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| "Par Tout Autre Nom" Reviews/Comments [ 734 ] | | Pages (49): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: earthshine411 (not signed in) On: October 01, 2004 00:42 PDT
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Wow, Naraku? Call me blind, but I didn't see that coming. I love this story; wonderful update. I was very happy to see the little email in my inbox, hehe. I hope you're feeling better, and I understand and respect that updates will be few and far between because you're busy. I just appreciate that you update when you can. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter. ^^
| Reviewed By: Tora-uma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 00:18 PDT
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Oh, now see, that just wasn't fair. Fabulous chapter though, I'm so glad Kouga's back! I really can't wait to see how everything plays out, especially with the way you ended this particular chapter. I am excited for more updates and, as such, you should ignore work and write faster. At least, that's how I wish it could work. Damn the real world! Instead I'll sit here patiently and egarly wait for you to be able to squeeze writing in with everything else. Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: solqua unlogged On: September 30, 2004 22:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oooo, you are so evil, what an excellent cliffhanger. good luck with work and eagerly awaiting your next update.
| Title: Holy fu( |
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (I should sign in. Nah) On: September 30, 2004 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naraku!? Ohhh this oughta be inneresting! I wanna see! Write more! Real life suuuuucccks sometimes. T.T Anyway . . . Poor Kurama. Everyone knows but him. Well, everyone who's not mostly human does . . . I'd write more but I gotta go now. Byebye!
| Title: by any other name
Reviewed By: baa baa blacksheep On: September 27, 2004 14:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hellooooooooo wats up ok .........first of all your story is wonderfully written and interesting keeps readers on the edge.but i want to ask what happened to inuyasha isn't he going to be in the story or is he just a special quest starring in for a oneshot put him in alittle more it should be interesting.keep up the good work update soooooooooooooooooooon.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Sharibet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just spent all weekend stealing time to read the story so far. I've never seen Yu Yu Hakusho, but I adore Inuyasha, and this story came highly recommended on Green Tea forums...deservedly so. What a complex, multi-layered, addictive tale you've crafted here! And for every question you answer, it seems that you raise two more! Wonderful characterizations, humor, poignancy, tragedy, friendship, and fabulous sexual tension. You've even managed to convince me that Kagome would agree to be Miroku's second wife...and Kurama's lover, without lessening her feelings for Inuyasha or going counter to any of the canon relationships. So, again, I say, "Wow!" Great job and I can't wait to read the next installment!
| Title: Chapter 45
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 20:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome update. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens between Kurama/Kagome on vacation, if Kurama becomes part of the family and what happens with Rieko.
| Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 15:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such an interesting chapter...Kurama is a lonely kit who split himself into two personalities for company? Poor little broken soul!! Somehow I find that so poignant. This has got to be the most imaginative and thought-out fan fic I've read. And I just love Shippou's character...so sassy, even after 500 years!! Thank-you so much for sharing.
| Title: excellent end
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 14:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm mightly impressed, with the words used at the end of this chapter, and duely intriged by the whole split personaility Kurama. Looking forword to reading the next chapter, but no rush, I've got school to occupy my time in between chapters now.
| Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 22:50 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Keep up th great work.
| Reviewed By: BRL On: September 23, 2004 18:56 PDT
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Holy fucking freaking son of a god-danged bastarde! I just LOVE the way you write! The section on Youko creating himself another half to keep him company was...heavy! Very, VERY unique and a critical thing in this story line, I'm guessing? It's very hard for me to accept that the my favorite anime character (except Battousai, Kagura and Sesshoumaru, of course!)that Youko would do such a thing...Now, whenever I read an interaction between them, I'll get all funked-out! Ahh...that dude at the end of the chapter was Naraku's or Onigumo's reincarnation, wasn't it? Maybe? Many, many fun things going on...hey, and by the way, what about that marking/scar(s) on Kagome's back? Wouldn't Youko (when he first gave her the rose thing and entered her dream, making her think he was Miroku) have seen those marks? Or am I just sadly confused and it was really Miroku in that dream, then Youko came in later? I don't remember...help! Anyway, thanks for the quick update, hope you feel better SOON! and I'll be awaiting your next update faithfully! Black Rose Lady email: red_flame204@hotmail.com
| Title: Oooooo
Reviewed By: Silver Neko (When did I last sign in?) On: September 23, 2004 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Points at ratings* I thought I'd reiterate my opinion since it's been a while since I last reviewed-- though I've read every chapter when it told me a new one was out. This is still the best fanfic on MM.org (That I've read, for padding against anyone else who's an author who might care to read this). I LOVED how you explained Kurama and Youko . . . though it made it really weird when the transition was made back into those 'two' talking. It seemed to explain Youko saying "my" instead of "our" all the time. If he's holding onto something like that, it'd make it hard for the habit of saying "our" to settle in, wouldn't it? Um . . . Otherwise-- *Reads other reviews* ONLY SECOND?! Hm, I wonder who got first place. Also . . . I've read it elsewhere a lot . . . "per say" is actually "per se." Sorry! And if someone proves me wrong I no take personally.
| Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 17:58 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I really enjoyed dinnertime at the compound and Hiei beginning to feel like one of the family. Now I'm wondering if Reiko wasisname knew who Kurama was or whether he was just talking out of his ass. I had a long day and when I got home from work I decided to drink a coke to wind down before I got productive again. I was very happy to have a new chapter to read while I did that.
| Reviewed By: Tora-uma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 16:03 PDT
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Ooh, another update! Great chapter, it's getting darker and I'm really enjoying it. I love the way you explained Kurama's soul, that's one of the most unique and interesting depictions I've ever heard of his situation. I can't wait to see how everything will play out!
| Reviewed By: Fanfic Crazy Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2004 14:46 PDT
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*sits in her chair with her mouth hanging open* Youko... there was never a Kurama... b-but... *in a small voice* But I like Kurama... ~change of topic~ But OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD!!!!!! I'm re-reading this and I'm as addicted as the first time I saw it on mediaminer... *worships at her improv shrine* You are Fanfic goddess... I must pay homage... *goes back into shock about Youko never actually having a human soul*
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