| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 18:15 CDT
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Hmmm... Tristan/Otogi lemon sounds good to me! The Aria gore was very interesting. Just goes to show us she's DEFINITELY Bakura's daughter, bloodlust and all! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 28, 2004 14:38 CDT
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I would love to see a TristenxOtogi lemon. Hope to see the update next week. Will Aria be okay? Hope so.
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Reviewed By: Lisa b On: May 28, 2004 14:18 CDT
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I love your stories. especially Aria! I like frilly pink aprons!!!!!!
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Title: Yayness!
Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 12:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! This is great! I love this chapter!!! *squishes Aten and Aria* A Tristan/Otogi lemon would be nice... but then again, I wouldn't say no to any lemon! =^_^=
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Title: Tari Helyanwe
Reviewed By: Tari Helyanwe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 11:42 CDT
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great chapter!! I love the violence!! so...cool! I would LOVE to see an Tristian/Otogi lemon!! who wouldn't?? how in the WORLD will aria find her way back home?? is Isis in Egypt?? hope she finids her way home. and when will Diane suffer?! oh, btw, u spelled my name wrong the last time. I understand if you were in a hurry. I'm not mad or anything, so don't worry...I won't go yami on ya! ^_^
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Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 01:10 CDT
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Poor Ryou... everything is falling in around him at once. Aten is in the hospital, poor kid. And Aria... She can take care of herself. I'm glad that Aria has a companion, though. She seems to need the puppy. It's a good thing Seto is so understanding in this time of need for Ryou. The little kid- Jamien (?) seems to be a little darling. Will Seto find out about him later? Until next time! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in) On: May 26, 2004 23:23 CDT
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It's getting more intriguing by the ch. Lots of drama. Poor Aria, ATen, and Ryou. That Davis guy deserved what he got. Hopefully, they'll find a cure to the yami virus. Bakura is really getting out of hand. Gtg. Till next time. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Valea On: May 26, 2004 22:30 CDT
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I tell you, uncontraolble stuff can really start to get to ya. I wonder if Isis will find Aria! And then Aria will escape and find the remains of her father! and thats kinda wrong and im geting to far ahead of myself...*gives Hayden chips* eat to your hearts content man and dont let anyone tell you otherwise.*nods* ARIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: May 26, 2004 13:17 CDT
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Awwwwww, poor Bakura. I hope Aria if returned soon. But hey, what's a story with out that tastful angst! Keep it up, Bakurasgirl!
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 22:21 CDT
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Poor Ryou, a mother who just doesnt know what to do *sighs* but at least that was a perfect meomtn towards the end, Aria and Aten were keeping each other company kinda. *gets a baseball bat* they betta not get Aten! thats what you get! you scare people and then Unkie seto comes to get you! humph!!! yeah! LET ATEN OUT OF THE HOSTIPAL! DON'T LET THE BOOGIE MAN GET HIM!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: May 24, 2004 21:16 CDT
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I just love the Yami and Hikari symbolism, Aten and Aria, beautiful. The song brought tears to my eyes. Poor Ryou, so lost, ad confused. Is Ryou going back home? I doubt it. It's so hard to wait pateintly.
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: May 24, 2004 09:49 CDT
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Awwww, what a cute little thing, Aten is. I hope Aten and Aria are re united soon!
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl (not logged in) On: May 23, 2004 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lots of drama here. I loved it. Bakura and Marik are definely having some effects from the virus and it's making Bakura act weird. Poor Aria, she seems to be a bit sick too. Till next time. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 21:23 CDT
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*rolls over* hmm, the wonders and the pains of being twins and having that tellapthic thing going on. dude what is up with these werid mood swings from the aymi virus, this cannot be good...not good at all...i wonder if ryou relizes thats whats it...o.o;; eep! SAVE ARIA! don't let her die! ..if only they knew aten would be of no use to them..*shakes head*
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: May 22, 2004 12:16 CDT
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Oh, tell you'rewife for me, I hope she feels better! And it's just a hunch. but... is Aten feeling what Aria's feeling, and vise versa? I mean.. .Aten was never touched in the arm, and Aria got a shot there, andAten can move,but Aria cannot...You don't have to tell me, I'm just guessing.
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