| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy ;)) On: March 24, 2004 01:34 CST
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*hugs Ryou* I reviewd 'Internal Scars', but then this one slowed down... so I have to keep on reviewing it too! Not that that's any problem! I love this story. I like Yami again, 'cos he's nice now! *hugs Yami* I like hugging today! *hugs Bakura* I like hugging any day, actually!
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 24, 2004 00:51 CST
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finally!! Yami standing up for them??? why do i feel all warm and fuzzy inside?? ^^ warm and fuzzy, tingly feeling in my chest!! cuuuuuute and what's Seto's gonna do now?? update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: March 23, 2004 23:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor malik and jounouchi. Atemu and his all commanding tone probably makes seto hate him more. wonder what he's going to do... feel kinda braindead for no reason. no updates mean i'll be stuck wondering.
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Title: Nya!
Reviewed By: Cijay On: March 23, 2004 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Next chappie!! I'm glad Malik's ok....*huggles him* I felt so bad last chappie when evil Seto-sama...well...you know! >_< I love ya Malik! KEEP WRITING!!!! I WANNA SEE THE REST!!!!! And Yami's being nice to Bakura! Yay!!! *happy dance* Update soon!
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 23, 2004 22:24 CST
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*pouts* I'm sorry, Malik. I can't help it, I tease those I like. *gives him back all of his stuff and a cotton pad saturated with strong makeup remover to take off the fake tattoo* I'll leave you alone... *trudges off, sniffling* I'll be good now. And if my reviews were going overboard, I apologize. Anyway, great chapter! I'm still feeling sorry for Malik, but I'm glad that Yami is showing his more human side. I'm still wondering what your plans with Seto are. Is he going to gain a more human side or will he remain a sick bastard? Will there be any of the female characters showing up? Or is this going to remain an all male story? I mean, you'd think the palace would at least have some females there. Pharaohs of Egypt were known to have harems weren't they? *shrugs* Oh well. I'm going to try to give you more constructive reviews instead of the general silliness with which I have identified myself with previously. I was trying something new and I guess it just didn't work out. Well, until the next chapter... ~EK
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Title: sfdsfds
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEEEEEA!!! nice chapter! free bakuchan indeed! and i knew that seto wasnt gonna change.. no way, lol. stupid protagonist/evil tall dude! neways! yay tanx for updating! but, i guess because of this fic, ill have to wait for baku's or malik's, oh well, they're worth the wait, trully ^^ BAKA RYOU STORY! lol.. jp, ryou ish a sweet widdle babie ^^.. iight, cya, and update sooon!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 21:49 CST
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yay! Bakura-Chan will be free soon, Seto is being scolded, and Malik is happy for Ryou, I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! GO BAKURA! WHY DIDN'T MALIK GIVE HIM ANY WATER!?! TabiWolf
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Title: i can't believe i forgot...
Reviewed By: EK On: March 22, 2004 12:10 CST
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I meant to ask you to bring in Mai if you were gonna bring in a chick next chapter. She's my fave out of all the gals. She's got spunk and guts, but up to you! That's just my request. *runs off still holding the god card, Malik's boxers, and a permanent marker* Gotta run! I uh...gave Malik a new tattoo... *peace sign*
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 21:02 CST
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it's ok al, I know how you feel
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Reviewed By: al On: March 21, 2004 20:58 CST
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i suppose a girl would be a change though you would need maybe a harem to even out the guys. Yami and Ryou made me feel bubbly. *blows bubbles* heh i remember how bad my pictures used to be. Made my eyes hurt.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 20:31 CST
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please give Malik a break, it ain't his angst story, though his is good too
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 21, 2004 20:05 CST
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*pokes head around corner and looks around* Ahh, safe! I thought I would never ditch Malik! *holds god card and rubs it against her cheek* Excellent chapter! I really enjoyed it, even though the end was somewhat tainted. I feel so sorry for Malik now! Damnit, Malik, Ryou and their yami's are my fave chars and you're tearing me up by putting them through all that torture!! *sniff* I can't complain about your update speed, though. You must have superman typing for you! Anyway, I better go before Malik catches up to me. *waves a pair of boxers* I managed to get a pair of his undies too! What can I say? I'm a Malik fangirl...now if I could just get my hands on his millennium rod... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 21, 2004 18:06 CST
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Yay! Bakura's alive but make sure he STAYS alive plz!And i have sympathy for poor Malik too! Die seto DIE! (EVen tho I wuv seto you make him so evil!)Also thanx for not putting in a teaser! Ok make sure the girl is not shizuka mai or anzu thanx!
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2004 11:22 CST
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Hey! Im back! Bakura I LOVE YOU AND YOU'RE THE BEST NO MATTER WHAT OTHER PEOPLE THINK!!! Malik's not gonna die is he? I dont want him to die!(starts crying) Did you read my fic? If you did tell me what you think of it! Well gotta go. MALIK ILL SAVE YOU!(turns into a superhero and flys off)
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