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Reviewed By: Katie_the_saru On: March 16, 2004 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MUST HAVE MORE FIC!!!
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Title: Third Review! I think...
Reviewed By: Casey K (lazy! ;) ) On: March 16, 2004 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait until the next chapter! Please hurry up *gives Ryou a big hug, and slaps Yami* That was for being so damn mean!
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 16, 2004 01:30 CST
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>.< Poor Ryou! *flays Yami and then throws him into a flaming inferno of white hot flame* Die you stupid pharaoh! I usually like Yami, but damn...you make him so hateable!! *hugs Ryou* Down with the arrogant rapist pharaoh and his sadistic priest boyfriend! Have mercy on poor Ryou!! I will be most displeased if he doesn't get a break soon. Update asap!! *tends to Ryou's wounds and throws darts at a picture of Yami*
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 16, 2004 00:28 CST
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awwwww.....poor ryou!! poor Bakura!!! poor Malik!! poor Marik!!!! poor EVERYONE!!!! such a sad chappie!!! good thing they all got out (partially) fine. update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: March 15, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sniffle. my poor Ryou!! WAAAHHH!! You are a very talented writer! I liked this story alot!! Please e-mail me at goku_the_saru@yahoo.com when you update, so I can read it. :)
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat/DD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Just so you know I love ALL Yugioh characters. ^_^ Even Tea... *random people throw moldy tomatoes* AAAAHHHHHH!!!! But I really want Bakura to get something good out of this because well... YOUR A FIEND!!! Ugh, poor Ba-ku-chan... Anyway... PLEASE INCREASE CHAPTER LENGHT! 4000+ words are fine but... 2000+? -_- *sigh* Its not a must. Wow, I yell alot. Actually its just at you, but its not your fault. ^_^ I like the story. I just hope you won't end this with Bakuchan gutted alive until he dies. As for the Malik pairing... make it Tristan! *random people throw dirty gym socks* I admit it! I love EVERYONE in Yugioh! Well mostly everyone...
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Reviewed By: EK On: March 14, 2004 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad story really. I'm thinking since most of the main male characters are in yaoi pairings that Malik should have a refreshing hetero pairing just to throw in a bit of spice to the story. I'd like to see him with a past version of Serenity or Mai. I frankly can't picture him with anyone but Yami Bakura if it's yaoi. But that's personal preference I suppose. So really...Serenity or Mai or some other girl would be a refreshing surprise.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 20:16 CST
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I feel so sad for ryou! *sobs*
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 14, 2004 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay update!!!!! i love this fic!! write more plz!!! oh yeah, i don't have yahoo, but i have msn, so if you want, i'll just email you in the meantime wonderful fic, continue!!!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat/ Dirty D On: March 13, 2004 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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What are you talking about big chapters? >_< I want bigger! LOL Yeah right, like the world evolves around me. I'm not that naive, unlike some stupid Pharaoh. I like what you've done with the story. The only thing I really don't like is the torture Bakura is going through, but then again, nobody is evil enough to like it are they? Yami being evil I think is right. Most Pharaohs believe themselves to be desendents of Gods (I think everyone in Egypt did, but enough about history class) so you making him as such is a thumbs up. I'm hoping for a RyouxSeto fluff but hey, either way is good. Just tell me Bakura gets a happy ending! Kill everyone else but do something else for Bakura by the end! He went through 9 months of torturous torture! Don't be evil! SAVE YAMI BAKURA!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: March 13, 2004 11:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here, I'm gonna give Bakura a dictionary, he needs to know what he eats. The moisture thing was good! Very smart, I like it. Well, now Ryou knows the way down there, POOR RYOU!! I HATE PHAROAH POIRCUPINE HEAD!! He's being a REAL ass! I can't wait to see the look on Marik's face! YAY! You're right, NOBODY'S PERFECT! Sorry, gotta give you a nine, I STILL LOVE YOU THOUGH!! Stupid, misspelled "had". I HATE that word! I ALWAYS get it wrong!
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Title: afsdfd
Reviewed By: Deme too lazy to login in On: March 11, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. i like this story... ^^ i feel bad for baku, wanted to cry ;-; and poor marik and malik too.. MEAN, lol.. update sooon. i wanna read more ^^
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 19:37 CST
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Ok, that scene was INTENSE! Lol, what really got me was how Ryou has a fetish for marshmallows! And Bakura: What a 'maggots'? Funny guy! Well, with the story, I feel really sorry for Bakura. The pair up with Bakura/Marik is good one! What about Malik! You hafta do something with him! And Yami? guilty? Yeah right!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 19:27 CST
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LOL! I love that little bit: Bakura--are you my conscience? BWAHAHA!!! Funny guy! Wow, Ryou met Bakura! This is getting interesting! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: Chokkoholic On: March 11, 2004 19:16 CST
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Well, look at that! Marik and Malik are here too! That's great! Aw, you mean Bakura SPLIT HIS HEAD OPEN? Ouch! Well, anyway, great job! You're tying this up, starting things well, you're doing great! Keep going!
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