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Reviewed By: Janet On: April 06, 2004 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Really Really Hot I Love This Story Go ON With Ya Bad Don't Stop Till U Drop Write MORE please
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Title: help me convert
Reviewed By: debbiechan On: April 02, 2004 14:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a hardcore B/V fan who nonetheless takes a delight in G/V yaoi every now & then. I was wondering where you were going with this story and was pleasantly surprised at the depth of character development, the realistic yet lush lemons, the hopping great Radditz treatment (woo!)the well-paced (actually exquisitely drawn out) torture of our Vegggie, and well, um, I'm liking this fic in spite of my general dislike of AU Yaoi! Goku in character, Vegeta is interestingly angsty not utterly humiliated, and wow, a dyke Chi Chi--I think I always suspected--LOL! Keep up the good work! I want to see Vegeta comforted at last...and maybe a Bulma back to get a full realization of what she's lost, hmm? I love Bulma, she loved V--doesn't she want the best for him???? Well, look at this--you've made me write a long review. I'm impressed! Debbiechan put me on update list shalombayit@juno.com
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Reviewed By: starkat On: March 30, 2004 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i haven't reviewed before!!! i really like the story though. Especailly the part about Denda, Gohon's identity crisis, and then the Goku and Vegeta romance(that sounds realistic given Vegeta's past ). please keep writing i really need to know what happens!!! PLEASE!!!
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Reviewed By: babey kisses On: March 29, 2004 23:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story!! so yummy!!!! I have to know what happens!! pleeaase write again quickly!
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Reviewed By: elvenjedi On: March 03, 2004 22:32 EST
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The suspense is killing me! Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: February 25, 2004 18:24 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh i luv this story!! you have to write again QUICKLY. PPPPPllllleeeeeeeeeeaaassssssssssssseeeeeeee
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Title: Shadows
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2004 13:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Talk about leaving someone gasping for breath! MORE MORE!!! =)
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: February 17, 2004 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your Vegeta/Goku pairing. Please write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ranilos [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2004 14:00 EST
Comment/Review:
Hmm.. chapter eighteen… I've been meaning to review this since the chapter one came out, so as you see.. I'm kinda slow with these. ><
But on to the review. First I was quite apprehensive when I saw the pairings Radditz/Vegeta and Chichi/OC in the warnings. Personally I have never been fond of the R/V pairing much and I'm not so interested in reading fics where the pairing is mentioned. A bad case of Goku/Vegeta as OTP, I presume. But... even though I don't enjoy the pairing, in this one it didn't bother me like it usually does. Somehow it was.. just fitting. Kami knows Vegeta sure needed some comfort in his years serving Frieza. *cuddles the poor baby* And Rezu... I don't particularly care for OCs, and there's very few which I can say I like (mostly I'm just greatly annoyed with them), but Rezu can definitely be counted as one of those few. I also liked how you have portrayed Chichi. As she is usually "the bitch" of the story, it's refreshing to see how you have written her in this fic and I actually like her quite a bit. ^^ Not to mention the yuri scene which was very well done. Goku and Vegeta. Well.. Where should I begin... I absolutely adore them both here and how you have characterized them. In my opinion your Goku is one of the most IC ones I've read thus far, and I enjoy every minute when we're allowed to read the story from his point of view. The interaction with him and Vegeta is beautifully done and I absolutely adore all of your G/V scenes -- both the lemony and the not so lemony ones. ^^ And Vegeta… there's just so much need and longing and pain... Oh, I have no words to say how adore this. You can write so much feeling in to your work, and that's the most important quality in a story for me. This fic makes me melt and smile and feel for the characters so much. I can say without doubt that this has definitely earned a place among my favourite fics. ^^ I couldn't help noticing the part in chapter one where Goku said that he was close to a new power level. Since this is after the Buu saga... it's level four? *lets out a fan-girlish squeak and keels over* Will we see him go level four? And will we see how Vegeta reacts to his new form? Keep up the good work and hurry up with the next chapter! I can't wait to read it.
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Reviewed By: Janet On: February 14, 2004 03:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOve It I Love It A Lot
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Title: Blue Siren (not logged in)
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2004 18:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why aren't you getting more reviews for this story? It deserves a lot more than this... I guess I can add myself up to the list of lurkers who don't review. I been following this up at the Yaoi hotel... where I think I've only left feedback for one of the chapters... gomen I will try to be more consistent... you sure deserve it. Keep up the great work!!!
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Title: ch 18
Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: February 10, 2004 16:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story! I look for an update just about every other day. And if there isn't one, well I just reread it, if I feel like it. I thought it was just great how the boys brought Vegeta out of his shell a bit and made him interact with them. It was a good thing in this case, although most times it's annoying.
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 12:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Alright! Some water action! I love shower sex scenes...hell water anything sex scenes! ^_^ Hm, Vegeta's got a trust issue. And I'm pretty sure that the whispers aren't going to stop. Zarbon, Jeice, Frieza...anyone else on the non-consentual sex list? lol Goku passed one test...but how many others are there? Hmmm.... Does Vegeta know about the others that Goku had the Otherworld? I forget.... Well, hopefully that doesn't affect him.... Be interesting if one of those guys came around, eh? ^_~
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Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very good chapter. Not enough Vegeta, but then again, I'll almost always say that if Vegeta is unconscious/dead/etc. lol Hm, glad I looked that up then.... Now you can explain it in a college level class. lol ^_~ Can't wait to see more! And the lemon next chapter? Wow! Already? Hm, suppose it is about the time. The nipple-play was nice, but I want more! lol Till next time!
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Title: hope
Reviewed By: first_love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2004 00:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great but i found just small misspelling and some grammar but i'm not one to talk because i do the same. from the one's i have rade this one is very good to read and not have to warey about if i'm reading a ward or a senctens right or not. i enjoy read and i'm wondering what happens to v/g but also about the other friends too. does the two lover boys get together or not and is there something happening with P/D? i would like to see this stoury end the way it should. PLEASE FINSH IT!!!!!!!!!
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