| "Movie House Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 339 ] |
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Reviewed By: linz On: February 22, 2005 01:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...no offence, but why are the movie posters so important? maybe i'm just slow and i don't get it. oh by the way, thank you for updating! i loved this chapter! it totally rocked! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zrofyre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 00:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another delightful chapter! I especially like the scene b/n Kagome and her mother, that was just too great!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: cindygirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! another wonderful chapter! well worth the wait. Can't wait until you update again. I just love this story. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what's going to happen to Naraku. ^o^
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Reviewed By: Netiri On: February 21, 2005 20:35 EST
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^^ very nice. things are picking up pretty quickly now and i can't wait to see what happens! update soon! ~*~Netiri~*~
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Reviewed By: leelu821 (not signed in) On: February 21, 2005 20:23 EST
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The poster-napper was....ME! MWAHAHAHA! LOL I wish it were me. I love movie posters. Wish I could have all the cool ones. I can't believe InuYasha did that right in front of Kagome's house...and for her mom to see?? HAHA! I think I'd like myself in my room for all eternity. LOL Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: February 21, 2005 20:17 EST
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Nothing much to say, except great chapter, as always.
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Title: yay for updates!!!
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 21, 2005 20:05 EST
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wow...new venues for teh story to take. man, you really can nail these emotions on the head. somehow i knew that the two lovers in the car didn't manage to take the few necessary seconds to close the door. Oi!! man i could just about feel the absolute mortification Kagome went under with her mother. excellent job on conveying that scene without leaving out one detail. awsome!!! and as for ::cough cough:: the lawyer's ::cough::appearence....all i got to say is that I love fluffy. Great update to the story and can't wait to see what else comes this way!!!
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Title: I'm impressed...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: February 21, 2005 18:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your Alternate Universe and how you have incorporated the characters is quite skillfull and unique. You have managed to create a 'gritty' feel to the story as it unfolds. The base characteristics of the 'players' and how they have evolved into the people they are now with all the past influences is a masterpiece in the making. InuYasha's character alone, with more than one lifetime-worth of loneliness combined with natural curiosity that created his many vices and 'fetishes' that he has used to keep boredom at bay, and his facination with the cinema makes for a very colorful character...and believable. I will continue to follow this story. --- Great story so far!!
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Title: Just wanted to know
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: February 14, 2005 10:16 EST
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Just wanted to know if I would be wrong or sound too pushy in asking for an update. If I am consider this a review tell you how wonderful you are and how adoring I am of you. If the kissing up doesn't work...I bake you brownies! *bat eyelashes* Okay so that's more sucking up, I can help it. I like the story, but hey your busy. Wait *smiles* would threatening work? You know me tell you to do something or else? *sighs* Didn't think so. Well I guess I'll just have to wait like the other junkies for the next hit. Love MN
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: February 13, 2005 20:09 EST
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ahahhaha. funny. heh. man. at least they finally did it. and out in the woods too. and miroku calling them in the middle of it all. funny junk..
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Title: holy crap
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: February 12, 2005 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy crap and a whole lot more! oh my dear sweet Kami! by far, that has had to be the BEST lemon i have ever read before in my entire life! amazing...simply amazing. i have so much i want to add but i can't formulate it in my mind!! i have never read anythign that was filled with such a raw passion between two people. you brought it toghether so perfectly that it was a near work of literary genius. amazing. i wish i could say more but i swear to god, all the words are running together! this story has astounded me since day one and it just keep getting better! this is one of the best AU fics i have ever read!!
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Reviewed By: Leni_ara On: February 09, 2005 15:54 EST
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The third thing turned on in the room should never ever be the cellphone. Annoying little fu*kers. And 'break out'? 'skin against skin'? 'can't exactly see'? Wow, they're having a lot of fun there, aren't they? It's amazing that after that she'll still go back to her house (didn't IY say something about it being perfect if she slept in his bed?) I must say, too, I've read lots of high-rated scenes, but this one must be one of the 20 best I've ever come across. Not cheesy, really hot and detailed enough but not TOO detailed. Me likes. I also loved those scene with Mrs. Higurashi. You write her very well and her conversation with Inuyasha always manage to surprise me. Looking forward to the next chapter. K&S Leni
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, numisma, it's almost one o'clock and I told you I'd finish all 26 chapters. Curse you for keeping me up with this awesome story. I LOVE IT! Especially that part about the underage thing, classic! And that last chapter was very steamy. I thoroughly enjoyed how you drew the smut out. Good work. I'll be looking for your next updated! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 02:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I just laughed my ass of that was funny as hell great job with the storyand I dont think they should have patrinized you about when the lemon was coming up still funny as hell! Luv ya ~Randi~
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme. On: January 24, 2005 19:19 EST
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The new edited lemon seems better. Great work, as always. :D
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