| "When We First Met" Reviews/Comments [ 334 ] |
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Reviewed By: freddyrick_bobertzen On: April 19, 2004 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a great fic! It's a good story line but theres just one thing about it. You should use other words than said. It gets kind of boring with just he said, she said, that guy said that. Ya know? You should try to use other words like mumbled or grumbled or smirked or stuff like that. Sorry but it's just some constructive critisism. Great plot and story line though. Besides what I said I LOVE the story! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 22:29 CDT
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That was good chapter but I think you got the two bad guys confused in the fight scene. Inuyasha killed the one named Eri and was about to fight the one named Taka and you were writing Eri's name in Taka's place so it got confusing. When do we get to the fluff??? I mean Kagome and Inuyasha should at least hug or hold hands now that they're mated. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 20:43 CDT
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this is a great chapter please update soon
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:55 CDT
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great chapter, InuYasha and Kagome are so cute in this chapter, what with the never wanting to let so and stuff...aww!!! lol
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 18, 2004 18:30 CDT
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Excellent chapter as always! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 17:26 CDT
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Great chapter. I'm glad Kagome is healing from that fight earlier. I thought you made a mistake earlier, with spelling Taka... I thought you meant baka the first time I read it. XD Haha, err, that was kinda odd. ^^ Anyway, update soon! :D
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Reviewed By: inu fan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2004 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really really good. so... give me more.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: April 14, 2004 17:39 CDT
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Sorry for not reviewing before, excellent story so far, have enjoyed it very much! Looking forwards to seing what is going to happen next between those two! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this chappie was great! i can't wait till you update! I will go and read the rest of the stories you've updated! i love them all! they make me giggle happy evilness. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 23:01 CDT
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She let him mark her again!!!!!! Kouga is so dense!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:38 CDT
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Good chapter, but I noticed a few mistakes. All I have to say... gotta make it short anyway. Update soon :)
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Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 18:43 CDT
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i really really do love this story. I'm so happy she let him mark her ^__^. Inu and Kagome should go to the festival. if nothing else it would be intersting, a demon at a home thing? oooooo, i hope you update again.
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 18:23 CDT
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this is good update again soon please
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Title: Please Write More
Reviewed By: Kodama_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE PLEASE
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Title: stupid MM
Reviewed By: Orb [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2004 14:58 CDT
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This was a funny chapter. Poor Miroku lol. I hate to say it but yea girl you DO need a break. Just take care of yourself, you can't get better if your dont relax :
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