| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: al On: March 27, 2004 13:29 CST
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angst is a verb? bakura will rescue marik! i hope. i actually really don't like seto here. i can't find a reason for his actions except for hate of being bossed around. so thats why i wish bakura will STAB him or something. and uh cough you don't 'have' to put a girl in. i'm'very'ok with it.
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Title: dfdsg
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEEEEEAA!! TWO CHAPPIES FOR THE PRICE OF ONE VISIT! heh heh XD neways.. AHH AHHAHA that was funny, but not ha HA funny, more like WHOA (in a bad way) funny when bakura umm, did.. that thing that he did @.@ i feel for him. poor marik.. ;-; where he gunna go nooooow!??!? AAAAAAAHHH, and i still dun want to girl in this fic, well at leats not playing a major role, i suppose i wont mind a minor one tho, loving the angst ^^ this fic rocks.. well, im gone now, but i shall return, to yet again review, when the story is updated ^^; XD BYYYYYYYYE!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 27, 2004 10:58 CST
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Woooh, poor guys. Seto's such an ass.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 08:26 CST
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I'm sorry if I offended you, I just figured that since this was Ryou's fic that Ryou should be getting all/most of the angst. I'm sorry! But the angst you're writing is very good, please update soon.
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Title: Loving You And The Story
Reviewed By: lDragen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 03:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*hugs for you* OMG I LOVE YOU AND THE STORY KEEP IT GOING SWEETIE!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 26, 2004 21:40 CST
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Seto's up to something! Gah! Hey, um, it's all great that Yami's being nice and all, and I understand it all too, but it's just that, don't you think all those kindly words are written in a way that they seem to flow so easily out of his mouth? I dunno. Maybe some "..." here and there, etc. As if he's a bit at loss of words or unsure of what to say and react. Anyway! This is turning out interesting, and I can see something bad's gonna happen! You really hafta continue! And I'm sure I know what's gonna happen now! I see your evil plan! Seto saw Jouno and Malik together, right? Now, he's gonna punish Malik by attacking Jounouchi, and you're gonna KILL HIM OFF!!!! Kill anyone else, but don't kill JOUNO!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 26, 2004 21:26 CST
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Ahh!!!! Don't kill Malik! Seto evil! DIE SETO DIE!!!!! Aw...will Bakura escape? He better! And it was Seto who was spying on Malik and Jounouchi right? I know it is!!! Great story!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 26, 2004 21:15 CST
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Aww....Yami and Ryou! *!heart!* Bakura escaped! Yami's good! Everything's turning out good and everything's turning out great and really fun to read. THe relationship between Malik and Jounouchi is...interesting... Please continue FAST!
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Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Debs xxx On: March 26, 2004 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!!!! Aww its so sweet with Yami and the rest of them, all equals. Poor Malik tho...evil Seto...ooo yay, Kura's going to be released!!! wooooo!!!! Hehe Please update again soon!!! Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
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Title: Me again...
Reviewed By: CiJay On: March 24, 2004 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm worried about the Ishtars now too.....>_< Seto can be real evil sometimes, ne? Oh well! You must update soon! I'm dyin here!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 17:16 CST
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love new chapter, but this isn't Malik's angst fic, shouldn't you be torturing him there?
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 24, 2004 16:02 CST
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AaaWWW...Yami's being so nice now! good boy Yami! here you can have your purple contacts back! Yami: *wails from joy* and yessie i'm very happy for ryou!I'm happy when he's happy! here i'll make him happier! *dumps a truckload of roasted marshmallows on him* And Bakura.. wel ok nutin to say much but PLZ DON'T DIE YET! YAMI'S GOING TO FREE YOU! And poor malik can have a hugg... awww... poor you! *hand goes behind and steals rod* MUAHAHA! I got it first! ok AUTHOR! make Seto human again! And nononononononogirls I've decided! plz no girls! actually* uses millenium rod* YOU SHALL PUT NO HAREM! NO GIRLS IN THE STORY!!! ok yes i'm feeling giddy today so i'm doing stuff to people. And update faster and make Marik cry more it looks cute in my mind!
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Title: WOO HOO!!!
Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 24, 2004 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NO! I don't even want to know what Seto will do to the Ishtars now... Those poor boys!! *sob* Anyway. I'm happy you updated! I was getting worried. LOL
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Reviewed By: . On: March 24, 2004 05:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job please write more, I think I sense the ending coming up! Maybe you can soften Seto's heart some with love? TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2004 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good and write soon i love it please write soon poor little ishtar make him all better and Seto better pay big time
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