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Title: COOL
Reviewed By: DieTryin116 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it. Can't wait for the rest of it. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!! ^-^
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Title: so sad
Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 18, 2004 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I think that was the best CHPT. so far!! keep it up! I'll keep reading! :)
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 18, 2004 11:50 CST
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ok thats better if Yami had done anymore I woud've hunted him down and killed him PERSONALLY! awww.....don't cry Ryou we all luv ya!By the way Seto is too evil!!!!T_T AND SAVE BAKURA!!!!!!!WE ALL LUV BAKURA TOOOO!!!
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Reviewed By: Fallens Lovin Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 07:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is all out balling* Please its just so sad write soon make it all better and kill that good for nothin looly jackass perterbed Seto *gets all stary eyed* oh put me iin and let me torture or better yet Fallin Dark Angel shes a real nut job and dam good at what she does she actally has a book going how to torture geez but its just so poor poor Bakare write soon orill sick Fallin dark Angel shes good at hunting torture and seduction oddly enough
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Reviewed By: Fallin Dark Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 07:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so sad *looks all teareyed* continue soon why why Poor Bakare and Ryou oh the horrer Write soon please or ill put my hunting skills to use
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Reviewed By: Ryou-Bakura1 On: March 18, 2004 00:59 CST
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Don't worry about what otehr people say, i don't personally ask for reviews myself but i know how much modivation you get when people do review for your fics so it's understandable, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 17, 2004 23:35 CST
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Hey! I put the j/k at the end of that review! -.- My wackiness is not appreciated... *sniff* Fine, I'll be a plain old reviewer with no spark of creativity...here I go: Great job! Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Starroar On: March 17, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely. I'm truly enjoying your story and that's pretty good coming from me. Normally, I'll be a very irritating person and point out every fault in the story. However, your story is excellent! Good plot, follow up and whatnot. Now I don't mean to sound pushy or threatning but if you don't get another chapter up before my march break draws it's end, then I will be forced to FedEx myself to your dorrstep along with a two ton sledgehammer. SR
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 17, 2004 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
whhheee!! eee heeee you put him with Jounouchi!!! wwaahhhh poor bakura!!He should eat the guards! It would profit him a lot!
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 21:19 CST
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seriously, give Ryou a break! PLEASE! *gives chibi eyes*
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: March 17, 2004 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
WWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!I SAID TO KILL THE PHARAOH NOT RYOU!!!WWAAAAA!!!WWWWAAAAHHH!!!*HUGGLYHUGGLYHUGGLYHUGGLYHUGGLIEESSS* oh well on to the next chappie...remember...:KILL THE PHARAOH
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 17, 2004 21:03 CST
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Pairing a surprise....Malik's secret lover....I dunno... I guessed that, but I think think I was prepared for it.....It's gotta be the best pairing in any case here...And poor Bakura! He's so starved, poor guy! How could you do that! Not even he deserves that! EVerybody's evil! Let's go drop some nukes here! *yawn* Oh, um sorry. Tired. Well! I;ll finish off here: I really hoe you continue quickly!!!
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Reviewed By: roppy3 On: March 17, 2004 21:02 CST
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WWWAAAHHHH!!!! *huggles imaginary ryou plushie*(hey thats the closest i can get!!!) poor ryou!aaw....for ra's sake kill the stupid pharaoh!! anyway...hmmm malik's secret lover should be jounouchi! :D
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 17, 2004 20:47 CST
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I don't have a choice in voting for Malik's lover yet, do I? I'll read on, then see if I can still vote. In the meanwhile, I think it's pretty good! Nothing happened much here, but at least we understand quite a bit more! I was SOOO freaked out at realizing Jounouchi was a spelled healer of a sort! So I'm not in touch with facts, but I just can't imagine that! LOL! Well, onto the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 17, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gleep, that's a funny word, gleep. GLEEP! Oh, if it's yours, I wont take it. I know how we TREASURE our words. Anyways, good job, poor Bakura and poor Ryou, but Ryou should forgive him, and I think he will. Sorry about putting you off raw meat. I see, you DID pair Malik with Jono, it's becoming quite popular now. Good luck with the rest of your story!
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