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Reviewed By: Patty40 On: July 02, 2004 03:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could make this longer,But I'm in a hurry..But I would like to say I loved this chapter and you are a great writer..So please update again soon so I can read more...And thanks for the fast update...
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Reviewed By: Shenny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 12:50 EDT
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Just in reply to Shinigami Twin 04 and the blood types question... I cannot find any official release on any of the GW characters blood types anywhere. Yes there are a few sites out there that list their blood types as A and B but that information is based on culture, race and person characteristics, not a reliable source and therefore why I chose not to use it. I have asked several of my friends, some who have been in the fandom for years and none of them can find an official release on the characters blood groups. If you can tell me where you got your information on in regards to the blood types I'd be more than happy to check it out. Meanwhile, thanks for reading the fic and I hope to read some of your works in the near future. ShenLong. ^_^
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Title: Shinigami Twins
Reviewed By: Shinigami Twins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 20:50 EDT
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Oh and here I am again, Shinigami Twin 04, Quatre Raberba Winner, and I know you must think I sound crazy with what I am saying here cause I call myself Quatre, but gomen nasai. Anyways, I would like to reassure you and let you know that my other twin I know has enjoyed what I have told of your fanfic, and that says a lot if you know Heero. ^_^ I will try taking note to look at some of your other works. Speaking of works I should go and type more of mine before Heero kills me. ^_~
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Title: Shingami Twin 04
Reviewed By: Quatre Raberba Winner On: June 30, 2004 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not much on noting that style and spelling I should probably not comment, basically I see nothing absolutely amazing but it is better than what I do (especially the spelling part) ^_^ Anyways and it is quite enjoyable but not the best in the world, and the orginality rating is so high cause I love your idea and I have an intregue in medicine so you are doing well in that aspect which I apreciate, and you do your research instead of just assuming, though there was one part of reserch you seemed to overlook. Being a dear Gundam Wing fan I mustn't and won't hesitate to ask you to correct your mistake. Duo is blood type B and Heero a blood type A. Now that you know when and if you revise (and I hope you will at least that one part) you can fix it. Sorry but I am a hard core fan and I belive that if you are fortunate enough to be given the information in the world of anime you go ahead and use it. And since I am not sure how aware and into Gundam Wing you are I am not trying to be mean and that is why I am not being a plain bitch about it. And if you feel better you can go and read my fan fic called Kindness is a Sin and pick it to bits. Written by Shinigami Twins (gomen but 01 (Heero Yuy) refrained from reading this fan fic, but I don't hesitate to give him all the details ^_~) Great job and that was the only complaint thus far, so personally I say your are doing an absoutely fantastic job! Keep up the good work! And I remind you I can't spell worth crap nor type, gomen nasi |
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 13:19 EDT
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Damn! shame on Heero for saying such a thinkg to Duo! How could he! A my main concern is that Heero and Duo got all gushy in the changing room... Heero's main concern was to consol Duo, so I have to wonder if there was someone there who overheard? They may think nothing of it though...
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, at least Hilde didn't faint and that was so sweet of her to ask Duo to give her away. Great couple of chapters! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:17 EDT
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Ooh, I can't wait till you write more. Oh, I didn't know what a Crunchie bar was until I found one. I've had stuff that's like Crunchie bars but I didn't know that was the same thing. I found them at the Sweets from Heaven store. I'm here in the US so I had no idea Crunchie bars were even here. I was shocked to find them but I cought a couple. They're really yummy. ^_^
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Title: Crunchie
Reviewed By: rosedreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 19:56 EDT
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Just wanted to say that I took your advice and bought some crunchie bars... Yummy. Had to go on the net to Amazon.com and they're $1.30 plus shipping.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 21, 2004 18:26 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Ahh I really enjoyed this chapter..Please update again soon...^_~
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: June 20, 2004 19:02 EDT
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The last comment was really funny. Update soon and keep up the great job.
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Reviewed By: lucinda_sarah On: June 20, 2004 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i have to say you definetly are a responsible person 50 chapters and still going this is probably one of the few fics that are this long ! I think the one thing that may well improve it would be more excitement i kow you have written many fics cause i recognised your nick at the first sight seen it somewhere! Pls this is just my point of view so don't be upset but keep it going and coming =)
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 16, 2004 22:04 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know I said this ready ,But I have to say it again...Sorry I really wish this review can or could be longer .... But my daughter is still sick so I only have a minute to check my mail ,So I'll say I love this story and your a great writer and please update again soon ...Please give to the epilepsy foundation so children like my daughter (Jillian)can live longer...I hope I don't in trouble for the epilepsy thing...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: June 16, 2004 18:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really wish this review can or could be longer .... But my daughter is still sick so I only have a minute to check my mail ,So I'll say I love this story and your a great writer and please update again soon ...Please give to the epilepsy foundation so children like my daughter (Jillian)can live longer...I hope I don't in trouble for the epilepsy thing...
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Title: Ohhh
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: June 16, 2004 03:38 EDT
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Well that was a diferent reaction... hahaha variety... i want to see Heero and Duo shopping time... n_n kisses and hugs
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 23:29 EDT
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Hilde's reaction is a tad... odd. I only hope it's a positive one and not due to something like an inability for her to get pregnant. So Duo's almost made it through the first trimester. Woo hoo! BTW, I love his little 'emotional' spells. :)
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