| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 18:34 CST
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Aw...poor Ryou! That's so sad, especially for that little boy! Well, this is a very fine start! You really should continue!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 09, 2004 21:31 CST
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WAAHHHHH!! POOR RYOU!! DIE YAMI! DIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDIEDI!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STUPID NO GOOD NON-DESERVING PHARAOH! I DUN CARE IF RYOU LIKES HIM LATER! HE CAN DDDIIIEE!!! -_____-... Ok anywayz u put a little too many "instantlys" in one section, the part where Yami opens the door to Seto there were a few little mistakes but who cares it wuz good. Continue plz! And throw him to Seto instead hes better than THE STUPID PHARAOH
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 18:17 CST
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Yay! Ryou gets compassion! He's my bishonen, but Yami can have him if he's nice!
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Reviewed By: zoey hellmaster On: March 09, 2004 07:27 CST
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Very good story!! I can't wait the day you will add another chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 08, 2004 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, Ryou SHOULD roast his marshmellows and Baku likes raw steak anyways. WOW! Ryou found Baku, maybe, if Ryou can remember the way, he can tell Marik and they can see each other again. "Are you my conscience?" HAHAHAHAHA!!! Funny Baku, very funny. How will Ryou react to being a bed pet? I put a nine cause I think you mighta misspelled something, I STILL LOVE THE STORY THOUGH!
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Reviewed By: Lost Wanderer On: March 08, 2004 21:46 CST
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great style and all; the only suggestion I have to is this: Since they're in ancient Egypt; the wouldn't use the Japanese honorifics such as -sama. Instead, they would use the person's title ( ex. High Priest...) almost flowery and suck up in terms of respect/awe/fear/whatever. ^_^ just tryin' ta help ^^; ja na!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 08, 2004 00:21 CST
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this is going to be a Yami/Ryou?? okies, but i'm more of a Seto/Ryou fan could you write a Seto/Ryou fic for me, plz?? i really like your style, and i think you'd write a really good Seto/Ryou
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Title: Yami is Yami no matter what.
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is interesting. Okay this is in response to that review you received. Yami is one of my fav characters( he's so cute lol) anyways but I can't picture him with a girl.I mean I see him with Yugi, and or Seto. Also my favorites. But either way it shouldn;t matter who Yami's with, he's still Yami, thats the whole point. I can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 07, 2004 14:18 CST
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Darn it that wuz dumb u shoulda written more! Who cares if its too long!Well u had better get the next chappi up or i'll hunt u down! And ya leave that flame up so that everyone can c how stupid that person is!!! (why Seto?why?why?why???)
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 05, 2004 23:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, so cute and so angstful. I LOVE IT!!! How's Baku doing anyway? Who does Malik like?
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Title: Royalty
Reviewed By: J-Baby On: March 05, 2004 23:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM GOING TO MAKE MY POINT CLEAR!!! YOU CAN MAKE SETO BE GAY I DONT CARE!!!!! BUT STAY AWAY FROM YAMI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Angel_2891 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 20:28 CST
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more!i need more!!!!i like sory very very much>MORE!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 05, 2004 16:29 CST
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WOW!! so sad! so touching! so waahhh!!! and also very disturbing...why Seto??? TT_TTplz continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 14:02 CST
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this is great! please continue!
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