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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 18:51 CST
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It was my pleasure! :D I love you! (Not literally, ok?) So.. many... new... chapters... YAY! They are wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 31, 2004 18:46 CST
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Oh yea, you wrote Seto as such a perfect villain that I HATE HIS GUTS NOW. And, if I didn't mention it before, after I read that my Jou's head got severed, I went downstairs, looked at the TV, screamed again. Seto's face FILLED the screen. Then MAI's... The world was ready to taunt me. Bai! ^_________________^
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 31, 2004 18:31 CST
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I would've reviewed for every chapter, but I guess I couldn't...Sorry! Anyway, REALLY AWESOME chapter! I loved how everything tied together like that! Too bad Seto couldn't be taught the lesson he deserved, cuz death is too good for him, but in any case, I thought the ending was really fitting because a) Yami, though the lover of Ryou, wasn't the superhero the original maker of him made him as b) Malik got his revenge, sort of... and so did Bakura c) The three really, really tried and often almost succeeded, so it shows some determination, and etc. d) None of them are labelled as murderers now, because Seto didn't die under the hands of any of them, which would make one of them the hero, unfair, and cheesy, and to have Seto be killed by someone would be quite awkward literally. Somehow, Jounouchi *sob* and Marik *sob*'s deaths worked well with the story, I have to admit. It gives Malik a good reason to defy Seto, and to give Bakura a reason to fight back. GROUP WORK! It's often hard to write teamwork in climaxes, but you did it awesomely! You should write more stories like this! There are some spelling, conjugation and grammar mistakes, but I will overlook them cuz you must be writing REALLY fast, too fast to proofread carefully. Anyway, I can't write anymore for the review *sorry! TT.TT*...I have a biggo test....Please UPDATE FASTER THAN NOW!!!! LIKE, PER FIFTEEN MINUTES A CHAP!!!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 31, 2004 16:11 CST
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AAAIIIIIEEEEEEEE!!!!! OMG WAS THAT ME WISHING FOR SETO'S DEATH ALL ALONG?!?!?!?! OMG poor Seto! HE WAS FRIGGIN EATEN!!! ooooo geeezzz poor him! AWW... but at least everyone else is happy now... *sigh* well hurry up and finish the story! I know you can do it in time!!! :D
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Title: YEA!
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL YEA! i like that ending for seto! first he had his neck between the ropes.. then he got beat by bakura, Then malik.. then fell is ass into the nile, THEN! eaten by a croc.. HELL YEA! u are a friggin genius, pardon my vulgar language... but ur good.. like VERY good, lol cant wait to see what they're gunna du next.. STILL sad because of marik tho.. ;-; oh well, what a lovely story.. meeep ^^
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 31, 2004 16:00 CST
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OMG!!! I never thought i would hate Seto THIS MUCH!!! OMG Kill him off before I end up accidentally killing the real Seto!!! and OMG Yami is gonne die! waahhh!!!!wwaaaaahhh!*sobsob*wwaaahhh!! Ryou's gonna be so sad! ok i'm not gonna say much until I finish the next chap ok? but it was great!
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 14:32 CST
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sorry, that last sentance was supposed to say "a bit rushed. .."" not "i bit rushed...". just felt that i should clear that up.^_-
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Reviewed By: WeepingDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 14:29 CST
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hey, that last chapter had NO note at the end. . . so i like you again. and i like the ending. i bit rushed, but better than anything i could do. peace out!
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Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Deb xx On: March 31, 2004 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!!! SETOS DEAD!!!!!!!! *rejoices* OMG i nearly had a heart attack when Marik's and Jou's heads were on that plata thing. I dont know why people gave you a hard time about it tho. Gruesome and horrible as it was i thought it was a good twist to the plot of your storyline, and it was very shocking....which is great in stories!! I really love this story so much and i cant wait to see what happens now that Seto is gone and that they are now free from the palace...im kinda getting a Kura/Malik vibe...could that happen or is that just my wishful thinking? hehe! ^__^ Oh, and who's going to heal Bakura now the poor thing, will it be Shizuka maybe? I hope someone does coz i feel so sorry for him, poor baby! I love this story soo soo much, im sitting here waiting in anticipation for your next load of chapters!!! ^___^ Lotsa Luv and mucho Huggles Debs xxx
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Reviewed By: petite_angel1 On: March 31, 2004 10:48 CST
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Yay!! Seto is dead. I hate that bastard. >_< I just finished reading all the chapters you have up and I must admit that you're amazing! You have a great villin (Seto always makes a good one! ;) ), A great plot and a cool display of advents. Your small mistakes, such as the fork mean nothing to me. After all, no one is perfect!! The ending events on Chapter 20 were so well-thought. I kept thinking, is he going to die now?, but then Seto would somehow get out of his fate. Ohhh!!! I love this fic and I love you !!! ^_^
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Title: ding dong the asswhipes dead...or so we think.
Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 31, 2004 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o but is he really dead?!?! They need to make sure they find a body and burn it!! Die seto dieee! * hmmm and I usually Like Seto too.* Oh well. :)
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Reviewed By: divastarz On: March 31, 2004 08:38 CST
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So this is almost done? Ah man! I hope u win first place for this fic. Whattt happens if u do win first place anyways?
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Reviewed By: . On: March 31, 2004 05:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good! I liked it. TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 31, 2004 03:58 CST
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Eh...at last that bastard is gone. Keep it up! I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy ;)) On: March 31, 2004 02:33 CST
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Wow... I certainly didn't see that one coming... will you write an epilogue? Please? To show them happier? Not wuite happy, but happier? Please? *puppy-dog eyes* Pwease?
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