| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: June 10, 2004 15:17 CDT
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Oh.... poor Seto. He doesn't deserve this... especially with his past. Do you know what, though? I've just been listening to Evanescence...they seem to fit this story a lot! It's quite odd... I'm thinking about making a fiction with Joey and Seto, based on 'Tourniquet'... If you listen to it, tell me what you think about it! Byeee
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: June 07, 2004 23:27 CDT
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Ooh, interesting. I do wonder. Yami was so mean. I wonder what else will happen. Till next time. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: June 07, 2004 20:17 CDT
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Yay! Aten progresses! And he can read a little bit more! Whoot whoot! *kicks Yami down for dissing the little monkey* Aten rocks the party! ...Finding your body. Some pretty scary stuff! I wonder if Seto's past will hit him more eventually in this story...? Can a scence be expected with her baby and Seto sees it and yeah? or anywho...chapter was cool, aria was found *does happy dance*
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: June 07, 2004 11:10 CDT
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Well, that's a wierd sentence. Ha. Poor yamis and their heartbroken hikaris. Are Aria and Aten doin the connection thing again with the fever? Sorry this is short, gotta go!
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Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe (not logged in) On: June 06, 2004 17:30 CDT
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Wow. Yami is acting like a cold hearted bastard! His is gonna change, right? Yugi doesn't deserve such treatment. Now that Marik and Bakura found their bones, will it be used as a way to stop the virus? It shud. Like, they could create hollow versions of themselves and tranfer the virus to the empty shells and have them disintegrate. Just a thought. This chapter was really good! How do you get to update so often??! Do the ideas just pop into your head and you instantly write them down?! I could never update so often! Keep up the great work.
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Title: ooo
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I be freaking out a little bit more then that if I found my old body. nice chapter
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Title: Weird
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 16:39 CDT
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That's be odd! "La la la la la, I'm just searching for a cure! Oh this feels familiar! LOOK! It's my body!!" *does a macabre dance with a skeleton*
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: June 06, 2004 16:26 CDT
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Oh... poor everyone... Aten for his heart and speech problems. Seto and Aria for they're past to soon be remembered. Joey for his... uh... he'll miss Aten and Aria if anything happens to them... Poor Yuugi for having to put up with Yami as he was pharoah.. For Ryou and Malik to think of losing they're husbands and Yamis.. And to All the Yamis themselves, for the horrible sickness placed upon them.. To everyone else's problems.. Poor poor everyone.. I just hope Yami doesn't do anything to rash towards Yuugi.. like.. bad stuff(rape)
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Title: Tari Helyanwe
Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 23:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got plushies!!! *hugs her plushies* Oh thank you!! I went to your website, which is cool btw, and read 'Shadows of the past'. It's realy interesting how Aria used to talk the way Aten does now, and Aten spoke perfectly. And how Yami used to be disgusted by the female body and Seto had a herem of women!! It all got switched around!! That's so cool!! You are a very talented writer and creative too! Everything make more sense now that I've read that fic. Btw, the pic w/bakura and marik, does marik had cat ears and a tail or is it just me??! Anticipating the next update!! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Poor Aria... to lose a firstborn... to lose a child at all, and so young, poor dear. Makalani... it's cool that Aria, even as a child hardly older than the son she lost in her last life, still desires that they be careful with his body... Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 10:57 CDT
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Meh hehe! The beginning of that chapter was so funny! Especially when Arita "wished Mommy could have another baby, and ask would him when she got home" and that she was sure "he wouldn't mind"! I also like her word "neaties!" Hehe... children don't know what they're saying until it's too late! Loved it! Aria rocks!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 10:57 CDT
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Meh hehe! The beginning of that chapter was so funny! Especially when Arita "wished Mommy could have another baby, and ask would him when she got home" and that she was sure "he wouldn't mind"! I also like her word "neaties!" Hehe... children don't know what they're saying until it's too late! Loved it! Aria rocks!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 10:56 CDT
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Meh hehe! The beginning of that chapter was so funny! Especially when Arita "wished Mommy could have another baby, and ask would him when she got home" and that she was sure "he wouldn't mind"! I also like her word "neaties!" Hehe... children don't know what they're saying until it's too late! Loved it! Aria rocks!
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Reviewed By: Crazy-kins [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 10:55 CDT
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Meh hehe! The beginning of that chapter was so funny! Especially when Arita "wished Mommy could have another baby, and ask would him when she got home" and that she was sure "he wouldn't mind"! I also like her word "neaties!" Hehe... children don't know what they're saying until it's too late! Loved it! Aria rocks!
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Reviewed By: Valea On: June 05, 2004 01:43 CDT
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Yay! Aria is comign back home and its so cute its like she rememers her past but then not and yay. And now the almighty couple that was suposed to never have anything have to them..now Yami and Yugi fall...eep! But happier subjects! ARIA'S COMING HOME! WHOOT WHOOT! yeah!!! And Aten likes Malik again *waves happy face flag* yay!
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