| "The Yami Virus" Reviews/Comments [ 379 ] |
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 17:06 CDT
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Short...so...short... *dies* *squishes the kiddies* Grr... evil Charlie! Must...destroy!!
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Reviewed By: Sakiyama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 16:32 CDT
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Aw, it's over?! That was such a great fic!! I can't believe they actually let Charlie out of prison. Those people must be really stupid. I hope they don't target Aten and Aria!!! That would really suck, but I guess I have to wait! I bet the sequel is going to be awesome. I love your writing so much! Can't wait for the sequel. Don't stop writing!!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
once again a lovely story.I love to read your stories. can't wait for the next story. Great ending
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 09:22 CDT
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Hah! How funny. I read the reviews and my son's b-day is 2 days before the kids!! Too cute! Sorry bastards anyways. Just try to hurt them, you will all get yours in the end and the Nightmare Dragon will eat you all for dinner!!! I can't wait till Wednesday!!! *does Happy dance* Love ya too!! *squishies*
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Reviewed By: Seto's girl16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 07:04 CDT
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Alright! Knock a point up for Aria and Bakura! Is Eric going to end up like that too? And that scene between Robbie and Aten was so cute! I was laughing so hard when chibi Marik came down that stairs! lol, but can you blame Marik for acting the way he did? And for your idea of putting Yugi with Odion? That sounds pretty interesting, but, if Yugi is the same size in the story as he is in the show, there's going to be quite a difference in height. And i also want to add a point for Bakura too "father-daughter bonding" he calls it....lol, and that's definitly what it is. Aria is learning the tricks of the trade. And one more question, what did the helpless child mean when he said that Robbie will inhabit the shadow realm? Will Robbie have millenium powers or something? I was a little confused.
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Reviewed By: Kura Magician Girl On: September 06, 2004 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww, so cute, chibi Marik and chibi Seto. *huggles Aten and Aria* hehe. ^_^ That was so fun. Except when Robbie and Aten got hurt. Poor them. But I'm glad those evil bullies got what they deserved from Aria and Bakura. Mwahahahahaha! But of course it's never enough. *grins* lol. I still can't believe Charlie gets released, those idiots in parole, how could they do that. The end was so kawaii, Aten and Robbie. hehe. *more huggles* ^_^ Can't wait till next ch. Till next time. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Valea On: September 05, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Yay! Dude I swear Aria won't be able to do anything until she's like 40 or something that bit with Umi was priceless like it was just practiced! And Im hella happy! Jason and Eric are all punished! But you can never punish them enough *laughs evilliy* hehe! But just my favorite part of this was the end, with Robbie and Aten cuddling and all their new feelings because its getting around that time for them and its so cute!!!! Cant wait to see more of where that came from! hehe! Thyre the best in the world! And yeah I finally watched my refcorded episodes of YGO the other day and I was like drooling and rememebered that you said Malik took off his shirt and it was the best thing in the world.
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Reviewed By: Broken Time On: September 05, 2004 17:57 CDT
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W00t, Jason and Eric finally get what they deserve.. I cannot believe that some bullie can be a ruthless as they are... Why, I do not know. I can only pray my baby doesn't turn out that way
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Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: September 05, 2004 17:26 CDT
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You know, not many people have reasons for their original characters to have specific birthdays or a specific Zodiac Sign. I really want to know, because that is a very interesting thing, and so original! Anyway, this chapter was fun. I've always loved halloween! I'm afraid to say I laughed when Aria and Bakura sent Eric's brother to the Shadow Realm. The end was really cute too! I loved it! I'm sorta surprised at the idiocy of the Parole Board, though. How can they say that Charlie deserves respect? I would have let him rot in prison. But anyway, I shall be back next chapter! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: September 05, 2004 17:22 CDT
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You know, not many people have reasons for their original characters to have specific birthdays or a specific Zodiac Sign. I really want to know, because that is a very interesting thing, and so original! Anyway, this chapter was fun. I've always loved halloween! I'm afraid to say I laughed when Aria and Bakura sent Eric's brother to the Shadow Realm. The end was really cute too! I loved it! I'm sorta surprised at the idiocy of the Parole Board, though. How can they say that Charlie deserves respect? I would have let him rot in prison. But anyway, I shall be back next chapter! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: September 05, 2004 17:21 CDT
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You know, not many people have reasons for their original characters to have specific birthdays or a specific Zodiac Sign. I really want to know, because that is a very interesting thing, and so original! Anyway, this chapter was fun. I've always loved halloween! I'm afraid to say I laughed when Aria and Bakura sent Eric's brother to the Shadow Realm. The end was really cute too! I loved it! I'm sorta surprised at the idiocy of the Parole Board, though. How can they say that Charlie deserves respect? I would have let him rot in prison. But anyway, I shall be back next chapter! Bye!
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Title: I'm too lazy to log in... ^_^
Reviewed By: Seto lover and Bakurasgirl worshiper On: September 05, 2004 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have a good connection.. bah.. Can't really review or anything.. *ish hoping this works* Anyway, I Laughed, SO HARD when Baku was telling Umi what not to do.. No touchy.. HA!!! ^_^ Poor Aten though... and Robbie... Yeah for one less ebil dude!!! ^_^ Would that chocolate stil hurt Aten later? Hope not.. :/ Poor lil' Chibi... SO CUTE!! *squishes Aria and Aten* I absolutly ADORE the Seto and Aria pairing.. even though they haven't done anything and Seto's scared of girls.. Heehee... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lady Elfskye [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 12:07 CDT
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Oh, my!! Yep, that was one amazing chappie. Hmm, so the Decayed Commander is Robbie's guardian, huh? Sweet! Totally rockin!! The finale with Aria and Jason's brother was kickin! GO CHIBI BAKURA!! Wonderful!! Simply wonderful!! Take care!!
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Reviewed By: Mariku182 On: September 05, 2004 09:50 CDT
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*Laughing* Oh my God!!! This was hilarious!!! *cough* Stupid cold... anyways... GREAT CHAPTER!!! I loved the thing with Kaiba, Poor Seto-poo, as Devil herself A.k.a. Anzu would say. It was so cuute the scene betwen Robbie and Aten!!! B.T.W. Can you tell me how old each one of the characters,including chibis, are? I'm lost... That's what I get for reading this before the other stories... oh well... Good story and I hope youupdate soon!!!! ~Ja~ne!!!~
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Reviewed By: I_Is_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 09:17 CDT
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Must...kill...Charlie! Must...murder...Eric & Jason! Must...squish...Aten and Robbie
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