whenever he becomes emotional. Nurse Brown is a dear. She seems to be turning into the mother neither boy had. Great job again!
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Title: Cute Hee-chan
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: July 19, 2004 21:02 EDT
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Hey that was a cute mental image... a naked Heero surrounded by bubbles... playing with a rubber duck.. ok i admit it... a rather hot one too... but i love it
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 18, 2004 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so verry much for updateing this story...:) I just got back fro visiting winnsbobr,Texas...The home of the (Autom trails...)And read this chapter And It was great...It is a wonderful story and I really can't wait untill your next update..So please update again soon ...^_~
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Reviewed By: priscel *mouth forms 'oh'* On: July 17, 2004 19:47 EDT
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*snickers* rubber ducky...man Heero has to be plain adorable.
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Reviewed By: Megan B Black [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my hod... I love this fic, I mean that I really, really love this fanfic. You make it so realistic and it would be impossible for me not to admire the way that you write. The ratings that I've given you are no less than you deserve. Your talent far surpasses most of the other people that I have seen writing. Absolutely brilliant, especially the way that you made us wait thirty-something chapters before we were told that Duo was pregnant, though we could have already foreshadowed it from your writing. Abso-fucking-lutely brillant. ~bows down and kisses the ground you walk on~ I now dub thee one of my gods/goddesses. I thank thee for giving me the privilege of reading your splendid work! Now, I must depart! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: priscel--- On: July 10, 2004 00:24 EDT
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man i just wanted to say that i'm glad you didn't end this fic awhile back, cuz i think its great that we get to find out what's going through d's and h's mind as they go through the entire baby process and share these sweet moments to be reminded just how much heero loves duo and their baby. I know this is plain evil, but i'm sure they know the risk... if duo were to lose the baby that would be unbareable... sorry just a worry, just like i'm still a bit weary of doc G.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 10:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaw! That's all I have to say. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 09, 2004 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good, emotionally. it made me cry. that's so sweet, and sad too.oh It's so lovely. I thikn it's beautiful..This is really good. I mean *really.* I could never write like this, with so much feeling. Great job! OH! I love this story Simply adored this chapter, Two thumbs WAYWAY up! *wink*
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Reviewed By: RitoruIkko On: July 08, 2004 23:24 EDT
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I really like the story but...since my mom works in a baby store and sells the stuff for a living, I do have to make a small comment. Babyseats for newborns should always be rear-facing, to ensure higher safety - At least that's my understanding of the reason. And it is true that pricey items are usually better/safer, but not always (*growl at Eddie Baur Car Seats*). I love the way everything is going. I just couldn't help but point out that tiny detail, yup some part of is that anal. Anyhoo, keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 01:07 EDT
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*wipes a tear from my eye as i finish reading the last line* ohh ..it's soo beautiful!!! lookin forward to next chapter *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac (Not logged in) On: July 03, 2004 04:30 EDT
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First-time parents are always fun to watch in those major baby stores! They walk into the store and look like they're fighting the need to pass out! But, as Hilde pointed out, they don't seem to realize that there are lots of the same thing, and that's part of what makes the place look so huge. Their comments on some of the 'necessities' were priceless! My favorite part was at the end of the chapter when Duo came across Heero looking at the crib. Their promise that their child wouldn't want for anything was absolutely precious. More Kleenex material...
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:27 EDT
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Sorry for not reviewing in such a long time! Needless to say I had some translating to do when it came to this chapter, lol! Aussie terms for baby items are certainly very different from the ones I'm used to. This was a very cute chapter. I really liked the playful teasing between Heero and Duo. Update soon!! ~Wanders away looking through the many items in "baby world" ~
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