| "Chimaera" Reviews/Comments [ 580 ] |
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Reviewed By: Skeren Dreamera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 11:19 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the second time I've run through this story, and you've added a good fifteen chapters since I last caught up with it. ::huge grin:: It's one of my favorite stories actually. I will mention one thing though. Men do have mamary glands from what I understand, they are just, overall nonworkable. Not to say Duo will be able to produce milk by any means. But it's there. ::bigger grin:: Cause I know of cases where men have started lactating. Okay, that's all I wanted to say, I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 17:40 EDT
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More, more, MORE! Need more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 01:57 EDT
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Ah it's good to see Duo get released from the hospital, and Heero able to finally get a good night sleep! Oh jeez, I can just imagine Heero being one of those anal parents that makes everyone wash up before holding the baby (if he even allows anyone to hold it!), while Duo is just the opposite - loving to watch others hold the infant and gush over it. I loved Heero's reaction when he thought of Duo not having mam's! I have a feeling he's going to inadvertently add a lot of comic relief for the rest of the fic!
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Reviewed By: Chassity23 On: May 07, 2004 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I just wanted to say I love this fiC! I just started reading... ch 25, so don't stop updating on my account.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 07, 2004 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each chapter keeps geting better and better ..I really can't wait to read the next chapter... So as always please update,update,update...And I hope to read more soon...^_~Thank you for such a wonderful story...
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Title: Chapter 41
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 00:42 EDT
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My daughter had something close to an RH problem and had to have blood tests every week for her first two months of life. You did a good job of capturing the fear of the unknown as the boys waited for the test results. Nurse Brown is great! I think she could fill in for the mother neither Heero nor Duo remember. Poor Heero is going to collapse if he doesn't take a break soon. Understandably, there's lots for him to do, but there are some things that his friends could have helped him with, like pack and unpack. Is that a premonition Heero had at the end of this chapter? :(
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 01, 2004 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm trying so hard to come up with the best review... Because this is one of the best stories I have red in a long time, and I wanted to give it the best review I could!!! SO here goes, "this story is fantastic, it is the best ..."I love the way Heero tries to take care of Duo and the way Duo screws with Wufei... I can't wait till Qarte and Trowa show up ..!!! I give this story 2 thumbs up, and not just want, but need to read more of this story ... Ok I guess that's all I have to say for this review except please update soon..^_~
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 18:37 EDT
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Yay! Duo's going to be leaving the hospital and going home with Heero. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 14:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I soo hope that Duo and the baby will be alright. Update soon! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 28, 2004 13:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was damn good!! I loved it! You are very expressive and brilliant.. write another chapter soon...
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 18:19 EDT
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I hope Duo and the baby will be okay. I can't wait for Duo to actually have the baby. A little version of both Heero and Duo would be so cute to see. I'm glad you've been writing these chapters so quickly. Can't wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 13:47 EDT
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YO! (snickers) heero teasing Duo, how KAWAII! hmm coffee, I know that it doesn't hurt for pregnant peeps to have some, but please no more coffee.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 03:12 EDT
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This is really, super great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 21, 2004 20:35 EDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Thank you so much for updateing ..I so love this story and look forward to each and every update ...So please update again really soon...@_@
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