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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 20, 2004 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great chapter please update again soon.....
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 00:24 EDT
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I can just see Heero and Trowa sitting with their heads in their hands, grinding their teeth as they try their best not to strangle Quatre! At least Duo can blame his hormones! It's good that each couple understands what the other is going through and as a result needs the privacy. The problem is however, the more people that know, the more of a chance there is for the information to leak. Heero's reaction was pretty typical, and funny! I'm sure he'll be relieved once Sally can set him straight(and so will Duo!)
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: TErry Maxwell On: May 19, 2004 20:55 EDT
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Owww that was so sweet... by the way the past chapter oh i was laughing so hard with Trowa and Quatre... especially when Tro-man says he is going to get a divorce... jajaja that was funny... loves see ya
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 13:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sighs* I just love fatherly Heero. Great chapter! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 21:04 EDT
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*snickers* Quatre was adorably obnoxious. I almost expected Heero to attack him. That was a little mean and OOC for him to ignore Trowa like that; lol, but it was funny. Can't wait for the next chapter!! ~Wanders away snickering~
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:03 EDT
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Whee! I can't wait for the next chapter to be finished. Whee! This chapter was fun.
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Reviewed By: Reneé Nobumoto On: May 14, 2004 21:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been my experience with pregnancy, that it's best to let them eat *whatever* they want... otherwise, it comes right back up an hour later. *Talking from experience, foods don't often taste the same coming back up as they did going down either.* This is an incredibly enjoyable fic, and I'd love for you to update soon!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: May 14, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great chapter ....Please, please,please update again soon....
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 03:11 EDT
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lol..i guess Quatre can be a talkative little bugger cant he...ohh well give that boy some doggy downers and hand him over to Trowa and they'll be fine!
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Reviewed By: Ecclectic Electric Etna On: May 13, 2004 23:44 EDT
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Every time one of those guys faints I got the urge to sing "Another One Bites the Dust" Heheheh. Although, it didn't surprise me in the least that Quatre was the only one that didn't faint; not really sure why though. It has been my experience with pregnancy that it's best to let the mother eat whatever she wants. For example, my aunt, couldn't eat anything at all unless it was covered in chocolate sauce, my mother couldn't eat oatmeal, and as for me, if I ate anything except what I was craving at the time it came right back up an hour later. It may be a little different in Duo's case, but then again, maybe not...
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Reviewed By: prisc On: May 13, 2004 20:57 EDT
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aww no alone time for the two love birds. I hope that they get spend the whole day in the next chapter cuddling. (^_^) They're so cute.
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Reviewed By: ki-tsu-ne On: May 13, 2004 20:15 EDT
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Um...compared to your other chapter, this one seemed like a...well, filler. I mean, Trowa and Quatre did find out and that was important, but the characters seemed a little out of character, especially the speech. It seemed a little too formal, especially Duo. And Quatre really showed his blond side in this chapter, although maybe you meant him to be amusing in a silly, sort of dumb, way. Overall, this chapter had quite a different feel to it than your others.
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 15:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Quatre can be cute sometimes but he won't shut the fuck up! And poor Heero now that Trowa and Quatre are staying, he won't have *alone* time with Duo now. *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Duo and the baby are all right! I wonder how Quatre and Trowa will react to Duo's pregnancy? Update soon! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Rav Rev On: May 10, 2004 04:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! Why did you stop there? I wanted to see how Quartre and Trowa would react to Duo's pregnancy. So far three of the five Gundam pilots have fainted. I wonder if Quartre will faint or he will know in a small way because of his spaceheart? I guess that Duo and Heero will have to lay down pillows on the floor to catch both Trowa and Quartre when they both faint.
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