| "Royalty" Reviews/Comments [ 269 ] |
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Reviewed By: thedevilscrazychild_13 On: April 01, 2004 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great style, transitions, everything else of whats in writing * whatever I cant remember from Language Arts class...* Great fic, and I hope u keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: April 01, 2004 20:35 CST
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yesyesyes living in royalty! Oooooh everyone's so happy! Hee! Great story! Hope you win!
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: April 01, 2004 20:19 CST
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OMG THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER? WWWHHHHAAAATT???? IMPOSSEEEBLE! sorry, I know i'm supposed to review AFTER i read the story....excuse me now i'll finish reading...
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Reviewed By: Roppy3 On: April 01, 2004 20:14 CST
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OOMMMGGG!!! You know when you get that thing in your throat before you cry? Well I got that ! I was so sad when they said the prayers...awww...Ok i hafta go read the next chappie now!!!
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Title: Incredible....
Reviewed By: CiJay On: April 01, 2004 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely incredible. I loved it! It's DEFINATELY on my top 3 list! *Smiles* It's so cute! Malik and Bakura, Yami and Ryou....I just....loved it! You aren't allowed to EVER stop writing!!! You had me crying during the whole funeral deal....it was so sad! But it was well balanced out by humor and more than enough lovin'! I was so happy for everyone at the end. Well done! It was nice to have a happy ending for everyone....."truly living in Royalty", indeed! *applauds*
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Reviewed By: al On: April 01, 2004 16:18 CST
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aww. i had to go take a shower didn't I. grr I missed the update. who cares if you don't win.. many.. but you always have support anyway.
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Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 16:02 CST
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ITS OVER!!!! AAAHHH I LUFF jOo.. I DUN WANNA LET GO! Marik's death was too much to bear anyway ;-; i was crying in chappie 22 ;-;
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Deme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeez.. this HAS to be the absolute most BEAUTIFUL fic i have EVER read ;-; .. it was sad, yet so damn beautiful... im sorry to see its end tho, but as they say, all good things must come to and end.. u have talent ^^ ... i really hope u win the contest, you deserve it..! update ur other fics??
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Reviewed By: divastarz On: April 01, 2004 15:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT WAS SO SAD! Well I hope u win the contest. BUT I CANT BELEIVE ITS OVER!(sobs) Ah well. Finish ur other fic soon, unless u decided not to do it any more. Well c-ya!
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: April 01, 2004 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wonderful!!!!!!!!I LOVE IT!^_^
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Title: so sad it ended
Reviewed By: katie_the_saru On: April 01, 2004 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I-It's over!??! NOOOOO! *sob* Wow that was such a great fic! I hope you make another one just as great!
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Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 05:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the ending, but I still didn't like the way Jono and Marik were killed off... TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: al On: April 01, 2004 00:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i miss a couple of days and BAM! practically the whole story's there. hahaha! seto got eaten by a crocodile! kinda reminds me of a bug's life. shrug.
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Reviewed By: Chika (aka Relinquished) On: March 31, 2004 20:16 CST
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NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO!!!!!!! YOU KILLED SETO-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ARGH!!!!!!!!!!! All right peeps *breathes deeply* the person who died wasn't Seto. It was me. Just remember, it was ME and NOT Seto. He's still alive and well, he's just got amnesia and he's really nice. remember that peeps!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: March 31, 2004 19:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your ficcie!!!!I think it's wonderful!And will there be anymore??? Haw haw! Seto was eaten by a croc!XD
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